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<blockquote data-quote="stevew" data-source="post: 60540" data-attributes="member: 130">I made a mistake.&nbsp; The first posting was two hours that should have been Episodes 1 and 2. Then the next would have been 3. Episode 4: As Time Goes ByWith the dramatic change with Bobby&#039;s death I&#039;d use a tool seldom used in drama but often in sitcoms, the flash back episode.&nbsp; I&#039;d start with Miss Ellie, Sue Ellen, Donna and Lucy all sitting around the back porch one evening reminiscing and use flash backs throughout.&nbsp; Then for a second hour I&#039;d show the pilot to Lucy&#039;s new spin off show on which Miss Ellie and Clayton guest star.&nbsp; The following week this Spin off should have fit in Dallas&#039;s time slot and the fit into its regular time slot - just an idea.&nbsp; Episode 5: The Ewing and Barnes Feud Part 2 On a private jet Kathryn says to Jeremy, &quot;I&#039;m sure the Ewing&#039;s though their Feud with the Barnes was rather fun.&nbsp; And you and JR had your moments, but when I&#039;m done with them, I&#039;ll have Ewing Oil and South Fork and JR in prison.&nbsp; And my brother as broken as Digger Barnes.&quot;&nbsp; &quot;Who are these people we&#039;re meeting?&quot;&quot;Associates of my father&#039;s.&nbsp; After Riyadh we&#039;ll meet Cliff in Al-Ain.&nbsp; He might hate me, but he needs my money too much right now.&nbsp; JR&#039;s sent Pam on to Switzerland with Christopher.&nbsp; I&#039;ve got some people watching him.&nbsp; If need be they&#039;ll grab him and bring him back to Texas.&nbsp; Everything&#039;s coming along just fine.&nbsp; This took me use to plan.&nbsp; And it&#039;s going to be so worth it.&quot;&quot;Revenge.&quot;&quot;Reckoning.&quot;&quot;I yet to understand why kill Bobby?&quot;&quot;I didn&#039;t intend to.&nbsp; I&#039;d gone to Pam&#039;s to tell her I had my father&#039;s will and that what she and Cliff had belonged to me.&nbsp; Scare her you know.&nbsp; Then I saw her with Bobby.&nbsp; I hate that self righteous bastard.&nbsp; But the smug look on her face.&nbsp; I just floored it.&quot;&quot;You tried to kill Pam?&quot;&quot;She and Cliff took everything that belonged to me.&nbsp; And then she thought she was going to get Bobby back.&nbsp; I just saw red.&nbsp; When I came to in the hospital I made a phone call and got out of there.&quot;&quot;I see.&nbsp; What I have to know is that you&#039;re ok now.&nbsp; We can&#039;t afford anymore of those momentary lapses in judgement.&quot;&nbsp; &quot;We?&nbsp; You can&#039;t afford your next meal.&nbsp; I on the other hand can afford anything I want.&nbsp; Our marriage merely ties us together against our common enemies.&nbsp; The prenup&nbsp; keeps you from over stepping your place.&quot;&nbsp; Sue Ellen sits in the living room shaking when Miss Ellie comes in. &quot;Oh my dear. What&#039;s the matter.&quot;&nbsp; Sue Ellen breaks down crying.&nbsp; Miss Ellie holds her. Sue Ellen says, &quot;I&#039;m pregnant.&quot;&quot;But that&#039;s wonderful isn&#039;t it.&quot;Sue Ellen keeps crying.&nbsp; &quot;I keep waiting for things to go wrong.&nbsp; I don&#039;t want another child and things to go wrong. I&#039;m forty six Miss Ellie. I&#039;ve lost one child. And it&#039;s not like I can keep JR&#039;s attention for very long.&quot;&quot;Oh Sue Ellen.&quot;JR sends John Ross off to play with Ellie.&nbsp; He turns and look at Holly, &quot;We had a deal.&nbsp; You get to raise her with out interference from me and I get to see her two weekends a year and manage her inheritance.&quot;&quot;Well you bringing John Ross around wasn&#039;t part of the deal.&quot;&quot;He&#039;s her brother.&quot;&quot;And what would Sue Ellen say about your little secret family?&quot;&quot;And what would you say if my lawyers fought you for custody.&nbsp; You do have that little cocaine charge against you.&quot;&quot;You set me up.&quot;&quot;I didn&#039;t make you do a damn thing.&nbsp; I&#039;ve also made you a hell of a lot of money.&quot;&quot;I want you gone.&nbsp; So either you leave us alone or your wife finds out.&quot;&nbsp; &quot;That&#039;s a big chance you&#039;re taking.&nbsp; My wife just might like to raise a little girl at South Fork.&nbsp; She&#039;s got a big heart.&quot;&quot;You try.&quot;&quot;You try and take my daughter from me and I&#039;ll break your neck.&quot;Donna meets with two men in her office, &quot;Yes the debt is considerable but we&#039;re under no pressure to turn your loans into ownership, certainly not twenty percent.&quot;&quot;We have reason to believe that there&#039;s a pending collapse in crude prices in the horizon.&quot;&quot;We&#039;ll cross that path when we get to it.&nbsp; Now if you&#039;ll excuse me I have a business to run and unless I&#039;m late in a payment to you, I don&#039;t expect to either of you.&quot;&nbsp; She walks them to the door.&nbsp; Carlos meets with Jack in Paris.&nbsp; Jack says, &quot;What&#039;d you find out?&quot;&quot;She just left for Riyadh.&quot;&quot;Riyadh?&nbsp; What for?&quot;&quot;I don&#039;t know yet.&nbsp; But I did get some mother information we&#039;ve got to get back to JR.&quot;&quot;What is it?&quot;&quot;She&#039;s got a child.&nbsp; George Herbert Wentworth the third.&nbsp; And Bobby Ewing is on the birth certificate.&quot;&quot;Oh that&#039;s not possible.&quot;&quot;Possible or not that&#039;s what it says.&quot;&nbsp; &quot;Jenna did that to Bobby.&nbsp; Charlie&#039;s not really his but Bobby was too honorable to turn his back on her regardless.&nbsp; But he&#039;s not here now and there&#039;s no way JR&#039;s going to let her claim more of Bobby&#039;s estate just by putting him down as the father.&quot;&quot;Yes but she doesn&#039;t have to claim anything. She&#039;s got control of the trust-fund and Bobby&#039;s shares in Ewing Oil. Not to mention I hear she&#039;s buying shares in her own.&nbsp; I&#039;ve arranged a paternity test next time he goes to the doctors.&quot;&quot;Do we want her to know we know?&quot;&quot;She won&#039;t.&nbsp; There&#039;s a DNA test I can get will prove without a doubt.&nbsp; I&#039;ve arranged things here so we&#039;d better head to Riyadh.&quot;On her private jet Kathryn sits with a young man in the throngs of passion.&nbsp; Kissing, feeling all over each other, undressing.&nbsp; She puts her hands on top of his head and pushes him down to his knees.&nbsp; Jeremy stands and walks to the back and through a door, closing it behind him.&nbsp; Sue Ellen walks into JR&#039;s study and says we need to talk?&quot;&quot;Sure.&nbsp; Come in.&nbsp; If this is about me and John Ross being gone longer fishin&#039; I didn&#039;t mean to worry you.&nbsp; We just got in an extra day that&#039;s all.&quot;&quot;No it&#039;s not that.&nbsp; I&#039;ll admit I was worried, but you called.&nbsp; No.&nbsp; I&#039;ve got some news.&quot;&quot;Your liver.&quot;&nbsp; JR turns white. &quot;No.&nbsp; I&#039;m pregnant.&quot;&quot;What!&nbsp; Darlin&#039; that&#039;s great news.&quot;&nbsp;&nbsp; He jumps up and takes her in his arms. &quot;We&#039;ve gotta tell John Ross.&nbsp; This is fantastic. You sure you&#039;re body can handle this.&quot;&quot;The doctors a little concerned.&nbsp; But says everything should be fine.&nbsp; He wants me to rest a lot.&quot;&quot;Yes of course.&nbsp; We&#039;ll name him Bobby.&nbsp; Robert James Ewing the second.&nbsp; You know he was named after my Daddy&#039;s mother, Roberta Ross.&nbsp; I never meet the woman.&nbsp; She died when daddy was young. Too young.&nbsp; Oh he&#039;d be so happy darlin&#039;.&nbsp; This is just what we need.&quot;&quot;JR we&#039;re still not even in the same room.&nbsp; Well more that a couple nights.&quot;&quot;Well work it sweetheart.&quot;&quot;Will we?&nbsp; Or is it just a matter of time you turn away from me.&quot;&quot;No that&#039;s not gonna happen.&quot;&quot;Really?&nbsp; Because I&#039;ve heard that before.&quot;&quot;Sue Ellen, please, listen to me.&nbsp; I love you.&nbsp; I do.&nbsp; I was always so stupid, thinking you didn&#039;t really love me.&nbsp; But I know you do.&nbsp; And we&#039;re gonna be good.&nbsp; I promise you on my life Sue Ellen. I promise you.&quot;&nbsp; He holds her tight.&nbsp; Cliff, Jamie, Kathryn and Jeremy meet in a Arab inspired hotel in Al-Ain celebrating.&nbsp; Kathryn says, &quot;I know it&#039;s a lot of debt, but I don&#039;t really have any use for Wentworth Oil.&nbsp; If you want, we can work it out and you can work something out.&nbsp; With Jamie knowing drilling and Jeremy can consult on the business end, I&#039;m sure you can pull it off.&quot;Cliff looks at Jamie.&nbsp; She seems to agree.&nbsp; &quot;Jack.&nbsp; Have your brother join in with you.&nbsp; He&#039;s certainly got the money.&nbsp; It was your two father&#039;s that started Ewing Oil with Jock Ewing.&nbsp; Then when we&#039;ve pried Ewing Oil out of their hands, we can sell you the property the three of them owned together and call it a score settled.&quot;&nbsp; The celebration continues.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="stevew, post: 60540, member: 130"] I made a mistake. The first posting was two hours that should have been Episodes 1 and 2. Then the next would have been 3. Episode 4: As Time Goes By With the dramatic change with Bobby's death I'd use a tool seldom used in drama but often in sitcoms, the flash back episode. I'd start with Miss Ellie, Sue Ellen, Donna and Lucy all sitting around the back porch one evening reminiscing and use flash backs throughout. Then for a second hour I'd show the pilot to Lucy's new spin off show on which Miss Ellie and Clayton guest star. The following week this Spin off should have fit in Dallas's time slot and the fit into its regular time slot - just an idea. Episode 5: The Ewing and Barnes Feud Part 2 On a private jet Kathryn says to Jeremy, "I'm sure the Ewing's though their Feud with the Barnes was rather fun. And you and JR had your moments, but when I'm done with them, I'll have Ewing Oil and South Fork and JR in prison. And my brother as broken as Digger Barnes." "Who are these people we're meeting?" "Associates of my father's. After Riyadh we'll meet Cliff in Al-Ain. He might hate me, but he needs my money too much right now. JR's sent Pam on to Switzerland with Christopher. I've got some people watching him. If need be they'll grab him and bring him back to Texas. Everything's coming along just fine. This took me use to plan. And it's going to be so worth it." "Revenge." "Reckoning." "I yet to understand why kill Bobby?" "I didn't intend to. I'd gone to Pam's to tell her I had my father's will and that what she and Cliff had belonged to me. Scare her you know. Then I saw her with Bobby. I hate that self righteous bastard. But the smug look on her face. I just floored it." "You tried to kill Pam?" "She and Cliff took everything that belonged to me. And then she thought she was going to get Bobby back. I just saw red. When I came to in the hospital I made a phone call and got out of there." "I see. What I have to know is that you're ok now. We can't afford anymore of those momentary lapses in judgement." "We? You can't afford your next meal. I on the other hand can afford anything I want. Our marriage merely ties us together against our common enemies. The prenup keeps you from over stepping your place." Sue Ellen sits in the living room shaking when Miss Ellie comes in. "Oh my dear. What's the matter." Sue Ellen breaks down crying. Miss Ellie holds her. Sue Ellen says, "I'm pregnant." "But that's wonderful isn't it." Sue Ellen keeps crying. "I keep waiting for things to go wrong. I don't want another child and things to go wrong. I'm forty six Miss Ellie. I've lost one child. And it's not like I can keep JR's attention for very long." "Oh Sue Ellen." JR sends John Ross off to play with Ellie. He turns and look at Holly, "We had a deal. You get to raise her with out interference from me and I get to see her two weekends a year and manage her inheritance." "Well you bringing John Ross around wasn't part of the deal." "He's her brother." "And what would Sue Ellen say about your little secret family?" "And what would you say if my lawyers fought you for custody. You do have that little cocaine charge against you." "You set me up." "I didn't make you do a damn thing. I've also made you a hell of a lot of money." "I want you gone. So either you leave us alone or your wife finds out." "That's a big chance you're taking. My wife just might like to raise a little girl at South Fork. She's got a big heart." "You try." "You try and take my daughter from me and I'll break your neck." Donna meets with two men in her office, "Yes the debt is considerable but we're under no pressure to turn your loans into ownership, certainly not twenty percent." "We have reason to believe that there's a pending collapse in crude prices in the horizon." "We'll cross that path when we get to it. Now if you'll excuse me I have a business to run and unless I'm late in a payment to you, I don't expect to either of you." She walks them to the door. Carlos meets with Jack in Paris. Jack says, "What'd you find out?" "She just left for Riyadh." "Riyadh? What for?" "I don't know yet. But I did get some mother information we've got to get back to JR." "What is it?" "She's got a child. George Herbert Wentworth the third. And Bobby Ewing is on the birth certificate." "Oh that's not possible." "Possible or not that's what it says." "Jenna did that to Bobby. Charlie's not really his but Bobby was too honorable to turn his back on her regardless. But he's not here now and there's no way JR's going to let her claim more of Bobby's estate just by putting him down as the father." "Yes but she doesn't have to claim anything. She's got control of the trust-fund and Bobby's shares in Ewing Oil. Not to mention I hear she's buying shares in her own. I've arranged a paternity test next time he goes to the doctors." "Do we want her to know we know?" "She won't. There's a DNA test I can get will prove without a doubt. I've arranged things here so we'd better head to Riyadh." On her private jet Kathryn sits with a young man in the throngs of passion. Kissing, feeling all over each other, undressing. She puts her hands on top of his head and pushes him down to his knees. Jeremy stands and walks to the back and through a door, closing it behind him. Sue Ellen walks into JR's study and says we need to talk?" "Sure. Come in. If this is about me and John Ross being gone longer fishin' I didn't mean to worry you. We just got in an extra day that's all." "No it's not that. I'll admit I was worried, but you called. No. I've got some news." "Your liver." JR turns white. "No. I'm pregnant." "What! Darlin' that's great news." He jumps up and takes her in his arms. "We've gotta tell John Ross. This is fantastic. You sure you're body can handle this." "The doctors a little concerned. But says everything should be fine. He wants me to rest a lot." "Yes of course. We'll name him Bobby. Robert James Ewing the second. You know he was named after my Daddy's mother, Roberta Ross. I never meet the woman. She died when daddy was young. Too young. Oh he'd be so happy darlin'. This is just what we need." "JR we're still not even in the same room. Well more that a couple nights." "Well work it sweetheart." "Will we? Or is it just a matter of time you turn away from me." "No that's not gonna happen." "Really? Because I've heard that before." "Sue Ellen, please, listen to me. I love you. I do. I was always so stupid, thinking you didn't really love me. But I know you do. And we're gonna be good. I promise you on my life Sue Ellen. I promise you." He holds her tight. Cliff, Jamie, Kathryn and Jeremy meet in a Arab inspired hotel in Al-Ain celebrating. Kathryn says, "I know it's a lot of debt, but I don't really have any use for Wentworth Oil. If you want, we can work it out and you can work something out. With Jamie knowing drilling and Jeremy can consult on the business end, I'm sure you can pull it off." Cliff looks at Jamie. She seems to agree. "Jack. Have your brother join in with you. He's certainly got the money. It was your two father's that started Ewing Oil with Jock Ewing. Then when we've pried Ewing Oil out of their hands, we can sell you the property the three of them owned together and call it a score settled." The celebration continues. [/QUOTE]

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