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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 213439" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Hi Everyone!</p><p></p><p>I'm sorry about the lack of update yesterday. But the board was down when I tried to post. </p><p></p><p>Anyway it seems to be working now so I figured I'd thank you all properly for your feedback! :dance1:</p><p></p><p>[USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] I understand why you're looking forward to Bobby & Pam's next meeting. It will take a bit longer until we get there though... <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] I know Pam's kidnapping and amnesia does sound a bit like a daytime soap opera plot. But considering all the time that has passed by I couldn't come up with anything better since I needed something that would redeem her character and the only way that could be done was if she didn't leave voluntarily. Considering that Katherine did show up right before she left it's not a far stretch that Katherine would have kidnapped her. The plantations for it was certainly there on the show. However I couldn't have kept her kidnapped for 25 years since that would have been ridiculous. So hence the amnesia plot! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/angel/t1301.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":innocent:" title="Innocent :innocent:" data-shortname=":innocent:" /></p><p>Also considering that Chris looked for his mom on the show it's not such a far stretch that he would forgive her. Then as for Bobby's reaction. I can let you in on a little secret, he's not gonna hear about it from Pam... <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=36]@Miss Texas 1967[/USER] I'm pleased that you've caught up on my story now. Considering that you've recently rewatched Dallas TNT it will hopefully make a lot of sense to you. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>I'm glad that you like Elena more in this story than on the actual show. Carmen is in this story but she's a minor character that only shows up for the big family moments. Like the birth of Elena's baby. So it's not a Carmen heavy story at all! </p><p></p><p>I think you are right about Pamela Rebecca and John Ross it wouldn't hurt for them to see a marriage counsellor, as they still have some issues to be working through. </p><p></p><p>A scene with Ann & Pam. That's an interesting idea for sure. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p><p></p><p>I am glad that you think it's plausible that Katherine kidnapped Pam. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=130]@stevew[/USER] I'm glad you loved the business scene. You are right that it's all about contacts. One thing you said made me confused though. John Ross has a team of CIA agents working for him? Where did you get that from?</p><p>I can't remember anything on Dallas TNT that indicated that he did. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1714.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":confuse:" title="Confuse :confuse:" data-shortname=":confuse:" /></p><p>Harris and Judith are still in control over Ryland Transportation in this story. Harris is running the day to day operations, with Judith being involved occasionally. </p><p></p><p>I don't know if John Ross got Nasser's oil deal. I think Pamela slept with him to get that deal. But since Pamela and John Ross didn't get control over Barnes Global after that I am not sure what happened to that deal. I agree with you that Dallas TNT could be a bit vague on the details. </p><p></p><p>Then as for the end of the show. I thought it was Nicolas Trevino that made sure that the people from the cartel was killed at the end in prison and not CIA contacts. </p><p></p><p>Judith definitely knew that Emma was raped. I think she might have said something to John Ross about it so he went over to cheer Emma up. But I don't think John Ross and Emma discussed what happened to her so Emma doesn't know that Judith and John Ross know. </p><p></p><p>Good idea about Ann talking to Sue Ellen about Emma's problems. That wouldn't be the first time. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>But yes I meant that she'd talk to Harris, he is after all Emma's father. </p><p></p><p>I can't see why Pamela would be interested in helping Emma after she tried to ruin her marriage and almost pushed Pamela to the brink of suicide! <img src="http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0011.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":yikey:" title="Yikey :yikey:" data-shortname=":yikey:" /></p><p>It's an interesting idea nevertheless. </p><p></p><p>I'm glad you thought the Emma & Ann scene was touching. </p><p></p><p>Then as for how Josephine will help John Ross, the next scene will shed a bit more light on that. </p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p>Josephine Rebecca Greco had always wanted a sibling. So when John Ross Ewing had come into her life she felt like her prayers had been answered. She now had an older brother, who was still close enough to her in age to be on the same page as she was. Both having grown up as an only child with wealthy parents, who had spoiled them rotten, they were used to getting what they wanted. John Ross had a conniving streak though that made Josephine question his intentions towards her. <em>Is he genuinely interested in being my brother or does he mainly see me as a mean to an end?</em> Josephine was no dummy. She was bright, beautiful, brass and brilliant. With her porcelain white skin and dark brown curly hair and piercing blue eyes she looked like an exotic bird and she had already had several marriage proposals from the men back home. But just like a bird she was hard to catch so she’d turned them all down. Josephine didn’t want an arranged marriage, she wanted to marry for love. Besides she was only 30 years old so she wasn’t exactly in a rush to settle down. After all her parents hadn’t found each other until they were older than she was now so there was still plenty of time for her to find a man to share her life with. She hoped to find a real charmer and gentleman like her father had been. He had treated her mother so good. Sadly he had died way too young and left a void in her life.</p><p></p><p> Josephine raised an eyebrow when she saw John Ross walk into the oil baron’s club in the company of his wife. “John Ross?”</p><p></p><p> “Sorry we’re late but traffic is a bitch this time a day,” John Ross said he walked up to Josephine and gave her a kiss on the cheek.</p><p></p><p> But Josephine was not interested in small talk and instead cut straight to the chase, “I’m surprised to see you brought your wife. I didn’t think she was interested in our business endeavor.”</p><p></p><p> “I’m not but I was curious to meet John Ross sister,” Pamela Rebecca spoke up, “Not to mention my cousin.”</p><p></p><p> “Right, you are Cliff’s daughter,” Josephine said.</p><p></p><p> “Small, crazy world isn’t it?” John Ross said before he made the introductions, “Josephine this is Pamela, Pamela this is Josephine.”</p><p></p><p> “Pamela?” Josephine said. “That’s the same name as my mother.”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah I believe I was named after her and our grandmother,” Pamela Rebecca replied, as they sat down.</p><p></p><p> “Then we have the same name,” Josephine pointed out and when Pamela Rebecca gave her a questioning look she elaborated, “My middle name is Rebecca too.”</p><p></p><p> “Josephine Rebecca,” John Ross said. “Don’t you think it’s funny her mother gave her my dad’s initials. Surely that must have meant something?”</p><p></p><p> “Well I guess Katherine’s never been subtle,” Pamela said and Josephine made a face.</p><p></p><p> Picking up on it, John Ross motioned towards a waiter, “So shall we?” John Ross asked and once the others nodded they placed their orders and were served fresh drinks.</p><p></p><p> “Enough chit chat,” Josephine said, “why don’t we get down to business?”</p><p></p><p> “A girl after my own mind,” John Ross smiled.</p><p></p><p> “So have you come up with a plan how to take over Ewing Global yet?” Josephine asked.</p><p></p><p> “Yes,” John Ross said. “I’m thinking that it’s about time that you and your mother reclaim what is rightfully yours.”</p><p></p><p> “Meaning?”</p><p></p><p> “That when Katherine died nobody knew that she had a daughter so all of her possessions went to her only alive heir.”</p><p></p><p> “My father,” Pamela filled in.</p><p></p><p> “Exactly and now when Cliff is gone I think it’s only fair that you should have your rightful inheritance,” John Ross said.</p><p></p><p> “Hey!” Pamela gave him a look.</p><p></p><p> “No I’m not talking about your father’s money. I am talking about his company,” John Ross told his wife before turning to his sister, “You and your mother both should have a stake in Barnes Global but since Ewing Global bought up Barnes Global...”</p><p></p><p> “My stake is now with Ewing Global,” Josephine smiled.</p><p></p><p> “Exactly so what I want you to do is sue my mama and uncle Bobby for 33% of Ewing Global stock and then when the court delivers you the stock you’ll sell it to me,” John Ross smiled. “Then if your mother will join us and sue them for her 33% of the company...”</p><p></p><p> “We’ll end up with the majority of the stock and can control the company,” Pamela Rebecca finished John Ross sentence.</p><p></p><p> “We?” John Ross gave her a questioning look. “I thought you didn’t want anything to do with this.”</p><p></p><p> “Well what can I say, I changed my mind,” Pamela smiled. “So I’m in.”</p><p></p><p> “Good,” John Ross grinned. “Josephine?”</p><p></p><p> “I’m in too,” Josephine said. “But I am not so sure about my mother. After all her share went to Christopher and I don’t think she wants to mess with him.”</p><p></p><p> “Well Christopher’s out of the company too. So she won’t be messing with him but with my mama and uncle Bobby.”</p><p></p><p> “But didn’t she used to be married to Bobby?” Josephine asked.</p><p></p><p> “Yeah but that didn’t stop him from locking up Pam’s brother in jail so if we remind her of that she might be more open to our cause,” John Ross reasoned. “So what do you say?”</p><p></p><p> “I say it’s worth a try,” Josephine said. “I’ll let her know that you’re interested in meeting her.”</p><p></p><p> “Excellent ladies,” John Ross said, as he raised his glass. “it looks like we are in business!” The women then raised their glasses and smiled at John Ross as they exchanged a toast to their success.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 213439, member: 57167"] Hi Everyone! I'm sorry about the lack of update yesterday. But the board was down when I tried to post. Anyway it seems to be working now so I figured I'd thank you all properly for your feedback! :dance1: [USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] I understand why you're looking forward to Bobby & Pam's next meeting. It will take a bit longer until we get there though... :D [USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] I know Pam's kidnapping and amnesia does sound a bit like a daytime soap opera plot. But considering all the time that has passed by I couldn't come up with anything better since I needed something that would redeem her character and the only way that could be done was if she didn't leave voluntarily. Considering that Katherine did show up right before she left it's not a far stretch that Katherine would have kidnapped her. The plantations for it was certainly there on the show. However I couldn't have kept her kidnapped for 25 years since that would have been ridiculous. So hence the amnesia plot! :innocent: Also considering that Chris looked for his mom on the show it's not such a far stretch that he would forgive her. Then as for Bobby's reaction. I can let you in on a little secret, he's not gonna hear about it from Pam... ;) [USER=36]@Miss Texas 1967[/USER] I'm pleased that you've caught up on my story now. Considering that you've recently rewatched Dallas TNT it will hopefully make a lot of sense to you. :) I'm glad that you like Elena more in this story than on the actual show. Carmen is in this story but she's a minor character that only shows up for the big family moments. Like the birth of Elena's baby. So it's not a Carmen heavy story at all! I think you are right about Pamela Rebecca and John Ross it wouldn't hurt for them to see a marriage counsellor, as they still have some issues to be working through. A scene with Ann & Pam. That's an interesting idea for sure. :D I am glad that you think it's plausible that Katherine kidnapped Pam. :) [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] I'm glad you loved the business scene. You are right that it's all about contacts. One thing you said made me confused though. John Ross has a team of CIA agents working for him? Where did you get that from? I can't remember anything on Dallas TNT that indicated that he did. :confuse: Harris and Judith are still in control over Ryland Transportation in this story. Harris is running the day to day operations, with Judith being involved occasionally. I don't know if John Ross got Nasser's oil deal. I think Pamela slept with him to get that deal. But since Pamela and John Ross didn't get control over Barnes Global after that I am not sure what happened to that deal. I agree with you that Dallas TNT could be a bit vague on the details. Then as for the end of the show. I thought it was Nicolas Trevino that made sure that the people from the cartel was killed at the end in prison and not CIA contacts. Judith definitely knew that Emma was raped. I think she might have said something to John Ross about it so he went over to cheer Emma up. But I don't think John Ross and Emma discussed what happened to her so Emma doesn't know that Judith and John Ross know. Good idea about Ann talking to Sue Ellen about Emma's problems. That wouldn't be the first time. :) But yes I meant that she'd talk to Harris, he is after all Emma's father. I can't see why Pamela would be interested in helping Emma after she tried to ruin her marriage and almost pushed Pamela to the brink of suicide! :yikey: It's an interesting idea nevertheless. I'm glad you thought the Emma & Ann scene was touching. Then as for how Josephine will help John Ross, the next scene will shed a bit more light on that. * Josephine Rebecca Greco had always wanted a sibling. So when John Ross Ewing had come into her life she felt like her prayers had been answered. She now had an older brother, who was still close enough to her in age to be on the same page as she was. Both having grown up as an only child with wealthy parents, who had spoiled them rotten, they were used to getting what they wanted. John Ross had a conniving streak though that made Josephine question his intentions towards her. [I]Is he genuinely interested in being my brother or does he mainly see me as a mean to an end?[/I] Josephine was no dummy. She was bright, beautiful, brass and brilliant. With her porcelain white skin and dark brown curly hair and piercing blue eyes she looked like an exotic bird and she had already had several marriage proposals from the men back home. But just like a bird she was hard to catch so she’d turned them all down. Josephine didn’t want an arranged marriage, she wanted to marry for love. Besides she was only 30 years old so she wasn’t exactly in a rush to settle down. After all her parents hadn’t found each other until they were older than she was now so there was still plenty of time for her to find a man to share her life with. She hoped to find a real charmer and gentleman like her father had been. He had treated her mother so good. Sadly he had died way too young and left a void in her life. Josephine raised an eyebrow when she saw John Ross walk into the oil baron’s club in the company of his wife. “John Ross?” “Sorry we’re late but traffic is a bitch this time a day,” John Ross said he walked up to Josephine and gave her a kiss on the cheek. But Josephine was not interested in small talk and instead cut straight to the chase, “I’m surprised to see you brought your wife. I didn’t think she was interested in our business endeavor.” “I’m not but I was curious to meet John Ross sister,” Pamela Rebecca spoke up, “Not to mention my cousin.” “Right, you are Cliff’s daughter,” Josephine said. “Small, crazy world isn’t it?” John Ross said before he made the introductions, “Josephine this is Pamela, Pamela this is Josephine.” “Pamela?” Josephine said. “That’s the same name as my mother.” “Yeah I believe I was named after her and our grandmother,” Pamela Rebecca replied, as they sat down. “Then we have the same name,” Josephine pointed out and when Pamela Rebecca gave her a questioning look she elaborated, “My middle name is Rebecca too.” “Josephine Rebecca,” John Ross said. “Don’t you think it’s funny her mother gave her my dad’s initials. Surely that must have meant something?” “Well I guess Katherine’s never been subtle,” Pamela said and Josephine made a face. Picking up on it, John Ross motioned towards a waiter, “So shall we?” John Ross asked and once the others nodded they placed their orders and were served fresh drinks. “Enough chit chat,” Josephine said, “why don’t we get down to business?” “A girl after my own mind,” John Ross smiled. “So have you come up with a plan how to take over Ewing Global yet?” Josephine asked. “Yes,” John Ross said. “I’m thinking that it’s about time that you and your mother reclaim what is rightfully yours.” “Meaning?” “That when Katherine died nobody knew that she had a daughter so all of her possessions went to her only alive heir.” “My father,” Pamela filled in. “Exactly and now when Cliff is gone I think it’s only fair that you should have your rightful inheritance,” John Ross said. “Hey!” Pamela gave him a look. “No I’m not talking about your father’s money. I am talking about his company,” John Ross told his wife before turning to his sister, “You and your mother both should have a stake in Barnes Global but since Ewing Global bought up Barnes Global...” “My stake is now with Ewing Global,” Josephine smiled. “Exactly so what I want you to do is sue my mama and uncle Bobby for 33% of Ewing Global stock and then when the court delivers you the stock you’ll sell it to me,” John Ross smiled. “Then if your mother will join us and sue them for her 33% of the company...” “We’ll end up with the majority of the stock and can control the company,” Pamela Rebecca finished John Ross sentence. “We?” John Ross gave her a questioning look. “I thought you didn’t want anything to do with this.” “Well what can I say, I changed my mind,” Pamela smiled. “So I’m in.” “Good,” John Ross grinned. “Josephine?” “I’m in too,” Josephine said. “But I am not so sure about my mother. After all her share went to Christopher and I don’t think she wants to mess with him.” “Well Christopher’s out of the company too. So she won’t be messing with him but with my mama and uncle Bobby.” “But didn’t she used to be married to Bobby?” Josephine asked. “Yeah but that didn’t stop him from locking up Pam’s brother in jail so if we remind her of that she might be more open to our cause,” John Ross reasoned. “So what do you say?” “I say it’s worth a try,” Josephine said. “I’ll let her know that you’re interested in meeting her.” “Excellent ladies,” John Ross said, as he raised his glass. “it looks like we are in business!” The women then raised their glasses and smiled at John Ross as they exchanged a toast to their success. [/QUOTE]
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