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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 215263" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=66]@superman fan[/USER] thanks for the ratings. I am glad you liked the scene with Afton & Pamela Rebecca. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>[USER=36]@Miss Texas 1967[/USER] thank you so much for your detailed feedback. I enjoyed reading your comments and I'm glad you've caught up again. :ch:</p><p>You are right about Ann she does love Bobby and I think Bobby loves her too. I mean he wouldn't have married her if he didn't. Of course their relationship will always be different from what he and Pam had as they were much older when they got together. Like for instance Bobby & Pam shared a son and she knew his parents. Ann never knew them and she and Bobby never had kids. To be honest I think that was a mistake when Dallas TNT came back. If they had wanted to create a stronger Bobby & Ann pairing they should have given them a teenage daughter to start with and had them been married for longer than 7 or 8 years. It would have created a different dynamic to start with and it would also have given teenagers someone their own age to relate to. I think that was a a part of the success of the original show that the people in the family represented three different generations and age groups.</p><p></p><p>Yes the Jacob story is very sad. But I think it makes sense with the people that Cliff and Afton turned out to be on the Dallas TNT version. There had to be some explaination for why Cliff turned out the way he did and I think losing a child would ruin Cliff and Afton's marriage. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></p><p></p><p>Yeah I think Pam and Afton's friendship makes sense since they are practically sister's-in-laws. Even if Pam was no longer around when Afton finally married Cliff they did know each other since before and always liked each other. Heck Afton even named her daughter after Pam so they were close. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" />als:</p><p></p><p>You are right that John Ross and Pamela Rebecca works best when they collaborate together. They should be the power couple standing by each other instead of constantly working against each other and struggle for power. Then as for if your prediction of her already being pregnant is correct or not, I guess you'll have to keep reading and see what happens! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p>I'm glad that you like John Ross and Josephine. I think Josephine is in a unique position since she is John Ross sister but in a sense she is also Christopher's sister and she is Pamela Rebecca's cousin. So she's really a part of the family.</p><p></p><p>You will be happy to know that there will be a lot more of Sue Ellen coming up in this story and yes there is a Pam and Sue Ellen scene. But you will have to wait quite a long time for it as Pam will catch up with another member of the Ewing family first...</p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p>Ann had been banging on Emma’s door for fifteen minutes by now but her daughter still stubbornly refused to see her. “Ann give it up. There’s no use!”</p><p></p><p> “No Harris, that’s my daughter in there and I won’t give her up again!”</p><p></p><p> “I didn’t suggest you should. But Emma clearly won’t see you.”</p><p></p><p> “I know, I’ve lost my daughter again,” Ann said before she began to sob. </p><p></p><p> “No you haven’t lost her,” Harris said reassuringly, as he took Ann’s hand in his.</p><p></p><p> “But she won’t even talk to me Harris!”</p><p></p><p> “She’ll come around. Just give her some time,” Harris said, as he they started walking down the stairs.</p><p></p><p> “It’s been two days!”</p><p></p><p> “I know but if it’s any consolation she won’t talk to me either,” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> “She won’t?”</p><p></p><p> “No she hasn’t left her room since we talked to her,” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> Ann looked horrified when she heard that, “But then how does she gets food?”</p><p></p><p> “Mama brings her food,” Harris sighed. “For some reason Emma hasn’t shut her out.”</p><p></p><p> “Probably because she doesn’t know what’s happened to her,” Ann reasoned.</p><p></p><p> “Oh I wouldn’t be so sure about that,” Harris said. “Nothing gets passed my mama.”</p><p></p><p> “Then she hasn’t confronted Emma about it like we did,” Ann said, as they came to a stop in the hallway.</p><p></p><p> “I guess not,” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> “Oh Harris what are we gonna do?” Ann sobbed. “I want Emma to get better but she refuses to let me help her.”</p><p></p><p> “I know it hurts, doesn’t it?” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> “It really does,” Ann sobbed. “I had finally won Emma over and now I’ve lost her again...”</p><p></p><p> “Well can you blame her for not trusting you?” Harris asked. “You did betray her confidence.”</p><p></p><p> “What are you saying?” Ann asked. “That I shouldn’t have told you?”</p><p></p><p> “No I’m glad you did Annie,” Harris said softly, as he gently dried her tears with the back of his hand, “I had noticed that Emma kept to herself since she got back from Mexico but I didn’t know what was wrong with her. At least now I know what is going on.”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah but it hurts seeing Emma like this,” Ann said.</p><p></p><p> “I know it hurts me too,” Harris said, “I want Emma to get better so badly.”</p><p></p><p> “Not as badly as I do,” Ann said. “I blame myself for leaving her in Mexico. If I could have traded places with her I would.”</p><p></p><p> “Annie, you can’t blame yourself for what happened to Emma,” Harris said. “It wasn’t your fault. If anyone’s to blame it’s me for dealing with the cartel in the first place. I wish now that I hadn’t.”</p><p></p><p> “No what you did was brave. Not all men can handle going undercover like you did,” Ann said.</p><p></p><p> “Thanks but I took it too far,” Harris said. “Besides by not letting my mother or Emma in on it, they both worked against me at one time or another and tried to deal with the cartel on their own. That’s what got Emma kidnapped. My dealings with the cartel.”</p><p></p><p> “No Harris,” Ann shook her head, as she looked him straight in the eyes. “It’s not your fault we were kidnapped.”</p><p></p><p> “Thanks for saying that but we both know that isn’t true,” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> “I don’t blame you and I am sure Emma doesn’t either so you shouldn’t blame yourself,” Ann said. “What happened to Emma was out of our control.”</p><p></p><p> “That’s what makes this so hard,” Harris said, as the angry tears started to well up in his eyes as well. “It makes me feel helpless and I hate that.”</p><p></p><p> “I know,” Ann said softly and seeing how broken up Harris was over the whole ordeal she suddenly felt an urge to comfort him. So she pulled him into a hug and he cried against her shoulder like a child. He was practically inconsolable and realizing how much pain he was in endeared him to her. All these years he had been so lonely. He had never remarried anyone after her. So he’d never had anyone else to share his problems with. But now she was here and she was willing to listen to him, comfort him and forgive him for all the bad blood that there had been between them. She shared his sadness and it felt like less of a burden to share it with someone. So they stood like that for a long time, just finding solace in each other. They were so wrapped up in each other and the pain they both felt that neither one of them noticed that his mother was standing on the reeling of the stairs, watching them like a hawk and she didn’t like what she saw.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 215263, member: 57167"] Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. :) [USER=66]@superman fan[/USER] thanks for the ratings. I am glad you liked the scene with Afton & Pamela Rebecca. :) [USER=36]@Miss Texas 1967[/USER] thank you so much for your detailed feedback. I enjoyed reading your comments and I'm glad you've caught up again. :ch: You are right about Ann she does love Bobby and I think Bobby loves her too. I mean he wouldn't have married her if he didn't. Of course their relationship will always be different from what he and Pam had as they were much older when they got together. Like for instance Bobby & Pam shared a son and she knew his parents. Ann never knew them and she and Bobby never had kids. To be honest I think that was a mistake when Dallas TNT came back. If they had wanted to create a stronger Bobby & Ann pairing they should have given them a teenage daughter to start with and had them been married for longer than 7 or 8 years. It would have created a different dynamic to start with and it would also have given teenagers someone their own age to relate to. I think that was a a part of the success of the original show that the people in the family represented three different generations and age groups. Yes the Jacob story is very sad. But I think it makes sense with the people that Cliff and Afton turned out to be on the Dallas TNT version. There had to be some explaination for why Cliff turned out the way he did and I think losing a child would ruin Cliff and Afton's marriage. :( Yeah I think Pam and Afton's friendship makes sense since they are practically sister's-in-laws. Even if Pam was no longer around when Afton finally married Cliff they did know each other since before and always liked each other. Heck Afton even named her daughter after Pam so they were close. :pals: You are right that John Ross and Pamela Rebecca works best when they collaborate together. They should be the power couple standing by each other instead of constantly working against each other and struggle for power. Then as for if your prediction of her already being pregnant is correct or not, I guess you'll have to keep reading and see what happens! ;) I'm glad that you like John Ross and Josephine. I think Josephine is in a unique position since she is John Ross sister but in a sense she is also Christopher's sister and she is Pamela Rebecca's cousin. So she's really a part of the family. You will be happy to know that there will be a lot more of Sue Ellen coming up in this story and yes there is a Pam and Sue Ellen scene. But you will have to wait quite a long time for it as Pam will catch up with another member of the Ewing family first... * Ann had been banging on Emma’s door for fifteen minutes by now but her daughter still stubbornly refused to see her. “Ann give it up. There’s no use!” “No Harris, that’s my daughter in there and I won’t give her up again!” “I didn’t suggest you should. But Emma clearly won’t see you.” “I know, I’ve lost my daughter again,” Ann said before she began to sob. “No you haven’t lost her,” Harris said reassuringly, as he took Ann’s hand in his. “But she won’t even talk to me Harris!” “She’ll come around. Just give her some time,” Harris said, as he they started walking down the stairs. “It’s been two days!” “I know but if it’s any consolation she won’t talk to me either,” Harris said. “She won’t?” “No she hasn’t left her room since we talked to her,” Harris said. Ann looked horrified when she heard that, “But then how does she gets food?” “Mama brings her food,” Harris sighed. “For some reason Emma hasn’t shut her out.” “Probably because she doesn’t know what’s happened to her,” Ann reasoned. “Oh I wouldn’t be so sure about that,” Harris said. “Nothing gets passed my mama.” “Then she hasn’t confronted Emma about it like we did,” Ann said, as they came to a stop in the hallway. “I guess not,” Harris said. “Oh Harris what are we gonna do?” Ann sobbed. “I want Emma to get better but she refuses to let me help her.” “I know it hurts, doesn’t it?” Harris said. “It really does,” Ann sobbed. “I had finally won Emma over and now I’ve lost her again...” “Well can you blame her for not trusting you?” Harris asked. “You did betray her confidence.” “What are you saying?” Ann asked. “That I shouldn’t have told you?” “No I’m glad you did Annie,” Harris said softly, as he gently dried her tears with the back of his hand, “I had noticed that Emma kept to herself since she got back from Mexico but I didn’t know what was wrong with her. At least now I know what is going on.” “Yeah but it hurts seeing Emma like this,” Ann said. “I know it hurts me too,” Harris said, “I want Emma to get better so badly.” “Not as badly as I do,” Ann said. “I blame myself for leaving her in Mexico. If I could have traded places with her I would.” “Annie, you can’t blame yourself for what happened to Emma,” Harris said. “It wasn’t your fault. If anyone’s to blame it’s me for dealing with the cartel in the first place. I wish now that I hadn’t.” “No what you did was brave. Not all men can handle going undercover like you did,” Ann said. “Thanks but I took it too far,” Harris said. “Besides by not letting my mother or Emma in on it, they both worked against me at one time or another and tried to deal with the cartel on their own. That’s what got Emma kidnapped. My dealings with the cartel.” “No Harris,” Ann shook her head, as she looked him straight in the eyes. “It’s not your fault we were kidnapped.” “Thanks for saying that but we both know that isn’t true,” Harris said. “I don’t blame you and I am sure Emma doesn’t either so you shouldn’t blame yourself,” Ann said. “What happened to Emma was out of our control.” “That’s what makes this so hard,” Harris said, as the angry tears started to well up in his eyes as well. “It makes me feel helpless and I hate that.” “I know,” Ann said softly and seeing how broken up Harris was over the whole ordeal she suddenly felt an urge to comfort him. So she pulled him into a hug and he cried against her shoulder like a child. He was practically inconsolable and realizing how much pain he was in endeared him to her. All these years he had been so lonely. He had never remarried anyone after her. So he’d never had anyone else to share his problems with. But now she was here and she was willing to listen to him, comfort him and forgive him for all the bad blood that there had been between them. She shared his sadness and it felt like less of a burden to share it with someone. So they stood like that for a long time, just finding solace in each other. They were so wrapped up in each other and the pain they both felt that neither one of them noticed that his mother was standing on the reeling of the stairs, watching them like a hawk and she didn’t like what she saw. [/QUOTE]
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