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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 232692" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback and ratings on my latest updates. I always enjoy reading all of your comments.<img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/misc/m0719.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hat:" title="Hat :hat:" data-shortname=":hat:" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=66]@superman fan[/USER] I am glad you liked the Donna & Ray scene. I think they are pretty realistic ex's, in the sense that they will always be in each other's lives because of Margaret and they are friendly. But not really close anymore.</p><p></p><p>[USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] to be honest I think Ray & Jenna marrying on the show was a bit of a stretch since they didn't seem all that happy together. It was obvious to me that Jenna was still unluckily in love with Bobby when she married Ray. Yet I guess some good marriages can come out of a strong friendship so in this story I imagine that Jenna and Ray are still together.</p><p>But yeah it's pretty clear that Bobby's heart belongs with Pam. Even now after all these years.</p><p></p><p>[USER=59]@pd fan[/USER] thank you. You will find out what will happen between Bobby and Ann a bit later. First however it's back to Dallas and Pam...</p><p></p><p>[USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] yeah poor Ann is getting a lot of nasty surprises on her daughter's wedding day. I feel bad for her too. Also as for Harris being behind Pam's accident. Ann might not react the way you think she will once she finds out...</p><p></p><p>Now let's move on to another update.</p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p>Pam was standing in her bedroom, packing a suitcase when Josephine came home from spending her day at Southfork. Seeing her daughter walk into the room she smiled, “Hi Sweetheart, did you have a good time at Southfork?”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah sure did. But what is this?” Josephine motioned at the suitcase. “Are you going on a trip?”</p><p></p><p> “No we’re going back home,” Pam said. “So if you’ll pack your things together we can leave on Cliff’s private jet tonight.”</p><p></p><p> Josephine stared at her mother like if she’d lost her mind. Then she shook her head, “No!”</p><p></p><p> “What do you mean no?” Pam asked. “Don’t you want to go home?”</p><p></p><p> “No <em>I am</em> home,” Josephine said. “Dallas is my home now mom. It’s your home too. So how can you leave?” Josephine asked. “I thought you wanted us to live here.”</p><p></p><p> “I did,” Pam said.</p><p></p><p> “Then why are you leaving?” Josephine asked.</p><p></p><p> “Because,” Pam bit her lip, but knowing the way Josephine felt about Bobby she couldn’t bring herself to tell her the truth. So she only told her half the truth, “it’s not safe for us here anymore.”</p><p></p><p> Josephine gave her a strange look, “What do you mean?”</p><p></p><p> Pam sighed heavily, “Someone tried to kill me.”</p><p></p><p> Josephine dropped her cheek when she heard that, “You can’t be serious!” She exclaimed shocked. “Why would anyone wanna kill you?”</p><p></p><p> “I don’t know,” Pam said, as a tear ran down her cheek. “Anyway I can’t stay here any longer. So I must go home. Are you coming with me?”</p><p></p><p> “Am I safe here?” Josephine asked. “Or will whoever come after you come after me too?”</p><p></p><p> “You are safe here,” Pam said and Josephine nodded sadly, as a decision was forming in her mind.</p><p></p><p> “Then I think I wanna stay here with my brothers,” Josephine said giving her mother a look, pleading with her to understand. The last thing she wanted was to hurt her mother but she was at the age where she really needed to live her own life. It was difficult for her since a part of Josephine didn’t want to leave her mother and the life they had lived in Abu Dhabi but at the same time she really didn’t want to leave her new family either so she added, “After all I am just getting to know them.”</p><p></p><p> “I understand,” Pam nodded sadly.</p><p></p><p> “Think Afton will let me stay here or should I find my own place?”</p><p></p><p> “I’m sure Afton won’t mind it if you stay here a little bit longer,” Pam managed a smile, since at least if Josephine stayed with Afton she knew that someone would look after her.</p><p></p><p> “Okay I think I’ll stay here for a bit then,” Josephine said.</p><p></p><p> “Good,” Pam nodded. “Then I know that you are safe. I will miss you like crazy though.”</p><p></p><p> “I will miss you too mom,” Josephine said. “I love you.”</p><p></p><p> “I love you too baby,” Pam said, before she gave her daughter a hug goodbye. The tears welled up in her eyes since she knew that her life in Abu Dhabi was going to be so lonely without her daughter. She almost regretted her decision to leave now. But the decision had been made so now she needed to stick by it. She also knew that the worst was still to come as she also had to tell her son that she was leaving and she had a bad feeling in her stomach that her son wouldn’t understand why she’d chosen to move to the other side of the world.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 232692, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback and ratings on my latest updates. I always enjoy reading all of your comments.:hat: [USER=66]@superman fan[/USER] I am glad you liked the Donna & Ray scene. I think they are pretty realistic ex's, in the sense that they will always be in each other's lives because of Margaret and they are friendly. But not really close anymore. [USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] to be honest I think Ray & Jenna marrying on the show was a bit of a stretch since they didn't seem all that happy together. It was obvious to me that Jenna was still unluckily in love with Bobby when she married Ray. Yet I guess some good marriages can come out of a strong friendship so in this story I imagine that Jenna and Ray are still together. But yeah it's pretty clear that Bobby's heart belongs with Pam. Even now after all these years. [USER=59]@pd fan[/USER] thank you. You will find out what will happen between Bobby and Ann a bit later. First however it's back to Dallas and Pam... [USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] yeah poor Ann is getting a lot of nasty surprises on her daughter's wedding day. I feel bad for her too. Also as for Harris being behind Pam's accident. Ann might not react the way you think she will once she finds out... Now let's move on to another update. * Pam was standing in her bedroom, packing a suitcase when Josephine came home from spending her day at Southfork. Seeing her daughter walk into the room she smiled, “Hi Sweetheart, did you have a good time at Southfork?” “Yeah sure did. But what is this?” Josephine motioned at the suitcase. “Are you going on a trip?” “No we’re going back home,” Pam said. “So if you’ll pack your things together we can leave on Cliff’s private jet tonight.” Josephine stared at her mother like if she’d lost her mind. Then she shook her head, “No!” “What do you mean no?” Pam asked. “Don’t you want to go home?” “No [I]I am[/I] home,” Josephine said. “Dallas is my home now mom. It’s your home too. So how can you leave?” Josephine asked. “I thought you wanted us to live here.” “I did,” Pam said. “Then why are you leaving?” Josephine asked. “Because,” Pam bit her lip, but knowing the way Josephine felt about Bobby she couldn’t bring herself to tell her the truth. So she only told her half the truth, “it’s not safe for us here anymore.” Josephine gave her a strange look, “What do you mean?” Pam sighed heavily, “Someone tried to kill me.” Josephine dropped her cheek when she heard that, “You can’t be serious!” She exclaimed shocked. “Why would anyone wanna kill you?” “I don’t know,” Pam said, as a tear ran down her cheek. “Anyway I can’t stay here any longer. So I must go home. Are you coming with me?” “Am I safe here?” Josephine asked. “Or will whoever come after you come after me too?” “You are safe here,” Pam said and Josephine nodded sadly, as a decision was forming in her mind. “Then I think I wanna stay here with my brothers,” Josephine said giving her mother a look, pleading with her to understand. The last thing she wanted was to hurt her mother but she was at the age where she really needed to live her own life. It was difficult for her since a part of Josephine didn’t want to leave her mother and the life they had lived in Abu Dhabi but at the same time she really didn’t want to leave her new family either so she added, “After all I am just getting to know them.” “I understand,” Pam nodded sadly. “Think Afton will let me stay here or should I find my own place?” “I’m sure Afton won’t mind it if you stay here a little bit longer,” Pam managed a smile, since at least if Josephine stayed with Afton she knew that someone would look after her. “Okay I think I’ll stay here for a bit then,” Josephine said. “Good,” Pam nodded. “Then I know that you are safe. I will miss you like crazy though.” “I will miss you too mom,” Josephine said. “I love you.” “I love you too baby,” Pam said, before she gave her daughter a hug goodbye. The tears welled up in her eyes since she knew that her life in Abu Dhabi was going to be so lonely without her daughter. She almost regretted her decision to leave now. But the decision had been made so now she needed to stick by it. She also knew that the worst was still to come as she also had to tell her son that she was leaving and she had a bad feeling in her stomach that her son wouldn’t understand why she’d chosen to move to the other side of the world. [/QUOTE]
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