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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 254346" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Now I've caught up with the episodes you've posted so far [USER=82]@Toni[/USER]</p><p>First of all I must compliment you on your writing style. I see a clear improvement from season one and two. The way you've incorporated the songs is very modern and very typical for a tv series made in the 2000s. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/misc/m0719.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hat:" title="Hat :hat:" data-shortname=":hat:" /></p><p></p><p>Then as for the season itself it's been a roller coaster ride. I thoughts parts of it was really gloomy and sad. It had a dark edge to it. I guess it's the subject matter of people dying in 9/11 that is hard to cope with combined with that the Ewing's have lost everything, like Ewing Oil and Southfork that is a bit much at once. I was annoyed that you killed off Christopher, since like I mentioned I hated it when CC presumably did that in the final episode of Dallas TNT. But I was later relieved to learn that he was still alive but in hiding. So congratulations on your plot twists. I didn't see those coming.<img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2011/01/shappy_clap_100-101.gif?w=150&h=133" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":clap:" title="Clap :clap:" data-shortname=":clap:" /></p><p></p><p>Same thing with Alex Ward. Ugh I always hated the character, so annoying. So I was not happy to read he had slept with Pam. But later I found out he hadn't. Phew!</p><p></p><p>I guess reading your story I should expect the unexpected...</p><p></p><p>I like the way you've used JR's legacy and how John Ross and James inherited some more things from him.</p><p></p><p>I hate Shania already. Why did Mandy have to have had JR's daughter for? <img src="http://www.planetsmilies.com/smilies/rolleye/rolleye0010.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":re:" title="RE :re:" data-shortname=":re:" /></p><p></p><p>I loved that Bobby and Pam solved their problems and came back together again. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><p></p><p>I was surprised to learn that the father of Lucy's son is a new character we had never heard of. I had not expected that. Also since we were sort of lead to believe that the father could be Alan Beam I was surprised that the father was a black man, since that means that the child would have a darker skin tone. I mean think President Obama who had a white mother and a black father. So how anyone could suspect it was Alan's child is beyond me. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1714.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":confuse:" title="Confuse :confuse:" data-shortname=":confuse:" /></p><p>Did you originally plan to make the father someone else?</p><p></p><p>I was also surprised to learn that you changed Ray's paternity. I wonder how Ray will react when he finds out?</p><p></p><p>Bobby Jr and Will seems like a real mismatch. It's really older man - younger boy relationship. I bet his parents won't be thrilled if they found out who he is involved with.</p><p></p><p>I suppose Dusty and Sue Ellen can work together since JR is dead in your story. I always thought Dusty was one of Sue Ellen's better lovers.</p><p></p><p>Madeline sure was a <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/censored/t10501.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":censer:" title="Censor :censer:" data-shortname=":censer:" /> bitch. I am glad that they were able to reveal what a con artist she was and get Southfork back.</p><p></p><p>Oh and I see you've casted David Boreanaz in your story! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite6" alt=":cool:" title="Cool :cool:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":cool:" /></p><p></p><p>Over all kudos on creating such an intersting story with lots of plot twists. I look forward to read season four. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 254346, member: 57167"] Now I've caught up with the episodes you've posted so far [USER=82]@Toni[/USER] First of all I must compliment you on your writing style. I see a clear improvement from season one and two. The way you've incorporated the songs is very modern and very typical for a tv series made in the 2000s. :hat: Then as for the season itself it's been a roller coaster ride. I thoughts parts of it was really gloomy and sad. It had a dark edge to it. I guess it's the subject matter of people dying in 9/11 that is hard to cope with combined with that the Ewing's have lost everything, like Ewing Oil and Southfork that is a bit much at once. I was annoyed that you killed off Christopher, since like I mentioned I hated it when CC presumably did that in the final episode of Dallas TNT. But I was later relieved to learn that he was still alive but in hiding. So congratulations on your plot twists. I didn't see those coming.:clap: Same thing with Alex Ward. Ugh I always hated the character, so annoying. So I was not happy to read he had slept with Pam. But later I found out he hadn't. Phew! I guess reading your story I should expect the unexpected... I like the way you've used JR's legacy and how John Ross and James inherited some more things from him. I hate Shania already. Why did Mandy have to have had JR's daughter for? :re: I loved that Bobby and Pam solved their problems and came back together again. :kiss: I was surprised to learn that the father of Lucy's son is a new character we had never heard of. I had not expected that. Also since we were sort of lead to believe that the father could be Alan Beam I was surprised that the father was a black man, since that means that the child would have a darker skin tone. I mean think President Obama who had a white mother and a black father. So how anyone could suspect it was Alan's child is beyond me. :confuse: Did you originally plan to make the father someone else? I was also surprised to learn that you changed Ray's paternity. I wonder how Ray will react when he finds out? Bobby Jr and Will seems like a real mismatch. It's really older man - younger boy relationship. I bet his parents won't be thrilled if they found out who he is involved with. I suppose Dusty and Sue Ellen can work together since JR is dead in your story. I always thought Dusty was one of Sue Ellen's better lovers. Madeline sure was a :censer: bitch. I am glad that they were able to reveal what a con artist she was and get Southfork back. Oh and I see you've casted David Boreanaz in your story! :cool: Over all kudos on creating such an intersting story with lots of plot twists. I look forward to read season four. :) [/QUOTE]
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