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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Kenny Coyote" data-source="post: 162361" data-attributes="member: 102"><p>I'm just starting to read this and it's already getting good. I like how descriptive your style is. I quoted this particular paragraph because it shows just how descriptive your writing is. You use the same motif of water washing over her from beginning to end: "...the memories washed over her and it made Sue Ellen feel vulnerable...Sue Ellen could feel a tidal wave of emotions crash over her." And of course Sue Ellen is going through this while she waits for JR. She can hear him taking a shower...It's a very consistent motif of water - some of it literally water like the shower and some of it figuratively like the tidal wave of emotions.</p></blockquote><p></p>