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<blockquote data-quote="Ray&amp;Donna" data-source="post: 107864" data-attributes="member: 42"><p>September 18, 1998</p><p></p><p>The rain tapped out a rhythm on the rooftop, stranding all inside who might not have been there otherwise. It had been coming down steadily for the past two days, the clouds covering the sky and blocking the sun, casting their gray shadows on the sand. The water looked so foreboding, and yet so calm at the same time. </p><p></p><p>Ray sat in his bathrobe watching the rain drops bounce off the deck. He couldn’t say he was too disappointed by the weather. He had Donna all to himself, and she didn’t seem to mind being stuck inside, either. The rain drizzled onto the side of the house, beading up on the windows. Ray stole a glance at Donna, who was napping soundly in their bed. He made a mental note of her image, trying to freeze it forever in his mind. He looked back out at the water, watching the waves as they crashed and disappeared into the foam. He felt a slight chill as he watched the seagulls touch down on the beach. He took off his robe and crawled back into bed. He snuggled next to Donna and she stirred.</p><p></p><p>“Now why did you wake me up? I was having this wonderful dream that I was married to a cowboy and living on a ranch. Nothing like that ever happens in real life.”</p><p></p><p>He laughed. “I was cold, and you looked warm.” He put his arms around her. “Can you forgive me?”</p><p></p><p>She smiled. “I already have.” </p><p></p><p>“I think I could stay here with you, like this, all day long.”</p><p></p><p>She looked into his eyes. “The weather makes your offer even more tempting than usual.”</p><p></p><p>He stared intently at her face. “Did anyone ever tell you that you look the most beautiful when you’ve just woken up?”</p><p></p><p>“No, but keep talking. I like your compliments.”</p><p></p><p>He softly kissed her on the forehead. “I hope you never get tired of me.”</p><p></p><p>“I get tired <em>from</em> you, but I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of you.” She ran her hand over his thigh. He shivered, but not because he was still cold. </p><p>“You know, when it’s raining like this, there really is only one thing worth doing.”</p><p></p><p>Ray feigned confusion. “And what might that be?”</p><p></p><p>“I think you know.” She moved closer to him and pressed her lips to his. </p><p></p><p>She felt his hands caressing her back, working their magic over her skin. Their flesh began to radiate a heat as they converged, sending sparks up and down their bodies. Ray changed position so that he was on top of her, and she used her hands to massage his skin as he slipped inside of her. They moved together, loving each other in the way that only they knew how. Slowly they intensified their movements, each of them wanting to make the moment last as long as possible. There was a heightened sense of every touch, every kiss, and every sound. Ray began to accelerate his strokes, and in the moment they erupted together, it seemed as though they were frozen in time.</p><p></p><p>***</p><p></p><p>They were lying in bed afterward, lost in each other’s arms. While they had been too busy to notice, the rain finally cleared up and the sun began to </p><p>peek through the clouds. </p><p></p><p>Ray looked into her eyes and smiled. “Listen, how would you like to take a walk with me?”</p><p></p><p>“I’d like that, cowboy.” They kissed, and she pressed him close to her one last time before they got up to get dressed.</p><p></p><p>They walked down the beach, hand in hand, their feet marking a path in the wet sand. The sun seemed to follow them as they moved, shining a luster onto their lives as they made their way toward the horizon.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ray&Donna, post: 107864, member: 42"] September 18, 1998 The rain tapped out a rhythm on the rooftop, stranding all inside who might not have been there otherwise. It had been coming down steadily for the past two days, the clouds covering the sky and blocking the sun, casting their gray shadows on the sand. The water looked so foreboding, and yet so calm at the same time. Ray sat in his bathrobe watching the rain drops bounce off the deck. He couldn’t say he was too disappointed by the weather. He had Donna all to himself, and she didn’t seem to mind being stuck inside, either. The rain drizzled onto the side of the house, beading up on the windows. Ray stole a glance at Donna, who was napping soundly in their bed. He made a mental note of her image, trying to freeze it forever in his mind. He looked back out at the water, watching the waves as they crashed and disappeared into the foam. He felt a slight chill as he watched the seagulls touch down on the beach. He took off his robe and crawled back into bed. He snuggled next to Donna and she stirred. “Now why did you wake me up? I was having this wonderful dream that I was married to a cowboy and living on a ranch. Nothing like that ever happens in real life.” He laughed. “I was cold, and you looked warm.” He put his arms around her. “Can you forgive me?” She smiled. “I already have.” “I think I could stay here with you, like this, all day long.” She looked into his eyes. “The weather makes your offer even more tempting than usual.” He stared intently at her face. “Did anyone ever tell you that you look the most beautiful when you’ve just woken up?” “No, but keep talking. I like your compliments.” He softly kissed her on the forehead. “I hope you never get tired of me.” “I get tired [I]from[/I] you, but I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of you.” She ran her hand over his thigh. He shivered, but not because he was still cold. “You know, when it’s raining like this, there really is only one thing worth doing.” Ray feigned confusion. “And what might that be?” “I think you know.” She moved closer to him and pressed her lips to his. She felt his hands caressing her back, working their magic over her skin. Their flesh began to radiate a heat as they converged, sending sparks up and down their bodies. Ray changed position so that he was on top of her, and she used her hands to massage his skin as he slipped inside of her. They moved together, loving each other in the way that only they knew how. Slowly they intensified their movements, each of them wanting to make the moment last as long as possible. There was a heightened sense of every touch, every kiss, and every sound. Ray began to accelerate his strokes, and in the moment they erupted together, it seemed as though they were frozen in time. *** They were lying in bed afterward, lost in each other’s arms. While they had been too busy to notice, the rain finally cleared up and the sun began to peek through the clouds. Ray looked into her eyes and smiled. “Listen, how would you like to take a walk with me?” “I’d like that, cowboy.” They kissed, and she pressed him close to her one last time before they got up to get dressed. They walked down the beach, hand in hand, their feet marking a path in the wet sand. The sun seemed to follow them as they moved, shining a luster onto their lives as they made their way toward the horizon. [/QUOTE]
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