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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 90235" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>I loved this update about Ray and Donna meeting coincidently at the airport! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/girls/m04127.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":spinning:" title="Spinning :spinning:" data-shortname=":spinning:" /> Full scoreboard once again! <img src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8UlTaNDauA0XxeF5Ya2ZFlGqsSeZ7JPKH0IzDcXOym515uVp5&s" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":loveit:" title="Love it :loveit:" data-shortname=":loveit:" /></p><p></p><p>I loved the similarities of the intro of both updates about the Cowboy and the Lady: <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k0512.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":gotcha:" title="Gotcha :gotcha:" data-shortname=":gotcha:" /></p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">"<em>June 2, 1998. His plane touched down in Dallas.</em>"</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">"<em>June 2, 1998. Her plane left out of Washington.</em>"</li> </ul><p>Of course, Ray had to ask the car rental company whether they happened to have a white Jeep Truck! :cooler: I wouldn't have it any other way! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /> And I feel fairly confident that Ray has already in his head put an order of that kind of car at the car dealership! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /> He wants to turn back time so to speak and re-visit the years when he was the happiest! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> And what better way of doing just that by buying back his old place and also drive a white Jeep Truck! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/fun/m0157.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":dance:" title="Dance :dance:" data-shortname=":dance:" /></p><p></p><p>Great ending to the part about Ray: "<em>After all these years, he couldn’t figure out why he had ever left.</em>" <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><p></p><p>Donna and Margaret's conversation was really cute! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> BTW, how old is Margaret in this fanfic? <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></p><p></p><p>Oh, this amazing sentence didn't slip by me without me re-reading it several times: "<em>And even though her cowboy was gone, she still longed to be there again.</em>" <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /> And neither did these statements by mother and daughter!: "<em>I miss Daddy." "I do, too!</em>". <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/hug/t4614.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hug:" title="Hug :hug:" data-shortname=":hug:" /></p><p></p><p>LOL ... ... Donna was hilarious when talking about Texas!: “<em>Well, there are barbeques, horses to ride, stuff like that. And if all of that bores you, you can shove someone in a pool.</em>” <img src="http://smileys.smilchat.net/smiley/hello/happy/lol-2.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lolo:" title="Lolo :lolo:" data-shortname=":lolo:" /></p><p></p><p>Wonderful reunion of the Krebbs family! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /> May I just add that I'm ecstatic that Ray finally left Europe (and also Jenna) behind and returned to the Lone Star State! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k0512.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":gotcha:" title="Gotcha :gotcha:" data-shortname=":gotcha:" /></p><p></p><p>I have to emphasize several parts that I just cheerish so much, since they also set the stage for the time to come: <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">"<em>He wondered if the day’s events had been just a coincidence. He knew that he was either fortunate or pretty damn lucky. Not only was he home, but he also had his daughter in the same county. And the love of his life.</em>"</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">"<em>Seeing Donna in the airport had stirred feelings that had laid dormant all these years, feelings he had tried to forget. He fell asleep and began to dream of the first time he had met Donna, nearly twenty years before.</em>"</li> </ul><p>***</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>"Was it just a coincidence? What did it all mean? Why had they both decided, after all this time, to return to Braddock?"</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>"The happiest part of her life was her second marriage. ... ... She had felt that spark again today. In spite of her feelings, she didn’t want to be pulled back into another relationship so quickly, especially one that hadn’t worked in the first place.</em>"</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">"<em>She finally turned down the lights and went to bed. She lay there for the longest time, thinking about the men she had loved and the things she had accomplished. But she was more proud of Margaret than anyone else—her own part of Ray. She drifted off to sleep and dreamed about the day they had parted.</em>"</li> </ul><p>Please update soon! <img src="http://www.allsmileys.com/files/sweetim-communicate/6278.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":best:" title="Best :best:" data-shortname=":best:" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 90235, member: 312"] I loved this update about Ray and Donna meeting coincidently at the airport! :spinning: Full scoreboard once again! :loveit: I loved the similarities of the intro of both updates about the Cowboy and the Lady: :gotcha: [LIST] [*]"[I]June 2, 1998. His plane touched down in Dallas.[/I]" [*]"[I]June 2, 1998. Her plane left out of Washington.[/I]" [/LIST] Of course, Ray had to ask the car rental company whether they happened to have a white Jeep Truck! :cooler: I wouldn't have it any other way! ;) And I feel fairly confident that Ray has already in his head put an order of that kind of car at the car dealership! :D He wants to turn back time so to speak and re-visit the years when he was the happiest! :) And what better way of doing just that by buying back his old place and also drive a white Jeep Truck! :dance: Great ending to the part about Ray: "[I]After all these years, he couldn’t figure out why he had ever left.[/I]" :kiss: Donna and Margaret's conversation was really cute! :) BTW, how old is Margaret in this fanfic? :think: Oh, this amazing sentence didn't slip by me without me re-reading it several times: "[I]And even though her cowboy was gone, she still longed to be there again.[/I]" :kiss: And neither did these statements by mother and daughter!: "[I]I miss Daddy." "I do, too![/I]". :hug: LOL ... ... Donna was hilarious when talking about Texas!: “[I]Well, there are barbeques, horses to ride, stuff like that. And if all of that bores you, you can shove someone in a pool.[/I]” :lolo: Wonderful reunion of the Krebbs family! :kiss::kiss::kiss: May I just add that I'm ecstatic that Ray finally left Europe (and also Jenna) behind and returned to the Lone Star State! :gotcha: I have to emphasize several parts that I just cheerish so much, since they also set the stage for the time to come: :kiss: [LIST] [*]"[I]He wondered if the day’s events had been just a coincidence. He knew that he was either fortunate or pretty damn lucky. Not only was he home, but he also had his daughter in the same county. And the love of his life.[/I]" [*]"[I]Seeing Donna in the airport had stirred feelings that had laid dormant all these years, feelings he had tried to forget. He fell asleep and began to dream of the first time he had met Donna, nearly twenty years before.[/I]" [/LIST] *** [LIST] [*][I]"Was it just a coincidence? What did it all mean? Why had they both decided, after all this time, to return to Braddock?"[/I] [*][I]"The happiest part of her life was her second marriage. ... ... She had felt that spark again today. In spite of her feelings, she didn’t want to be pulled back into another relationship so quickly, especially one that hadn’t worked in the first place.[/I]" [*]"[I]She finally turned down the lights and went to bed. She lay there for the longest time, thinking about the men she had loved and the things she had accomplished. But she was more proud of Margaret than anyone else—her own part of Ray. She drifted off to sleep and dreamed about the day they had parted.[/I]" [/LIST] Please update soon! :best: [/QUOTE]
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