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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 103449" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>Excellent update about Cliff, Afton, and Becky out shopping for Christopher's birthday present!<img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/girls/m04127.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":spinning:" title="Spinning :spinning:" data-shortname=":spinning:" /> The way that you write the characters is just superb! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /></p><p></p><p>Great dialogue between the three of them. I especially liked this part:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Becky’s staying with Mitch while I’m in Philadelphia” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“What’s in Philadelphia?” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Well if you must know I’m visiting Mario’s parents.” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“So why isn’t Becky coming with you?” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1714.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":confuse:" title="Confuse :confuse:" data-shortname=":confuse:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“I’m not invited, besides I don’t wanna meet those snobs anyway!” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite11" alt=":rolleyes:" title="Roll Eyes :rolleyes:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":rolleyes:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Becky!” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite4" alt=":mad:" title="Mad :mad:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":mad:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Why do you think they’re snobs?” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite12" alt="o_O" title="Er... what? o_O" loading="lazy" data-shortname="o_O" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Hello have you met Mario?” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite9" alt=":eek:" title="Eek! :eek:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":eek:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Um…can’t say I have…” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Oh lucky you!” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></em></li> </ul><p>Becky's best line has to be: “<em>Sure I like [Mario] as much as I like a good root canal!</em>” :laugh1:</p><p></p><p>I felt bad for Cliff that he wasn't asked if his daughter could spend the weekend with him! It's not that I mind her staying with Lucy and Mitch, but I think (under the circumstances) that Becky probably would have preferred to stay with her dad! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /><img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /><img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></p><p></p><p></p><p>I'm looking forward to both the dinner party on Christopher's actual birthday and also the birthday party on the weekend! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> I wonder if Cliff and Afton will be civil towards one another? Could this be the time when Afton finally realizes that she still has feelings for Cliff? I also wonder if anyone will end up in the Southfork pool? <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /><img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /> </p><p></p><p>Please update soon, Karin! <img src="http://www.allsmileys.com/files/sweetim-communicate/6278.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":best:" title="Best :best:" data-shortname=":best:" /> If I get down on my knees, can we please have a double scoop today? <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/sbowing_100-109.gif?w=150&h=102" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":bowing" title="Bowing :bowing" data-shortname=":bowing" /> </p><p></p><p></p><p>PS. If Pam ends up picking an outfit for Bobby that he doesn't approve of, maybe he should just "set up" something so that he "happens" to fall in the pool (and thus will have to change clothes)? <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_hehe_100-102.gif?w=145&h=150" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle :giggle:" data-shortname=":giggle:" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 103449, member: 312"] Excellent update about Cliff, Afton, and Becky out shopping for Christopher's birthday present!:spinning: The way that you write the characters is just superb! :jolly: Great dialogue between the three of them. I especially liked this part: [LIST] [*][I]“Becky’s staying with Mitch while I’m in Philadelphia” :)[/I] [*][I]“What’s in Philadelphia?” :think:[/I] [*][I]“Well if you must know I’m visiting Mario’s parents.” :p[/I] [*][I]“So why isn’t Becky coming with you?” :confuse:[/I] [*][I]“I’m not invited, besides I don’t wanna meet those snobs anyway!” :rolleyes:[/I] [*][I]“Becky!” :mad:[/I] [*][I]“Why do you think they’re snobs?” o_O[/I] [*][I]“Hello have you met Mario?” :eek:[/I] [*][I]“Um…can’t say I have…” :([/I] [*][I]“Oh lucky you!” :D[/I] [/LIST] Becky's best line has to be: “[I]Sure I like [Mario] as much as I like a good root canal![/I]” :laugh1: I felt bad for Cliff that he wasn't asked if his daughter could spend the weekend with him! It's not that I mind her staying with Lucy and Mitch, but I think (under the circumstances) that Becky probably would have preferred to stay with her dad! :(:(:( I'm looking forward to both the dinner party on Christopher's actual birthday and also the birthday party on the weekend! :) I wonder if Cliff and Afton will be civil towards one another? Could this be the time when Afton finally realizes that she still has feelings for Cliff? I also wonder if anyone will end up in the Southfork pool? :think::D Please update soon, Karin! :best: If I get down on my knees, can we please have a double scoop today? :bowing PS. If Pam ends up picking an outfit for Bobby that he doesn't approve of, maybe he should just "set up" something so that he "happens" to fall in the pool (and thus will have to change clothes)? :giggle: [/QUOTE]
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