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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 105562" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you so much for the feedback everyone. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Presea, </strong>I'm delighted that you've caught up. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>I've missed reading your feedback and comments. I'm glad that you love Mitch and that you think he's staying true to character here. </p><p>You know maybe Chris is typically teenage boy since he hasn't changed much from the first draft that we wrote when we were teenage girls. We try not to change too much of the teenagers and kids scenes from the original draft since we figured we'd known better what it was like being their age when we first wrote their scenes than we do now as adults. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p>I agree that Lucas can't just forget about Bobby being his dad. It's unfair of Jenna to ask him to. </p><p></p><p>Kurt and Jenna? :eyes:</p><p>Hmm... he does get along great with her son but I wonder how you see a romantic pairing there...</p><p>Oh well you'll see where the story will go. </p><p></p><p>Good that you think the Mario stuff is funny as there's more coming up. </p><p></p><p><strong>Ms Southworth,</strong> I am glad that it pleased you how Lucy turned down John Ross' request. She has wisened up after the last time he tricked her. </p><p>However John Ross is not her nephew. He is her cousin. </p><p></p><p>I agree that John Ross should be honest with Paula. It never works to build a long lasting relationship built on lies. But John Ross hasn't learnt this lesson yet. </p><p></p><p>Anyway you will see who John Ross will get to drive him instead of Lucy. Anyone wanna take a guess on who that will be? </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>True. Maybe it's moving too slow. But I think most fans prefer a slow moving plot with a proper build up and pay off than one plot twist after another, right?</p><p></p><p>This is actually episode 11. Some of the show downs you are asking for are in episode 12. Christopher's masquerade takes up most of this episode actually. So don't worry it's a lot more than one scene. </p><p></p><p>Okay so moving on to tonight's<strong> update: </strong></p><p></p><p></p><p>At a mall in southern Dallas were Jenna, Martha and Lucas out shopping for school supplies for Lucas. Jenna held up a note book with an American flag on it and asked, “Do you want this notebook?”</p><p></p><p>Lucas shook his head. “No I want this one,” Lucas picked up another one with cars on the front.</p><p></p><p>Jenna smiled, “Of course you do!” They put it down in the shopping cart.</p><p></p><p>“So what else do we need?” Martha asked.</p><p></p><p>“Let’s see. We’ve got notebook, pencils, pens, eraser, lunchbox… calculator!” Jenna exclaimed and they walked over towards another shelf. Jenna and Lucas started to look at the calculators. Martha smiled observing them but then her gaze wandered off and that was when she spotted him at the other side of the store. Recognizing the man immediately Martha could feel the blood in her veins freeze. Luckily he hadn’t noticed her yet but she knew it was only a question of time until he did. As Jenna put down the calculator Lucas wanted in the cart she looked over to see Martha trying to hide her face behind Lucas notebook. “What?” Jenna asked. Martha nodded towards the man. Jenna looked towards him and she surely didn’t like what she saw, “Is he one of…”</p><p></p><p>“Yes!” Martha nodded, suddenly looking panicked. “I have to get out of here.”</p><p></p><p>Jenna pulled up her car keys and gave them to Martha. “Wait for us in the car. I’ll just pay and we’ll be right out.”</p><p></p><p> Martha nodded, before lowering her head hurrying to get out of the store. Lucas gave her a questioning look. “Where is Ma…”</p><p></p><p>“She’s not feeling well,” Jenna interrupted him. “Come on let’s pay for this and go home.”</p><p></p><p>“But what about that car you promised to get me?” Lucas objected.</p><p></p><p>“We’ll get it some other time.”</p><p></p><p>“But…”</p><p></p><p>“No buts Lucas, we have to get out of here now,” Jenna said firmly and noticing the fear in his mom’s voice Lucas knew better than to cause a scene. “Let’s go,” Jenna insisted as she started pulling Lucas with her towards the register and as far away from the scary looking man as she could!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 105562, member: 57167"] Thank you so much for the feedback everyone. :) [B]Presea, [/B]I'm delighted that you've caught up. :) I've missed reading your feedback and comments. I'm glad that you love Mitch and that you think he's staying true to character here. You know maybe Chris is typically teenage boy since he hasn't changed much from the first draft that we wrote when we were teenage girls. We try not to change too much of the teenagers and kids scenes from the original draft since we figured we'd known better what it was like being their age when we first wrote their scenes than we do now as adults. ;) I agree that Lucas can't just forget about Bobby being his dad. It's unfair of Jenna to ask him to. Kurt and Jenna? :eyes: Hmm... he does get along great with her son but I wonder how you see a romantic pairing there... Oh well you'll see where the story will go. Good that you think the Mario stuff is funny as there's more coming up. [B]Ms Southworth,[/B] I am glad that it pleased you how Lucy turned down John Ross' request. She has wisened up after the last time he tricked her. However John Ross is not her nephew. He is her cousin. I agree that John Ross should be honest with Paula. It never works to build a long lasting relationship built on lies. But John Ross hasn't learnt this lesson yet. Anyway you will see who John Ross will get to drive him instead of Lucy. Anyone wanna take a guess on who that will be? True. Maybe it's moving too slow. But I think most fans prefer a slow moving plot with a proper build up and pay off than one plot twist after another, right? This is actually episode 11. Some of the show downs you are asking for are in episode 12. Christopher's masquerade takes up most of this episode actually. So don't worry it's a lot more than one scene. Okay so moving on to tonight's[B] update: [/B] At a mall in southern Dallas were Jenna, Martha and Lucas out shopping for school supplies for Lucas. Jenna held up a note book with an American flag on it and asked, “Do you want this notebook?” Lucas shook his head. “No I want this one,” Lucas picked up another one with cars on the front. Jenna smiled, “Of course you do!” They put it down in the shopping cart. “So what else do we need?” Martha asked. “Let’s see. We’ve got notebook, pencils, pens, eraser, lunchbox… calculator!” Jenna exclaimed and they walked over towards another shelf. Jenna and Lucas started to look at the calculators. Martha smiled observing them but then her gaze wandered off and that was when she spotted him at the other side of the store. Recognizing the man immediately Martha could feel the blood in her veins freeze. Luckily he hadn’t noticed her yet but she knew it was only a question of time until he did. As Jenna put down the calculator Lucas wanted in the cart she looked over to see Martha trying to hide her face behind Lucas notebook. “What?” Jenna asked. Martha nodded towards the man. Jenna looked towards him and she surely didn’t like what she saw, “Is he one of…” “Yes!” Martha nodded, suddenly looking panicked. “I have to get out of here.” Jenna pulled up her car keys and gave them to Martha. “Wait for us in the car. I’ll just pay and we’ll be right out.” Martha nodded, before lowering her head hurrying to get out of the store. Lucas gave her a questioning look. “Where is Ma…” “She’s not feeling well,” Jenna interrupted him. “Come on let’s pay for this and go home.” “But what about that car you promised to get me?” Lucas objected. “We’ll get it some other time.” “But…” “No buts Lucas, we have to get out of here now,” Jenna said firmly and noticing the fear in his mom’s voice Lucas knew better than to cause a scene. “Let’s go,” Jenna insisted as she started pulling Lucas with her towards the register and as far away from the scary looking man as she could! [/QUOTE]
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