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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 50441" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Ms. Southworth, </strong>I disagree with you when you say that Donna shouldn't be with Ray and Margaret when they bond because considering the fact that Margaret barely knows her father having Donna there helps the situation and it also gives the Krebbs some time to spend together as a family. Something which they have never really had. </p><p>I'm sure I'll get around to reading GWTW again some day when I run out of other books to read. It is my most favorite movie so I really love the story and characters. </p><p></p><p>I'll hold off on those popcorns until you read "The next morning" if I were you. Also sorry to disappoint you but Bobby will not be in today's scene. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Sanda,</strong> I'm glad you're still enjoying this story. Dallas is my favorite tv-show ever. So it's fun to write about these characters that we all love. You know sometimes I feel like we've adopted them. Since they were never ours to start with. </p><p></p><p><strong>Tommie, </strong>well considering how close Donna and Ray used to be to Clayton and Miss Ellie we thought it would be nice to make a family day out of it today. But don't worry learning how to ride with Ray & Donna is coming up later on. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p>Anyway here's today's update: </p><p></p><p>At Graceland Plaza, the gift shop at Graceland, were Jenna, Charlie and Lucas walking around looking for souvenirs. They had already put several things in their shopping basket however Lucas was desperately trying to find the one thing he really wanted, a pink Cadillac. He looked everywhere but the toy car was nowhere in sight, “Mommy I don’t see any Cadillacs!”</p><p></p><p>“I’m sure they must have it,” Jenna said. “They have everything else Elvis!”</p><p></p><p>“But I don’t see it,” Lucas whined. “Help me look!” </p><p></p><p>“Well there’s someone who works in the store, maybe he can help us?” Charlie suggested pointing towards a man putting up Elvis clocks on a shelf.</p><p></p><p> “Okay,” Lucas nodded and they walked up towards the salesman.</p><p></p><p>Jenna tapped the man on the shoulder saying, “Excuse me?” The man turned around and Jenna went on, “My son is looking for a pink Cadillac, but we can’t seem to find one!”</p><p></p><p> “Well that’s no problem, just follow me!” The salesman said.</p><p></p><p> “Thank you sir,” Lucas smiled. They walked over towards a shelf, which was empty.</p><p></p><p>The salesman scratched his head, “Oh I’m sorry, looks like we’re out of them. I could have sworn I saw some earlier today. Let me double check.”</p><p></p><p> The man walked away and Lucas turned to Jenna and said, “Mommy I don’t like this I want my Cadillac!” </p><p></p><p> “I know sweetie,” Jenna said. “Let’s hope they find one!”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah otherwise the trip to Dallas ain’t gonna be fun!” Charlie sighed.</p><p></p><p> The man returned holding a book and said, “I’m afraid we’ve just sold the last Cadillac, five minutes ago!”</p><p></p><p> “What?” Lucas exclaimed. “No Cadillac?”</p><p></p><p> “I’m afraid not,” The man said.</p><p></p><p> “But I want one!” Lucas pouted.</p><p></p><p>“Well wasn’t there another gift shop nearby?” Charlie asked.</p><p></p><p>“I’m afraid that won’t help you, they’re out as well,” The salesman said.</p><p></p><p> Jenna sighed, “So when will you receive new ones?”</p><p></p><p> “Not until next week, but if you’re around then…”</p><p></p><p> “We won’t be,” Charlie shook her head. </p><p></p><p> “That’s too bad, however I do have a little gift for the boy,” The salesman held up a book and said, “This is the Graceland Children’s Activity Book!”</p><p></p><p> Lucas looked displeased at the book and put out his lip pouting, “No thank you. I want my Cadillac!”</p><p></p><p> Jenna sighed, “Sweetheart, they don’t have one, now take the book the man so kindly offers you!”</p><p></p><p>“No I don’t want any stupid book, I want my Cadillac!” Lucas started crying.</p><p></p><p> “Stop it Lucas, you’re embarrassing,” Charlie scolded Lucas.</p><p></p><p>Jenna reached for the book and said, “We’ll take the book, thank you!” Then she dragged a crying Lucas out of the store, as people were staring at them.</p><p></p><p>Charlie looked from the people staring at her to the overstuffed shopping basket and said sheepishly to the salesman, “I’m sorry about that, um…do you take American Express?”</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 50441, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. :) [B]Ms. Southworth, [/B]I disagree with you when you say that Donna shouldn't be with Ray and Margaret when they bond because considering the fact that Margaret barely knows her father having Donna there helps the situation and it also gives the Krebbs some time to spend together as a family. Something which they have never really had. I'm sure I'll get around to reading GWTW again some day when I run out of other books to read. It is my most favorite movie so I really love the story and characters. I'll hold off on those popcorns until you read "The next morning" if I were you. Also sorry to disappoint you but Bobby will not be in today's scene. :( [B]Sanda,[/B] I'm glad you're still enjoying this story. Dallas is my favorite tv-show ever. So it's fun to write about these characters that we all love. You know sometimes I feel like we've adopted them. Since they were never ours to start with. [B]Tommie, [/B]well considering how close Donna and Ray used to be to Clayton and Miss Ellie we thought it would be nice to make a family day out of it today. But don't worry learning how to ride with Ray & Donna is coming up later on. ;) Anyway here's today's update: At Graceland Plaza, the gift shop at Graceland, were Jenna, Charlie and Lucas walking around looking for souvenirs. They had already put several things in their shopping basket however Lucas was desperately trying to find the one thing he really wanted, a pink Cadillac. He looked everywhere but the toy car was nowhere in sight, “Mommy I don’t see any Cadillacs!” “I’m sure they must have it,” Jenna said. “They have everything else Elvis!” “But I don’t see it,” Lucas whined. “Help me look!” “Well there’s someone who works in the store, maybe he can help us?” Charlie suggested pointing towards a man putting up Elvis clocks on a shelf. “Okay,” Lucas nodded and they walked up towards the salesman. Jenna tapped the man on the shoulder saying, “Excuse me?” The man turned around and Jenna went on, “My son is looking for a pink Cadillac, but we can’t seem to find one!” “Well that’s no problem, just follow me!” The salesman said. “Thank you sir,” Lucas smiled. They walked over towards a shelf, which was empty. The salesman scratched his head, “Oh I’m sorry, looks like we’re out of them. I could have sworn I saw some earlier today. Let me double check.” The man walked away and Lucas turned to Jenna and said, “Mommy I don’t like this I want my Cadillac!” “I know sweetie,” Jenna said. “Let’s hope they find one!” “Yeah otherwise the trip to Dallas ain’t gonna be fun!” Charlie sighed. The man returned holding a book and said, “I’m afraid we’ve just sold the last Cadillac, five minutes ago!” “What?” Lucas exclaimed. “No Cadillac?” “I’m afraid not,” The man said. “But I want one!” Lucas pouted. “Well wasn’t there another gift shop nearby?” Charlie asked. “I’m afraid that won’t help you, they’re out as well,” The salesman said. Jenna sighed, “So when will you receive new ones?” “Not until next week, but if you’re around then…” “We won’t be,” Charlie shook her head. “That’s too bad, however I do have a little gift for the boy,” The salesman held up a book and said, “This is the Graceland Children’s Activity Book!” Lucas looked displeased at the book and put out his lip pouting, “No thank you. I want my Cadillac!” Jenna sighed, “Sweetheart, they don’t have one, now take the book the man so kindly offers you!” “No I don’t want any stupid book, I want my Cadillac!” Lucas started crying. “Stop it Lucas, you’re embarrassing,” Charlie scolded Lucas. Jenna reached for the book and said, “We’ll take the book, thank you!” Then she dragged a crying Lucas out of the store, as people were staring at them. Charlie looked from the people staring at her to the overstuffed shopping basket and said sheepishly to the salesman, “I’m sorry about that, um…do you take American Express?” [/QUOTE]
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