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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 52052" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for your feedback. It's much appreciated as always. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Sanda,</strong> I'm glad you're still loving this story. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>You'll find out tomorrow what's happened to Lucas...</p><p></p><p><strong>Presea, </strong>I think as a writer you need to understand where the characters are coming from in order to be able to write them. So we've definitely spent some time trying to figure out where Katherine would be in the 1990's given her history on the show. We've also revised her a little from our first draft and toned down certain aspects to make her more likable. So hopefully you will be pleased with our version of Katherine once she shows up (Episode 6). </p><p></p><p>Then as for on the show. I really don't think Katherine ever wanted to kill Pam. She was jealous of Pam for having Bobby as a husband for sure and she wanted to take her place but she never wanted to see her dead. </p><p></p><p>You know Katherine and Mark Graison being married in "Return to Southfork" and Pam having a child with Mark (that had since died) was not my favorite storyline. I really didn't like that part. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /> </p><p></p><p>Then as for Lucas, at this point he is mostly confused about the whole thing and upset that the man who he thought was his father really isn't more than he's hurt about the other man's rejection. But yeah Jenna's secret is out and it's going to have consequences both for her, Ray, Bobby and Lucas as well as Christopher. </p><p></p><p><strong>Silvie,</strong> you're welcome about the story. I am glad you're enjoying it. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Okay enough said, let's move on to today's update: </p><p></p><p>At Southfork, Pam walked over towards Christopher’s door. She hesitated for a moment as she was not looking forward to have this conversation. But she knew that if she wanted to mend her relationship with her son it was long overdue. So Pam knocked on Christopher’s door and said, “Christopher, it’s mom, can I come in?”</p><p></p><p>Her voice startled Christopher, as he wondered what his mother wanted. Because so far she had done a pretty good job at avoiding one on one time with him. So a part of him felt hopeful that she might actually be here to ask for his forgiveness. But not wanting to get his hopes up only for them to be dashed again, he hid his emotions behind a mask of anger as he yelled, “Sure as long as you are not gonna extend my grounding!”</p><p></p><p>Pam entered the room and said, “Do you have a minute?”</p><p></p><p>“I’m grounded, what do you think?” Christopher asked sarcastically. </p><p></p><p>“Are you angry with me?”</p><p></p><p>“No of course not, whatever gave you that idea?” Christopher asked angrily. “I mean you just walked out of my life when I was six years old and the first thing you do when you come back is to ground me…so why do you think I’m angry?!”</p><p></p><p>“Look Christopher I’m sorry!” Pam said pleadingly. “I know you have every reason to be angry at me and I don’t blame you for hating me but can you at least…”</p><p></p><p>“I don’t hate you,” Christopher said in a small voice. “I hated that you left me, but I don’t hate you.”</p><p></p><p>“Well that’s a start,” Pam said obviously relieved.</p><p></p><p>“It is,” Christopher agreed. They went quiet for a moment as Christopher looked at her expectantly before he asked, “So what were you going to say?”</p><p></p><p>“I was going to ask you to hear me out.”</p><p></p><p>“I’m listening.”</p><p></p><p>“Good,” Pam said, as she knew that this was her chance to make it right. But somehow the words wouldn’t come. She had never pictured that it would be this hard to talk to her son. The way he looked at her with his innocent blue eyes was making it hard on her. She could sense that he wanted something from her. He was probably looking for an explanation she wasn’t ready to give him yet. So instead she finally said, “Listen why don’t you and I do something fun today?”</p><p></p><p>“You want to spend the day with me?” Christopher’s facial expression brightened. </p><p></p><p> “Yeah if you want,” Pam said nervously. “I know I can never make up for all the lost years but it would be good to catch up some with you. Please Christopher, I want to get to know my son again,” Pam pleaded with him.</p><p></p><p>“Sounds good except for that I’m grounded,” Christopher reminded her.</p><p></p><p>“Oh that’s not a problem. You’ll see, since I was the one who grounded you, I can un-ground you for today,” Pam reasoned. “Come on what do you say, how about spending some time with your mom?”</p><p></p><p>“Alright, I guess it beats being grounded.”</p><p></p><p>“Good, so want do you want to do?”</p><p></p><p>“How about bowling?” Christopher suggested. </p><p></p><p>“Bowling?!” Pam sighed. “But I don’t know how to.”</p><p></p><p>“Great then I’ll win,” Christopher smiled, as he and Pam left the room together.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 52052, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for your feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :) [B]Sanda,[/B] I'm glad you're still loving this story. :) You'll find out tomorrow what's happened to Lucas... [B]Presea, [/B]I think as a writer you need to understand where the characters are coming from in order to be able to write them. So we've definitely spent some time trying to figure out where Katherine would be in the 1990's given her history on the show. We've also revised her a little from our first draft and toned down certain aspects to make her more likable. So hopefully you will be pleased with our version of Katherine once she shows up (Episode 6). Then as for on the show. I really don't think Katherine ever wanted to kill Pam. She was jealous of Pam for having Bobby as a husband for sure and she wanted to take her place but she never wanted to see her dead. You know Katherine and Mark Graison being married in "Return to Southfork" and Pam having a child with Mark (that had since died) was not my favorite storyline. I really didn't like that part. :( Then as for Lucas, at this point he is mostly confused about the whole thing and upset that the man who he thought was his father really isn't more than he's hurt about the other man's rejection. But yeah Jenna's secret is out and it's going to have consequences both for her, Ray, Bobby and Lucas as well as Christopher. [B]Silvie,[/B] you're welcome about the story. I am glad you're enjoying it. :) Okay enough said, let's move on to today's update: At Southfork, Pam walked over towards Christopher’s door. She hesitated for a moment as she was not looking forward to have this conversation. But she knew that if she wanted to mend her relationship with her son it was long overdue. So Pam knocked on Christopher’s door and said, “Christopher, it’s mom, can I come in?” Her voice startled Christopher, as he wondered what his mother wanted. Because so far she had done a pretty good job at avoiding one on one time with him. So a part of him felt hopeful that she might actually be here to ask for his forgiveness. But not wanting to get his hopes up only for them to be dashed again, he hid his emotions behind a mask of anger as he yelled, “Sure as long as you are not gonna extend my grounding!” Pam entered the room and said, “Do you have a minute?” “I’m grounded, what do you think?” Christopher asked sarcastically. “Are you angry with me?” “No of course not, whatever gave you that idea?” Christopher asked angrily. “I mean you just walked out of my life when I was six years old and the first thing you do when you come back is to ground me…so why do you think I’m angry?!” “Look Christopher I’m sorry!” Pam said pleadingly. “I know you have every reason to be angry at me and I don’t blame you for hating me but can you at least…” “I don’t hate you,” Christopher said in a small voice. “I hated that you left me, but I don’t hate you.” “Well that’s a start,” Pam said obviously relieved. “It is,” Christopher agreed. They went quiet for a moment as Christopher looked at her expectantly before he asked, “So what were you going to say?” “I was going to ask you to hear me out.” “I’m listening.” “Good,” Pam said, as she knew that this was her chance to make it right. But somehow the words wouldn’t come. She had never pictured that it would be this hard to talk to her son. The way he looked at her with his innocent blue eyes was making it hard on her. She could sense that he wanted something from her. He was probably looking for an explanation she wasn’t ready to give him yet. So instead she finally said, “Listen why don’t you and I do something fun today?” “You want to spend the day with me?” Christopher’s facial expression brightened. “Yeah if you want,” Pam said nervously. “I know I can never make up for all the lost years but it would be good to catch up some with you. Please Christopher, I want to get to know my son again,” Pam pleaded with him. “Sounds good except for that I’m grounded,” Christopher reminded her. “Oh that’s not a problem. You’ll see, since I was the one who grounded you, I can un-ground you for today,” Pam reasoned. “Come on what do you say, how about spending some time with your mom?” “Alright, I guess it beats being grounded.” “Good, so want do you want to do?” “How about bowling?” Christopher suggested. “Bowling?!” Pam sighed. “But I don’t know how to.” “Great then I’ll win,” Christopher smiled, as he and Pam left the room together. [/QUOTE]
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