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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 64951" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>As some of you might have noticed I've now gotten to the point where I've posted the scene that I originally pulled out and posted first in the one-shot thread, which eventually lead to that this story is being posted right now! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p><p></p><p>So I guess it's fair to say that the continuation of what you've been waiting for will be posted from this point on...</p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong>Ms Southworth,</strong> thanks for saying that it was a beautiful JR/SE scene. Then as for how long Sue Ellen will be able to fight her feelings for JR. Well read on and you'll see... <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p>I won't give that away. However what I will say is that Sue Ellen's feelings for JR has nothing to do with Don. She is not looking to get back at Don or anything like that. She simply loved JR first and she married Don to try to forget about him and move on but it didn't work...</p><p></p><p>I get what you are saying about how Sue Ellen's sexual attraction to JR is not really a sign of weakness as long as she's strong enough to resist him until she is not legally married to someone else. Or at least I think that's the point you were trying to get across. So it makes sense to me. </p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong>Presea,</strong> you are right that if JR/SE wants their relationship to really work in the future they need to address their problems and what went wrong between them in the first place. Personally I think the scene in episode five where she apologized for shooting him and he apologized for cheating on her was a good starting point. </p><p></p><p>I'm glad that you think I know how to write Katherine the right way. I take that as a compliment. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>Also you'd be pleased to know that the reason JR is working late this evening is because he has a meeting scheduled with Parker Shipping...</p><p></p><p><strong>Miss Texas 1967,</strong> no it's not terrible that you forgot all about Don and that you enjoy JR/SE together. I think most of us do. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>You know when I think of Don I think of the scene where he talked Sue Ellen into coming to England with him and pulled out his grey hat. I thought he was such a bore! </p><p>Anyway good points about JR/SE and why them getting into a relationship at this point is a bad idea...</p><p></p><p>Okay so here's another <strong>update: </strong></p><p></p><p></p><p>At the Diamond’s hotel was Jenna sitting reading the morning paper and drinking a cup of coffee when Charlie came in through the door to their suite. “Charlie?”</p><p></p><p>“Mom what are you doing up so early?” Charlie asked. “Surely you haven’t waited up for me now, have you?”</p><p></p><p>“No of course not,” Jenna laughed. “I just couldn’t sleep any longer. There’s so much to do with the moving today.”</p><p></p><p>“Oh right was that today?”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah and don’t forget that you and Randy promised to help.”</p><p></p><p>“Right, I just need to get some sleep first…”</p><p></p><p>“You’ve been out partying until now?” Jenna’s eyes widened. “I know you’re an adult and it’s none of my business. But this partying really needs to stop. You’re burning your candle at both ends and…”</p><p></p><p>“Mom chill, it’s eight in the morning. The clubs close at four. I haven’t partied until now.”</p><p></p><p>“Oh?” Jenna raised an eyebrow. “So were where you then?”</p><p></p><p>“I slept at Randy’s. Only we didn’t get much sleep if you know what I mean?”</p><p></p><p>“I do. You really love him don’t you?”</p><p></p><p>“Of course I do.”</p><p></p><p>“So am I wrong to assume that an engagement might be happening soon then?”</p><p></p><p>“Mom, don’t put pressure on me. I mean just because you rushed into marriage when you were young it doesn’t mean that I have to do the same thing,” Charlie said. “I am <em>only </em>22 and people get married later these days.”</p><p></p><p>“Okay, I was just saying that I wouldn’t mind it if Randy did end up being my son in law some day.”</p><p></p><p>“That’s good to know and I’d love for that to happen, some day,” Charlie smiled. “But for that to happen you need to break the news to Ray first and I have a feeling he’s so not going to like it.”</p><p></p><p>“You’re right,” Jenna sighed. “He’s not.”</p><p></p><p>“Oh Mom,” Charlie sighed, “why don’t you just fly up to Washington and talk to him?”</p><p></p><p>“Charlie we’ve been through this and you know I don’t want to meet Donna.”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah, yeah, whatever, but you can’t keep avoiding your marriage problems forever…”</p><p></p><p>“I know. But it’s just complicated,” Jenna sighed.</p><p></p><p>“It doesn’t have to be, I mean either you love Ray or you don’t…”</p><p></p><p>“I love him, but I don’t know if I’m in love with him anymore. But he’s the only father Lucas has ever known so…”</p><p></p><p>“You’re thinking of staying with him for Lucas sake even if he doesn’t make you happy?”</p><p></p><p>“Maybe, I really don’t know. I need some time to think things over and while I do it’s better to have a rented house than staying at the hotel, ‘cause Ronald drives me nuts.”</p><p></p><p>“Oh I know what you mean. Randy’s dad sure is annoying,” Charlie sighed. “Anyway we’ll talk more later, I really need to get some sleep now if I’m gonna help you with the move.”</p><p></p><p>“Okay,” Jenna nodded, as she watched Charlie disappear into her hotel room.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 64951, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. :) As some of you might have noticed I've now gotten to the point where I've posted the scene that I originally pulled out and posted first in the one-shot thread, which eventually lead to that this story is being posted right now! :D So I guess it's fair to say that the continuation of what you've been waiting for will be posted from this point on... [B] Ms Southworth,[/B] thanks for saying that it was a beautiful JR/SE scene. Then as for how long Sue Ellen will be able to fight her feelings for JR. Well read on and you'll see... ;) I won't give that away. However what I will say is that Sue Ellen's feelings for JR has nothing to do with Don. She is not looking to get back at Don or anything like that. She simply loved JR first and she married Don to try to forget about him and move on but it didn't work... I get what you are saying about how Sue Ellen's sexual attraction to JR is not really a sign of weakness as long as she's strong enough to resist him until she is not legally married to someone else. Or at least I think that's the point you were trying to get across. So it makes sense to me. [B] Presea,[/B] you are right that if JR/SE wants their relationship to really work in the future they need to address their problems and what went wrong between them in the first place. Personally I think the scene in episode five where she apologized for shooting him and he apologized for cheating on her was a good starting point. I'm glad that you think I know how to write Katherine the right way. I take that as a compliment. :) Also you'd be pleased to know that the reason JR is working late this evening is because he has a meeting scheduled with Parker Shipping... [B]Miss Texas 1967,[/B] no it's not terrible that you forgot all about Don and that you enjoy JR/SE together. I think most of us do. :) You know when I think of Don I think of the scene where he talked Sue Ellen into coming to England with him and pulled out his grey hat. I thought he was such a bore! Anyway good points about JR/SE and why them getting into a relationship at this point is a bad idea... Okay so here's another [B]update: [/B] At the Diamond’s hotel was Jenna sitting reading the morning paper and drinking a cup of coffee when Charlie came in through the door to their suite. “Charlie?” “Mom what are you doing up so early?” Charlie asked. “Surely you haven’t waited up for me now, have you?” “No of course not,” Jenna laughed. “I just couldn’t sleep any longer. There’s so much to do with the moving today.” “Oh right was that today?” “Yeah and don’t forget that you and Randy promised to help.” “Right, I just need to get some sleep first…” “You’ve been out partying until now?” Jenna’s eyes widened. “I know you’re an adult and it’s none of my business. But this partying really needs to stop. You’re burning your candle at both ends and…” “Mom chill, it’s eight in the morning. The clubs close at four. I haven’t partied until now.” “Oh?” Jenna raised an eyebrow. “So were where you then?” “I slept at Randy’s. Only we didn’t get much sleep if you know what I mean?” “I do. You really love him don’t you?” “Of course I do.” “So am I wrong to assume that an engagement might be happening soon then?” “Mom, don’t put pressure on me. I mean just because you rushed into marriage when you were young it doesn’t mean that I have to do the same thing,” Charlie said. “I am [I]only [/I]22 and people get married later these days.” “Okay, I was just saying that I wouldn’t mind it if Randy did end up being my son in law some day.” “That’s good to know and I’d love for that to happen, some day,” Charlie smiled. “But for that to happen you need to break the news to Ray first and I have a feeling he’s so not going to like it.” “You’re right,” Jenna sighed. “He’s not.” “Oh Mom,” Charlie sighed, “why don’t you just fly up to Washington and talk to him?” “Charlie we’ve been through this and you know I don’t want to meet Donna.” “Yeah, yeah, whatever, but you can’t keep avoiding your marriage problems forever…” “I know. But it’s just complicated,” Jenna sighed. “It doesn’t have to be, I mean either you love Ray or you don’t…” “I love him, but I don’t know if I’m in love with him anymore. But he’s the only father Lucas has ever known so…” “You’re thinking of staying with him for Lucas sake even if he doesn’t make you happy?” “Maybe, I really don’t know. I need some time to think things over and while I do it’s better to have a rented house than staying at the hotel, ‘cause Ronald drives me nuts.” “Oh I know what you mean. Randy’s dad sure is annoying,” Charlie sighed. “Anyway we’ll talk more later, I really need to get some sleep now if I’m gonna help you with the move.” “Okay,” Jenna nodded, as she watched Charlie disappear into her hotel room. [/QUOTE]
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