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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 66044" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Ms Southworth,</strong> Ray has attempted to talk to Jenna before but he can't get hold of her. He did talk to Lucas after he had arrived at Southfork and then Lucas told him they were going to Gstaad over the summer. But now he can't reach them at either Gstaad or at home and that worries him. </p><p></p><p>I'm glad you like the way I wrote Donna and you are right, she still has feelings for Ray. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><p>Well I think Jenna was mostly just too stressed out with the move to talk to Lucas at that time. But I'm glad that you actually like the way we wrote Jenna and Randy in this scene. Poor Lucas surely is confused and it's not gonna get any better until he gets to meet Bobby and Ray...</p><p></p><p><strong>Sanda,</strong> I'm glad that you still enjoy reading this story daily. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>Yeah Lucas sure doesn't have it easy but I don't think he's inclined to run away to Southfork since he doesn't know how to get there as he can't remember ever visiting it. </p><p></p><p>Okay so <strong>update</strong> time and you'll get a double treat tonight too: </p><p></p><p></p><p>Donna was standing outdoors at Southfork, looking out over the paddocks with horses when Margaret and Rebecca came walking up to her. “Mom?” Margaret called her attention.</p><p></p><p>Donna jumped from the sound of her voice as she had her mind elsewhere and hadn’t even noticed that the girls were walking up to her. “Oh Margaret darling, you scared mommy there.” Donna said. “So what’s on your mind?”</p><p></p><p>“Well Rebecca and I have been talking and…” Margaret bit her lip.</p><p></p><p>“We want Margaret to move into my room,” Rebecca said.</p><p></p><p>Donna looked surprised at them, “You do?”</p><p></p><p>“Yes we thought since Rebecca’s mom moved in with her dad she has an extra bed and…” Margaret paused, “Would you mind a lot mommy if I didn’t share a room with you?”</p><p></p><p>“No honey if you want to share a room with your cousin instead. That’s fine,” Donna said.</p><p></p><p>“Thank you mommy” Margaret smiled and hugged Donna.</p><p></p><p>“You’re welcome,” Donna said and when she saw her daughter’s happy face Donna looked concerned before she added. “But you do know that we are just here for a visit?”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah, so I’d like to spend as much time with Cousin Rebecca as I can while we’re here.”</p><p></p><p> Donna smiled and nodded, “I understand that, however you have considered that Rebecca lives upstairs and your dad and I both have rooms on the bottom floor.”</p><p></p><p>“It’s not a problem. You live just down the stairs,” Margaret said. </p><p></p><p>“Well alright, come on I’ll help you move in with Rebecca,” Donna said.</p><p></p><p>“Yes, we’re gonna be roommates!” Rebecca beamed and the girls made a high five and started jumping up and down in excitement.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 66044, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. :) [B]Ms Southworth,[/B] Ray has attempted to talk to Jenna before but he can't get hold of her. He did talk to Lucas after he had arrived at Southfork and then Lucas told him they were going to Gstaad over the summer. But now he can't reach them at either Gstaad or at home and that worries him. I'm glad you like the way I wrote Donna and you are right, she still has feelings for Ray. :kiss: Well I think Jenna was mostly just too stressed out with the move to talk to Lucas at that time. But I'm glad that you actually like the way we wrote Jenna and Randy in this scene. Poor Lucas surely is confused and it's not gonna get any better until he gets to meet Bobby and Ray... [B]Sanda,[/B] I'm glad that you still enjoy reading this story daily. :) Yeah Lucas sure doesn't have it easy but I don't think he's inclined to run away to Southfork since he doesn't know how to get there as he can't remember ever visiting it. Okay so [B]update[/B] time and you'll get a double treat tonight too: Donna was standing outdoors at Southfork, looking out over the paddocks with horses when Margaret and Rebecca came walking up to her. “Mom?” Margaret called her attention. Donna jumped from the sound of her voice as she had her mind elsewhere and hadn’t even noticed that the girls were walking up to her. “Oh Margaret darling, you scared mommy there.” Donna said. “So what’s on your mind?” “Well Rebecca and I have been talking and…” Margaret bit her lip. “We want Margaret to move into my room,” Rebecca said. Donna looked surprised at them, “You do?” “Yes we thought since Rebecca’s mom moved in with her dad she has an extra bed and…” Margaret paused, “Would you mind a lot mommy if I didn’t share a room with you?” “No honey if you want to share a room with your cousin instead. That’s fine,” Donna said. “Thank you mommy” Margaret smiled and hugged Donna. “You’re welcome,” Donna said and when she saw her daughter’s happy face Donna looked concerned before she added. “But you do know that we are just here for a visit?” “Yeah, so I’d like to spend as much time with Cousin Rebecca as I can while we’re here.” Donna smiled and nodded, “I understand that, however you have considered that Rebecca lives upstairs and your dad and I both have rooms on the bottom floor.” “It’s not a problem. You live just down the stairs,” Margaret said. “Well alright, come on I’ll help you move in with Rebecca,” Donna said. “Yes, we’re gonna be roommates!” Rebecca beamed and the girls made a high five and started jumping up and down in excitement. [/QUOTE]
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