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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 66985" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback. I always enjoy reading all of your comments. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Ms Southworth, </strong>I'm glad that you thought we nailed Miss Ellie. It's funny but when I read through the scene I could hear her voice in my head. It was that vivid to me. I'm glad that you're hooked on this story and want updates on so many different plots. You will get one of the requested scenes tonight. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Honkytonkangel,</strong> I agree with you, although you can learn a lot of different things from reading a book Margaret needs to learn to rely less on her books and also learn things from the people around her. </p><p></p><p><strong>Sanda</strong>, thanks for saying it's better than the TNT version. I'm glad that you still love this story and found the bonding moment between Margaret and Miss Ellie cute. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Okay so it's time for tonight's <strong>update: </strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p></p><p>At Dallas Memorial hospital, Rebecca was sitting on a breeze in an examination room, as a doctor stood behind her talking to JR and Katherine, “Mrs. Smith from what I can tell your daughter is just fine.”</p><p></p><p>“Thank you doctor, that’s a relief to hear,” Katherine faked a smile.</p><p></p><p>“Of course we’ll have to analyze the blood test to be sure.”</p><p></p><p>“Oh I can handle that,” Dr. Haynes said as he walked into the room.</p><p></p><p>“Thank you doctor Haynes,” the other doctor said.</p><p></p><p>“You must be Mr. and Mrs. Smith, cute kid.” Doctor Haynes took the blood sample and walked into a nearby room. </p><p></p><p>The other doctor then said, “Well I think that will be all. Rebecca why don’t you pick out a sticker from the basket and then you and your parents can leave,” the doctor then left the room and Rebecca jumped down from the breeze and started choosing from the stickers.</p><p></p><p>Then Doctor Haynes came back into the room and after he had made sure that they were alone he said, “Okay JR, I’m going to check up what you asked me to as soon as I’ve received the other samples. So I’ll be sending a check up notice for Pamela Ewing for tomorrow and then later on one for Bobby Ewing.”</p><p></p><p>“Good,” JR smiled. “Keep me posted on the results, will you?”</p><p></p><p>“Definitely, bye now!” The doctor left the room.</p><p></p><p>“Come on Rebecca we’re leaving!” JR said.</p><p></p><p>“But I can’t decide which sticker I want,” Rebecca said. “Should I take this one or that one?” Rebecca held out two stickers in front of JR and Katherine.</p><p></p><p>“Do what I always did,” Katherine said.</p><p></p><p>“Which is?”</p><p></p><p>“Take them both,” Katherine handed the stickers to her niece.</p><p></p><p>Rebecca smiled, “Thanks, I’ll remember that one!”</p><p></p><p>JR, Katherine and Rebecca then left the examination room and stepped into an elevator. As soon as the door closed behind them Katherine smiled, “I don’t think my sister is going to like her doctor’s appointment!”</p><p></p><p>“Well who does?” JR asked.</p><p></p><p>“Not I that shot hurt!” Rebecca whined.</p><p></p><p>“That’s what you got the stickers for,” Katherine said.</p><p></p><p>“Oh in that case just wait until I’ll tell mommy about it I bet you she will give me…”</p><p></p><p>“No Rebecca, remember what we told you, you can’t tell your parents about this,” JR reminded Rebecca.</p><p></p><p>“Why not?”</p><p></p><p>“Because it’s our little secret,” Katherine said. “You like having a secret don’t you?”</p><p></p><p>“Sure do,” Rebecca replied.</p><p></p><p>“Good,” Katherine smiled as the elevator doors opened and they started walking towards the exit. “I’ll have to go now but make sure the kid keeps her mouth shut,” Katherine told JR. “Also we’ll be in touch about the deal!”</p><p></p><p>“Definitely I’ll let you know as soon as I’ve made up my mind!” JR agreed and Katherine walked away.</p><p></p><p>As soon as she had disappeared into the crowd Rebecca asked JR, “What deal is she talking about?”</p><p></p><p>“Oh nothing that concerns you,” JR said. </p><p></p><p> “Is that why Aunt Katherine said I should keep my mouth shut?”</p><p></p><p>“Well yeah,” JR nodded. “Come on now let’s go get that ice cream that I promised you.” JR and Rebecca went to a store and Rebecca picked out the biggest and most expensive ice cream. JR watched her as she ate it, messing up her whole face. “You like that ice cream don’t you?”</p><p></p><p>“Sure do,” Rebecca said, with her mouth full of ice cream.</p><p></p><p>“Good so do you remember why you got it?”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah not to tell anyone about our secret,” Rebecca smiled.</p><p></p><p>“And what is our secret?”</p><p></p><p>“That you and Aunt Katherine took me to the doctors,” Rebecca repeated.</p><p></p><p>“That’s a good girl and remember you can absolutely not tell your parents.”</p><p></p><p>“I remember, but I still don’t get why?”</p><p></p><p>“Because if you do it’s not a secret anymore,” JR explained.</p><p></p><p>“That’s true,” Rebecca pondered and JR thought that was easily handled until Rebecca suddenly added. “Still I bet if I told mommy I’d been to the doctor’s she’ll get me something nice so I am not sure if it really in my best interests to keep this a secret. You’ll see I like to get things.”</p><p></p><p>“What are you getting at?” JR asked.</p><p></p><p>“I want something,” Rebecca replied.</p><p></p><p>“But I got you an ice cream!”</p><p></p><p>“That was for the shot. If I’m gonna keep quiet I want more!”</p><p></p><p>“What?”</p><p></p><p>“I want you to be my butler until mom and dad gets home!”</p><p></p><p>“That’s crazy,” JR objected.</p><p></p><p>“Not as crazy as bringing me to the doctors,” Rebecca said. “I want you to teach me how to swim…”</p><p></p><p>“I thought your daddy taught you how to swim.”</p><p></p><p>“He tried to,” Rebecca said. “But I never got the hang of it. So will you teach me?”</p><p></p><p>“Alright kiddo I’ll teach you how to swim,” JR said. “But that’s it. I’m not gonna be your butler that’s for sure.”</p><p></p><p>“If you won’t be my butler I will tell mommy and daddy that you and Aunt Katherine took me to the doctors. She won’t be happy. She hates going to the doctors.”</p><p></p><p>“So she hates going to the doctors, huh?” </p><p></p><p>“Yeah.”</p><p></p><p>“Poor Pamela!” JR said mockingly, before he grinned when he thought of that Pamela was next in line to go to the doctors.</p><p></p><p>“Why did you say that?” Rebecca asked. “And why did you tell that doctor to call my parents to his office?”</p><p></p><p>JR’s smile faded when he realized that the kid could ruin everything if he didn’t get her to shut up. “Okay Rebecca, let’s make a deal. You’ll keep our secret and stop asking me more questions and I’ll go ahead with your terms.”</p><p></p><p>“What does that mean, will you be my butler or not?” Rebecca asked confused.</p><p></p><p>“Kid, it means that you win, I’ll be your butler,” JR sighed in defeat, as he couldn’t help but wondering how he could let a seven year old beat him at his own game. Still he knew that humoring the kid was a small price to pay if it meant getting rid of Pamela Barnes and the kid. JR knew that the goal was within reach. Because as soon as Pam and Bobby had had their tests done he could prove that the kid was adopted and then he was sure of that Bobby would kick Pam out, as he hated being lied to. Of course that Pam hated going to the doctors didn’t hurt either. JR smiled his shit eating grin, when he thought of that Pam was next in line for a blood test…</p><p></p><p>To be continued…</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 66985, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. I always enjoy reading all of your comments. :) [B]Ms Southworth, [/B]I'm glad that you thought we nailed Miss Ellie. It's funny but when I read through the scene I could hear her voice in my head. It was that vivid to me. I'm glad that you're hooked on this story and want updates on so many different plots. You will get one of the requested scenes tonight. ;) [B]Honkytonkangel,[/B] I agree with you, although you can learn a lot of different things from reading a book Margaret needs to learn to rely less on her books and also learn things from the people around her. [B]Sanda[/B], thanks for saying it's better than the TNT version. I'm glad that you still love this story and found the bonding moment between Margaret and Miss Ellie cute. :) Okay so it's time for tonight's [B]update: [/B] At Dallas Memorial hospital, Rebecca was sitting on a breeze in an examination room, as a doctor stood behind her talking to JR and Katherine, “Mrs. Smith from what I can tell your daughter is just fine.” “Thank you doctor, that’s a relief to hear,” Katherine faked a smile. “Of course we’ll have to analyze the blood test to be sure.” “Oh I can handle that,” Dr. Haynes said as he walked into the room. “Thank you doctor Haynes,” the other doctor said. “You must be Mr. and Mrs. Smith, cute kid.” Doctor Haynes took the blood sample and walked into a nearby room. The other doctor then said, “Well I think that will be all. Rebecca why don’t you pick out a sticker from the basket and then you and your parents can leave,” the doctor then left the room and Rebecca jumped down from the breeze and started choosing from the stickers. Then Doctor Haynes came back into the room and after he had made sure that they were alone he said, “Okay JR, I’m going to check up what you asked me to as soon as I’ve received the other samples. So I’ll be sending a check up notice for Pamela Ewing for tomorrow and then later on one for Bobby Ewing.” “Good,” JR smiled. “Keep me posted on the results, will you?” “Definitely, bye now!” The doctor left the room. “Come on Rebecca we’re leaving!” JR said. “But I can’t decide which sticker I want,” Rebecca said. “Should I take this one or that one?” Rebecca held out two stickers in front of JR and Katherine. “Do what I always did,” Katherine said. “Which is?” “Take them both,” Katherine handed the stickers to her niece. Rebecca smiled, “Thanks, I’ll remember that one!” JR, Katherine and Rebecca then left the examination room and stepped into an elevator. As soon as the door closed behind them Katherine smiled, “I don’t think my sister is going to like her doctor’s appointment!” “Well who does?” JR asked. “Not I that shot hurt!” Rebecca whined. “That’s what you got the stickers for,” Katherine said. “Oh in that case just wait until I’ll tell mommy about it I bet you she will give me…” “No Rebecca, remember what we told you, you can’t tell your parents about this,” JR reminded Rebecca. “Why not?” “Because it’s our little secret,” Katherine said. “You like having a secret don’t you?” “Sure do,” Rebecca replied. “Good,” Katherine smiled as the elevator doors opened and they started walking towards the exit. “I’ll have to go now but make sure the kid keeps her mouth shut,” Katherine told JR. “Also we’ll be in touch about the deal!” “Definitely I’ll let you know as soon as I’ve made up my mind!” JR agreed and Katherine walked away. As soon as she had disappeared into the crowd Rebecca asked JR, “What deal is she talking about?” “Oh nothing that concerns you,” JR said. “Is that why Aunt Katherine said I should keep my mouth shut?” “Well yeah,” JR nodded. “Come on now let’s go get that ice cream that I promised you.” JR and Rebecca went to a store and Rebecca picked out the biggest and most expensive ice cream. JR watched her as she ate it, messing up her whole face. “You like that ice cream don’t you?” “Sure do,” Rebecca said, with her mouth full of ice cream. “Good so do you remember why you got it?” “Yeah not to tell anyone about our secret,” Rebecca smiled. “And what is our secret?” “That you and Aunt Katherine took me to the doctors,” Rebecca repeated. “That’s a good girl and remember you can absolutely not tell your parents.” “I remember, but I still don’t get why?” “Because if you do it’s not a secret anymore,” JR explained. “That’s true,” Rebecca pondered and JR thought that was easily handled until Rebecca suddenly added. “Still I bet if I told mommy I’d been to the doctor’s she’ll get me something nice so I am not sure if it really in my best interests to keep this a secret. You’ll see I like to get things.” “What are you getting at?” JR asked. “I want something,” Rebecca replied. “But I got you an ice cream!” “That was for the shot. If I’m gonna keep quiet I want more!” “What?” “I want you to be my butler until mom and dad gets home!” “That’s crazy,” JR objected. “Not as crazy as bringing me to the doctors,” Rebecca said. “I want you to teach me how to swim…” “I thought your daddy taught you how to swim.” “He tried to,” Rebecca said. “But I never got the hang of it. So will you teach me?” “Alright kiddo I’ll teach you how to swim,” JR said. “But that’s it. I’m not gonna be your butler that’s for sure.” “If you won’t be my butler I will tell mommy and daddy that you and Aunt Katherine took me to the doctors. She won’t be happy. She hates going to the doctors.” “So she hates going to the doctors, huh?” “Yeah.” “Poor Pamela!” JR said mockingly, before he grinned when he thought of that Pamela was next in line to go to the doctors. “Why did you say that?” Rebecca asked. “And why did you tell that doctor to call my parents to his office?” JR’s smile faded when he realized that the kid could ruin everything if he didn’t get her to shut up. “Okay Rebecca, let’s make a deal. You’ll keep our secret and stop asking me more questions and I’ll go ahead with your terms.” “What does that mean, will you be my butler or not?” Rebecca asked confused. “Kid, it means that you win, I’ll be your butler,” JR sighed in defeat, as he couldn’t help but wondering how he could let a seven year old beat him at his own game. Still he knew that humoring the kid was a small price to pay if it meant getting rid of Pamela Barnes and the kid. JR knew that the goal was within reach. Because as soon as Pam and Bobby had had their tests done he could prove that the kid was adopted and then he was sure of that Bobby would kick Pam out, as he hated being lied to. Of course that Pam hated going to the doctors didn’t hurt either. JR smiled his shit eating grin, when he thought of that Pam was next in line for a blood test… To be continued… [/QUOTE]
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