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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 74235" data-attributes="member: 57167">Thank you everyone for the feedback. It&#039;s much appreciated as always. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Ms Southworth, I wouldn&#039;t mind you posting a list of the storylines here as that way other fans could also see it and comment on it! I always love a good discussion around whatever topics my fanfic brings up. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" />I&#039;m glad you thought the latest update was outstanding. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Oh yeah I bet Don would be thrilled if Sue Ellen happened to say JR&#039;s name in her sleep. :lolo:You&#039;re right that JR is doing his best to haul her in again...Honestly I don&#039;t know how long it took me to write this scene. I think it&#039;s an add on scene that I wrote later and whenever I write I tend to loose track of time and place as I enter the world of the characters and I just love to write. So even if two-three hours pass by I never notice it until I look at my watch and realize how late it&#039;s gotten.<img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_hehe_100-102.gif?w=145&amp;h=150"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle&nbsp; &nbsp; :giggle:" data-shortname=":giggle:" />Honkytonkangel, I&#039;m glad that you enjoyed the JR/SE interactions in the last scene so much. Things are starting to warm up between them. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />I agree that Melissa has learnt way more about John Ross family on a first date than I ever would want to learn on a first date! :lolo:Good question if you can take back a previously married name or not. But I do know that Alexis Colby on Dynasty kept going back to Colby after her divorces from Dex Dexter and Sean Rowan. So if that&#039;s anything to go on I&#039;d say you can do that!Presea, yeah poor Lucas doesn&#039;t have it so easy right now. Things will get better for him. But it will take time as right now he is feeling lost and confused and neglected by his mother and sister. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown&nbsp; &nbsp; :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" />Good point about John Ross and Melissa. They could really use some alone time away from his family and yes Melissa is more mature than John Ross in some aspects.Funny how you would have dumped John Ross and ran away from his family if you were her. I must say that I can see why! :rlol:Then as for Katherine, there are plenty of more scenes with her in this story but not in this episode I&#039;m afraid. Okay so update time: Miss Ellie was crushing coffee beans with a pestle in a mortar when Clayton found her in the kitchen. He could tell just from watching her that she was upset as she was obviously taking out her frustration on the coffee beans. He called her attention, “Ellie?”Miss Ellie hurried to dry off the tears on her cheeks as she didn’t want Clayton to see that she had been crying, “Yes Clayton?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Are you okay?” Clayton asked.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I will be,” Miss Ellie replied.They went quiet for a moment as Clayton walked up to her. “JR mentioned that today’s the anniversary of the day you got engaged to Jock, is that true?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Yes,” Miss Ellie nodded. “Okay, so do you wanna talk about it?” Clayton asked.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I think it’s better we don’t. As I don’t want to hurt you,” Miss Ellie replied.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Ellie, I knew about your past when I married you,” Clayton said as she put his hands on her shoulders. “Whatever was between you and Jock is in the past and can’t affect what you and I have.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Are you sure about that?” Miss Ellie asked, as she turned around so she faced him.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Yeah I’m sure,” Clayton nodded. “It’s okay to admit that you miss him Ellie.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Well I do,” Miss Ellie finally said. “I sometimes wonder why it had to end that way.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I know, I do too…I mean with Amy. Sometimes I wonder why she was the one who died in the fire and not I,” Clayton confided.Miss Ellie nodded, “I know the feeling, sometimes I blame myself for letting Jock go off to South America without me.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “It’s not your fault. There’s nothing you could have done to stop that chopper from going down.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Maybe not, but a part of me feels like I should have been there.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I know. I feel the same way about when the Southern Cross burned down, that if I’d only been there I could have saved Amy.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I know but it’s not your fault she died,” Miss Ellie gently touched Clayton’s cheek. “It was Jessica who started that fire, remember?”“Yeah but that doesn’t make it hurt any less, I mean she’s my sister and there was a time when I loved her very much too.”“I know it makes your loss double,” Miss Ellie said emotionally.“It does.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “If you want maybe we could visit Jessie some day. Is she still at that mental institution?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “As far as I know,” Clayton replied. “And thanks but I think it’s better we don’t as the woman’s clearly insane and doesn’t like you.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Well I don’t want to see her. I’m just saying I could go with you to the psych ward if you want to see her and wait outside.”“Oh Ellie, you’re amazing. I thank God that you came into my life.”“I know, I do too,” Miss Ellie smiled. “You’re a good man Clayton and I do love you.”“I love you too Ellie,” Clayton replied as he leant forward to give Miss Ellie a short kiss before he took her into his arms. They stayed in the hug for a while, taking comfort in each other’s presence…</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Karin, post: 74235, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :) [B]Ms Southworth, [/B]I wouldn't mind you posting a list of the storylines here as that way other fans could also see it and comment on it! I always love a good discussion around whatever topics my fanfic brings up. ;) I'm glad you thought the latest update was outstanding. :) Oh yeah I bet Don would be thrilled if Sue Ellen happened to say JR's name in her sleep. :lolo: You're right that JR is doing his best to haul her in again... Honestly I don't know how long it took me to write this scene. I think it's an add on scene that I wrote later and whenever I write I tend to loose track of time and place as I enter the world of the characters and I just love to write. So even if two-three hours pass by I never notice it until I look at my watch and realize how late it's gotten.:giggle: [B]Honkytonkangel,[/B] I'm glad that you enjoyed the JR/SE interactions in the last scene so much. Things are starting to warm up between them. :) I agree that Melissa has learnt way more about John Ross family on a first date than I ever would want to learn on a first date! :lolo: Good question if you can take back a previously married name or not. But I do know that Alexis Colby on Dynasty kept going back to Colby after her divorces from Dex Dexter and Sean Rowan. So if that's anything to go on I'd say you can do that! [B]Presea,[/B] yeah poor Lucas doesn't have it so easy right now. Things will get better for him. But it will take time as right now he is feeling lost and confused and neglected by his mother and sister. :( Good point about John Ross and Melissa. They could really use some alone time away from his family and yes Melissa is more mature than John Ross in some aspects. Funny how you would have dumped John Ross and ran away from his family if you were her. I must say that I can see why! :rlol: Then as for Katherine, there are plenty of more scenes with her in this story but not in this episode I'm afraid. Okay so [B]update [/B]time: Miss Ellie was crushing coffee beans with a pestle in a mortar when Clayton found her in the kitchen. He could tell just from watching her that she was upset as she was obviously taking out her frustration on the coffee beans. He called her attention, “Ellie?” Miss Ellie hurried to dry off the tears on her cheeks as she didn’t want Clayton to see that she had been crying, “Yes Clayton?” “Are you okay?” Clayton asked. “I will be,” Miss Ellie replied. They went quiet for a moment as Clayton walked up to her. “JR mentioned that today’s the anniversary of the day you got engaged to Jock, is that true?” “Yes,” Miss Ellie nodded. “Okay, so do you wanna talk about it?” Clayton asked. “I think it’s better we don’t. As I don’t want to hurt you,” Miss Ellie replied. “Ellie, I knew about your past when I married you,” Clayton said as she put his hands on her shoulders. “Whatever was between you and Jock is in the past and can’t affect what you and I have.” “Are you sure about that?” Miss Ellie asked, as she turned around so she faced him. “Yeah I’m sure,” Clayton nodded. “It’s okay to admit that you miss him Ellie.” “Well I do,” Miss Ellie finally said. “I sometimes wonder why it had to end that way.” “I know, I do too…I mean with Amy. Sometimes I wonder why she was the one who died in the fire and not I,” Clayton confided. Miss Ellie nodded, “I know the feeling, sometimes I blame myself for letting Jock go off to South America without me.” “It’s not your fault. There’s nothing you could have done to stop that chopper from going down.” “Maybe not, but a part of me feels like I should have been there.” “I know. I feel the same way about when the Southern Cross burned down, that if I’d only been there I could have saved Amy.” “I know but it’s not your fault she died,” Miss Ellie gently touched Clayton’s cheek. “It was Jessica who started that fire, remember?” “Yeah but that doesn’t make it hurt any less, I mean she’s my sister and there was a time when I loved her very much too.” “I know it makes your loss double,” Miss Ellie said emotionally. “It does.” “If you want maybe we could visit Jessie some day. Is she still at that mental institution?” “As far as I know,” Clayton replied. “And thanks but I think it’s better we don’t as the woman’s clearly insane and doesn’t like you.” “Well I don’t want to see her. I’m just saying I could go with you to the psych ward if you want to see her and wait outside.” “Oh Ellie, you’re amazing. I thank God that you came into my life.” “I know, I do too,” Miss Ellie smiled. “You’re a good man Clayton and I do love you.” “I love you too Ellie,” Clayton replied as he leant forward to give Miss Ellie a short kiss before he took her into his arms. They stayed in the hug for a while, taking comfort in each other’s presence… [/QUOTE]

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