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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 76601" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :thank:</p><p></p><p><strong>Silvie,</strong> I'm glad you thought the final scene in episode seven was great. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Ms Southworth,</strong> you're welcome about the story. I'm grateful to you for always leaving such detailed feedback. It's a real treat to read your comments. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>I know holding hands seems like the logical first step on a date. But John Ross and Melissa are all over each other in the pool. I guess you can chalk it up to raging hormones that teenagers have. You do tend to feel things a lot more intensively at that age. But yeah John Ross was out of line and got exactly what he deserved for it. </p><p></p><p>I'm glad you enjoyed the JR/SE/Cliff confrontation. Gotta love the drama that occurs whenever you put those character in the same scene. They are hiliarous. <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_dielaughing_100-100.gif?w=150&h=127" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":laughs:" title="Laughs :laughs:" data-shortname=":laughs:" /></p><p></p><p>I think the reason why JR refers to Sue Ellen as his wife is because they were married for 15 years or something like that and now when she's back almost like she's never left it's easy to fall back into the habit of thinking of her as his wife. </p><p></p><p>Sue Ellen is not interested in getting back together with JR. That's not why she's siding with him. It's just that they have an in common goal in making damage control after the movie has been released as they have been embarrassed in public and want to save face. </p><p></p><p><strong>Honkytonkangel, </strong>I agree that Melissa was right to finally walk out on John Ross. I think most of us would have done the same if we were in her shoes since the Ewing family sure can seem strange to an outsider and I know I wouldn't want to get mixed up with them either if they were real people! :lolo:</p><p>Luckily for us they're not but they sure are entertaining and yeah it's always good when JR/SE are on the same side. So don't you worry about Don he will get what he deserve...</p><p></p><p>Also without spoiling too much of the plot I can say that you will find out in a few episodes how it will go the next time John Ross brings a girl home to Southfork! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Shan, </strong>thanks for those emoticons. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong>Presea, </strong>I agree that it's sad how kids that age tends to hook up very fast. But let's remember that they are teenagers. John Ross is 16 and even if that's almost an adult, he's still a hormone driven teenager who's frontal lobe is not fully developed yet and therefore he and other people his age makes decisions that can seem impulsive and stupid to an adult! </p><p></p><p>So well I'm sorry you don't like him in this story but maybe that has more to do with teens in general than with John Ross since he is acting like a typical teenager! </p><p></p><p>You are right about Sue Ellen of course. She needs to deal with the problem that is her husband herself rather than to let someone else do it for her. Problem is she hasn't been able to reach Don for weeks since he has been travelling and he doesn't answer his phone. So since she hasn't been able to reach him she hasn't been able to deal with him. </p><p></p><p>I agree that it's important to be in character when you write. </p><p></p><p>Then as for the language, it might interest you to know that I learnt my first curse words in English from Dallas. I picked up expressions like "Go to hell" "Dammit" and "Damn" from Dallas. So there were curse words on the original Dallas too and well if you look at 90's movies like "I Know What You Did Last Summer", like I did when I wrote a paper about bad language for University, I noticed that people who are our generation (the same as John Ross & Chris etc) do tend to use a lot of foul language. So I think it makes sense for them to use expressions like "Shit", "F*** and F***ing" </p><p></p><p>I think the expression Afton used was "Piece of shit" in reference to Sue Ellen's movie and well those words were used to express her opinion about Sue Ellen's movie and since she was very upset that:</p><p>1) such a movie had been made since it brought up her past sins that she'd like to forget</p><p>2) Cliff had shown it to their daughter</p><p>She didn't mince words when speaking about it. </p><p></p><p><strong>Tommie, </strong>oh yeah gotta love the glory days of Dallas when the action happened around the Southfork pool! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p>I don't even think they had one single fight in the pool or anyone being pushed into it on Dallas TNT and I really missed that. </p><p></p><p><strong>MissTexas1967, </strong>yes the story involving Cliff and Marilee fooling JR to buy that worthless dry hole of an oil field will be coming back and go somewhere when they'll start drilling. But it might take a while to get to that point...<img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_hehe_100-102.gif?w=145&h=150" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle :giggle:" data-shortname=":giggle:" /></p><p></p><p>Yeah Sue Ellen need to stay cautious of JR. He wants her back and she doesn't want that but we all know that when JR wants something he'll stop at nothing to get what he wants...You know maybe that's why Sue Ellen is in no hurry to divorce Don since she's using him as an excuse to create some distance between her and JR...</p><p></p><p>I agree that John Ross was coming on way too strong with Melissa and he lost her because of it. </p><p></p><p>Well problem for Charlie is that she wanted to catch up with Marnie, but maybe it would have been better for them to do that at the mall than on the sidelines of the race track since neither one of them enjoyed it much. Also I agree that in a relationship you need to be able to do your own things too as it's not healthy to spend every moment together.</p><p></p><p>That's all for now but...</p><p><strong>Stay tuned for episode eight which I will begin posting sometime this week... </strong>:wink@</p><p>Hopefully by then all of our readers will have caught up! </p><p></p><p>Oh and in the meantime please do tell me which plots that you are eagerly awaiting to read more about. It would be really interesting to find out what's caught your attention! <img src="https://i.pinimg.com/originals/3f/d1/cf/3fd1cf7a83ab196e88aebd2886914733.png" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":yep:" title="Yep :yep:" data-shortname=":yep:" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 76601, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :thank: [B]Silvie,[/B] I'm glad you thought the final scene in episode seven was great. :) [B]Ms Southworth,[/B] you're welcome about the story. I'm grateful to you for always leaving such detailed feedback. It's a real treat to read your comments. :) I know holding hands seems like the logical first step on a date. But John Ross and Melissa are all over each other in the pool. I guess you can chalk it up to raging hormones that teenagers have. You do tend to feel things a lot more intensively at that age. But yeah John Ross was out of line and got exactly what he deserved for it. I'm glad you enjoyed the JR/SE/Cliff confrontation. Gotta love the drama that occurs whenever you put those character in the same scene. They are hiliarous. :laughs: I think the reason why JR refers to Sue Ellen as his wife is because they were married for 15 years or something like that and now when she's back almost like she's never left it's easy to fall back into the habit of thinking of her as his wife. Sue Ellen is not interested in getting back together with JR. That's not why she's siding with him. It's just that they have an in common goal in making damage control after the movie has been released as they have been embarrassed in public and want to save face. [B]Honkytonkangel, [/B]I agree that Melissa was right to finally walk out on John Ross. I think most of us would have done the same if we were in her shoes since the Ewing family sure can seem strange to an outsider and I know I wouldn't want to get mixed up with them either if they were real people! :lolo: Luckily for us they're not but they sure are entertaining and yeah it's always good when JR/SE are on the same side. So don't you worry about Don he will get what he deserve... Also without spoiling too much of the plot I can say that you will find out in a few episodes how it will go the next time John Ross brings a girl home to Southfork! ;) [B]Shan, [/B]thanks for those emoticons. :)[B] Presea, [/B]I agree that it's sad how kids that age tends to hook up very fast. But let's remember that they are teenagers. John Ross is 16 and even if that's almost an adult, he's still a hormone driven teenager who's frontal lobe is not fully developed yet and therefore he and other people his age makes decisions that can seem impulsive and stupid to an adult! So well I'm sorry you don't like him in this story but maybe that has more to do with teens in general than with John Ross since he is acting like a typical teenager! You are right about Sue Ellen of course. She needs to deal with the problem that is her husband herself rather than to let someone else do it for her. Problem is she hasn't been able to reach Don for weeks since he has been travelling and he doesn't answer his phone. So since she hasn't been able to reach him she hasn't been able to deal with him. I agree that it's important to be in character when you write. Then as for the language, it might interest you to know that I learnt my first curse words in English from Dallas. I picked up expressions like "Go to hell" "Dammit" and "Damn" from Dallas. So there were curse words on the original Dallas too and well if you look at 90's movies like "I Know What You Did Last Summer", like I did when I wrote a paper about bad language for University, I noticed that people who are our generation (the same as John Ross & Chris etc) do tend to use a lot of foul language. So I think it makes sense for them to use expressions like "Shit", "F*** and F***ing" I think the expression Afton used was "Piece of shit" in reference to Sue Ellen's movie and well those words were used to express her opinion about Sue Ellen's movie and since she was very upset that: 1) such a movie had been made since it brought up her past sins that she'd like to forget 2) Cliff had shown it to their daughter She didn't mince words when speaking about it. [B]Tommie, [/B]oh yeah gotta love the glory days of Dallas when the action happened around the Southfork pool! ;) I don't even think they had one single fight in the pool or anyone being pushed into it on Dallas TNT and I really missed that. [B]MissTexas1967, [/B]yes the story involving Cliff and Marilee fooling JR to buy that worthless dry hole of an oil field will be coming back and go somewhere when they'll start drilling. But it might take a while to get to that point...:giggle: Yeah Sue Ellen need to stay cautious of JR. He wants her back and she doesn't want that but we all know that when JR wants something he'll stop at nothing to get what he wants...You know maybe that's why Sue Ellen is in no hurry to divorce Don since she's using him as an excuse to create some distance between her and JR... I agree that John Ross was coming on way too strong with Melissa and he lost her because of it. Well problem for Charlie is that she wanted to catch up with Marnie, but maybe it would have been better for them to do that at the mall than on the sidelines of the race track since neither one of them enjoyed it much. Also I agree that in a relationship you need to be able to do your own things too as it's not healthy to spend every moment together. [B][/B] That's all for now but... [B]Stay tuned for episode eight which I will begin posting sometime this week... [/B]:wink@ Hopefully by then all of our readers will have caught up! Oh and in the meantime please do tell me which plots that you are eagerly awaiting to read more about. It would be really interesting to find out what's caught your attention! :yep: [/QUOTE]
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