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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 79999" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>You don't need to go into the thread itself to find out if there's been a new update posted! :wink@ Anyway, even though your faithful fans may go back and read old updates more than once, I'm still puzzled at the fact that - on some days - this thread has had more than 100 views in just one single day! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></p><p></p><p></p><p>I completely agree with you that it's close to impossible to go "deep" inside a character's mind in a scene with lots of "action" without stopping the flow of dialogue! But unlike on TV, it IS possible in a fanfic to have "flash back" scenes with the characters (and yes, for more than just one or two couples, when the fanfic is as long as yours is), for instance when he or she is driving into town, out riding, swimming in the pool, or preparing for bed!</p><p></p><p>I respect the way that you and Jenny chose to write this fanfic. Honestly, I do! As you already know, there are parts of your fanfic that I absolutely love. And it's no secret that there are parts that I could do without! In my opinion, your fanfic would be next to PERFECT, if the drama focused more on the core cast and thus the ups and downs in their daily lives and less on other characters and their life struggles. I do hope that I haven't offended you by saying so, because that was so NOT my intention! You must know that I look forward to every update of this fanfic!</p><p></p><p>I do hope that you're right, Karin! However, if I were you, I wouldn't bet money on it! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 79999, member: 312"] You don't need to go into the thread itself to find out if there's been a new update posted! :wink@ Anyway, even though your faithful fans may go back and read old updates more than once, I'm still puzzled at the fact that - on some days - this thread has had more than 100 views in just one single day! :think: I completely agree with you that it's close to impossible to go "deep" inside a character's mind in a scene with lots of "action" without stopping the flow of dialogue! But unlike on TV, it IS possible in a fanfic to have "flash back" scenes with the characters (and yes, for more than just one or two couples, when the fanfic is as long as yours is), for instance when he or she is driving into town, out riding, swimming in the pool, or preparing for bed! I respect the way that you and Jenny chose to write this fanfic. Honestly, I do! As you already know, there are parts of your fanfic that I absolutely love. And it's no secret that there are parts that I could do without! In my opinion, your fanfic would be next to PERFECT, if the drama focused more on the core cast and thus the ups and downs in their daily lives and less on other characters and their life struggles. I do hope that I haven't offended you by saying so, because that was so NOT my intention! You must know that I look forward to every update of this fanfic! I do hope that you're right, Karin! However, if I were you, I wouldn't bet money on it! :D [/QUOTE]
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