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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 80012" data-attributes="member: 312">I really enjoyed the update from City Hall! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/girls/m04127.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":spinning:" title="Spinning    :spinning:" data-shortname=":spinning:" />  I loved that you included "real" people in your fanfic (which must have meant quite a bit of research to get the facts about Al Gore and his wife straight)! <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2011/01/shappy_clap_100-101.gif?w=150&h=133"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":clap:" title="Clap    :clap:" data-shortname=":clap:" />  You wrote Ray so well in this scene! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/fun/m0157.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":dance:" title="Dance    :dance:" data-shortname=":dance:" />  I could just see him yawning, checking the time, feeling tired, hungry and completely out of place, while listening to the Vice-President talking about environmental issues! <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_hehe_100-102.gif?w=145&h=150"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle    :giggle:" data-shortname=":giggle:" />   Great writing job!!! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly    :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /> My favorite line as far as Ray is concerned has to be:  “If you don’t mind I think I’ll go grab our coats instead and meet you in the lobby”! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin    :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" />Based on the Margaret that we've been introduced to so far, you did an awesome job on describing her ... ... the little professor! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ssmile/fun/s0208.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lol:" title="lol    :lol:" data-shortname=":lol:" />  She is so precocious for her age, but it's cute in some way, since there really are children like her out there! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" />  I often wonder what's going through Margaret's mind as she is getting to know her dad and also her family in Dallas! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think    :think:" data-shortname=":think:" />   My favorite line as far as Margaret is concerned must be:  “But dad he’s the vice-president don’t you wanna meet him?”Just out of curiosity ... when you wrote "Cape Code", did you really mean Cape Cod, i.e. in the southeast corner of Massachusetts? <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think    :think:" data-shortname=":think:" />Please update real soon!   :bh:</blockquote>

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