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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 80385" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback on my story. It's much appreciated as always. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p><strong>Honkytonkangel, </strong>I'm glad that you love the double date. The evening is not over yet so there's more of that date to come! </p><p>I agree with you about JR/SE, as toxic as they were there's no doubt in my mind that they were the loves of each other's lives. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><p></p><p>Yeah poor Becky doesn't like Mario. Heck Lucy and Mitch doesn't like him either. The only one who does is Afton...</p><p></p><p><strong>Ms Southworth, </strong>thanks but there's no way to compare this thread with the popularity of the Dallas top ten as those are very different threads. In fact I am well aware of that the only reason why this thread is the most popular one in our writer's room is because we've lost all of our history as I am sure there were some stories with more posts and views before. What I do find is telling however is that even with the lost history our Dallas forum remains the most popular one on this board (not counting the play games one) and I think that says something, as it means that the majority of our posters in this fan community are Dallas fans. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /></p><p></p><p></p><p>Just out of curiosity how would you define "main character"?</p><p></p><p>I'm glad you enjoyed the family scene. Then as for the movie choice, I think it's because Jenny and I love the movie "Grease". Never mind that it came out before we were born. We still love it since we first discovered it in the 1990s. Also the kids in my mom's class (a bunch of 12 year olds) loved this movie some ten years ago too. So I think the movie is quite timeless. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Anyway it's time for an <strong>update </strong>and you will get a double treat tonight since one scene is short: </p><p></p><p></p><p>Mario and Afton were having a romantic candle lit dinner at <em>The French Room</em>, which was a posh restaurant in Dallas with old fashioned red chairs and a high ceiling. “And of course we’ll have a big Philadelphia Wedding,” Mario suddenly said.</p><p></p><p>“Wedding?” Afton looked questioningly at her boyfriend. “Mario is that a proposal?”</p><p></p><p>“If you want it to be,” Mario nodded.</p><p></p><p>“Oh wow, I don’t know what to say,” Afton said. “Yes I’d like to marry you but…”</p><p></p><p>“Good then it’s decided. Of course we’ll have to keep a low profile until you’ve met my parents and if they approve we can place the ad in the paper and look for rings and new clothes.”</p><p></p><p>“Is there something wrong with my clothes?” Afton asked.</p><p></p><p>“Well they are a bit provocative. As a society wife you will need a certain finesse, but don’t worry dear we’ll figure it out,” Mario said patronizing.</p><p></p><p> Afton bit her lip, “So when can I meet your parents?”</p><p></p><p>“As soon as my business in this dreadful town is done,” Mario promised. “You’re gonna love it back east.” Afton faked a smile. She knew she should be thrilled now when Mario had finally asked her to marry him and yet she couldn’t help but wondering why she didn’t feel happy.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 80385, member: 57167"] Thank you everyone for the feedback on my story. It's much appreciated as always. :) [B]Honkytonkangel, [/B]I'm glad that you love the double date. The evening is not over yet so there's more of that date to come! I agree with you about JR/SE, as toxic as they were there's no doubt in my mind that they were the loves of each other's lives. :kiss: Yeah poor Becky doesn't like Mario. Heck Lucy and Mitch doesn't like him either. The only one who does is Afton... [B]Ms Southworth, [/B]thanks but there's no way to compare this thread with the popularity of the Dallas top ten as those are very different threads. In fact I am well aware of that the only reason why this thread is the most popular one in our writer's room is because we've lost all of our history as I am sure there were some stories with more posts and views before. What I do find is telling however is that even with the lost history our Dallas forum remains the most popular one on this board (not counting the play games one) and I think that says something, as it means that the majority of our posters in this fan community are Dallas fans. :jolly: Just out of curiosity how would you define "main character"? I'm glad you enjoyed the family scene. Then as for the movie choice, I think it's because Jenny and I love the movie "Grease". Never mind that it came out before we were born. We still love it since we first discovered it in the 1990s. Also the kids in my mom's class (a bunch of 12 year olds) loved this movie some ten years ago too. So I think the movie is quite timeless. :) Anyway it's time for an [B]update [/B]and you will get a double treat tonight since one scene is short: Mario and Afton were having a romantic candle lit dinner at [I]The French Room[/I], which was a posh restaurant in Dallas with old fashioned red chairs and a high ceiling. “And of course we’ll have a big Philadelphia Wedding,” Mario suddenly said. “Wedding?” Afton looked questioningly at her boyfriend. “Mario is that a proposal?” “If you want it to be,” Mario nodded. “Oh wow, I don’t know what to say,” Afton said. “Yes I’d like to marry you but…” “Good then it’s decided. Of course we’ll have to keep a low profile until you’ve met my parents and if they approve we can place the ad in the paper and look for rings and new clothes.” “Is there something wrong with my clothes?” Afton asked. “Well they are a bit provocative. As a society wife you will need a certain finesse, but don’t worry dear we’ll figure it out,” Mario said patronizing. Afton bit her lip, “So when can I meet your parents?” “As soon as my business in this dreadful town is done,” Mario promised. “You’re gonna love it back east.” Afton faked a smile. She knew she should be thrilled now when Mario had finally asked her to marry him and yet she couldn’t help but wondering why she didn’t feel happy. [/QUOTE]
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