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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 80663" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>You did a great job in writing the dialogue between Mario and Afton! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/girls/m04127.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":spinning:" title="Spinning :spinning:" data-shortname=":spinning:" /> I especially liked this part of the conversation:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Of course we’ll have to keep a low profile until you’ve met my parents and if they approve we can place the ad in the paper and look for rings and new clothes.”</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Is there something wrong with my clothes?” Afton asked.</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Well they are a bit provocative. As a society wife you will need a certain finesse, but don’t worry dear we’ll figure it out,” Mario said patronizing.</em></li> </ul><p>However, I don't think that there was a <strong>need</strong> for this scene (except for the obvious drama) when you look at it from a bigger perspective! Sorry! :hiding:</p><p></p><p>And quite frankly, the same could be said about the scene between Jenna and Martha! I'm just indifferent about scenes like these! Sorry, but I am! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/emb/t1818.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":embarrass:" title="Embarress :embarrass:" data-shortname=":embarrass:" /> As I was reading through the scene, I couldn't help but think ... ... please let's move on to a scene which includes the main characters of "Dallas"!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 80663, member: 312"] You did a great job in writing the dialogue between Mario and Afton! :spinning: I especially liked this part of the conversation: [LIST] [*][I]“Of course we’ll have to keep a low profile until you’ve met my parents and if they approve we can place the ad in the paper and look for rings and new clothes.”[/I] [*][I]“Is there something wrong with my clothes?” Afton asked.[/I] [*][I]“Well they are a bit provocative. As a society wife you will need a certain finesse, but don’t worry dear we’ll figure it out,” Mario said patronizing.[/I] [/LIST] However, I don't think that there was a [B]need[/B] for this scene (except for the obvious drama) when you look at it from a bigger perspective! Sorry! :hiding: And quite frankly, the same could be said about the scene between Jenna and Martha! I'm just indifferent about scenes like these! Sorry, but I am! :embarrass: As I was reading through the scene, I couldn't help but think ... ... please let's move on to a scene which includes the main characters of "Dallas"! [/QUOTE]
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