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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 86115" data-attributes="member: 57167">Thank you everyone for the feedback on my story. After a crap day that was just what I needed! :group:I am so annoyed today, see I've been trying to work on a new fan music video but I needed to capture some scenes and unfortunately I couldn't get my capture card to work today. I tried unsuccessfully for hours rebooting my computer and connecting the device to different USB ports but nothing worked. So now I'm stuck with my video until I'll be able to solve this problem. <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/sangry_banghead_100-103.gif?w=150&h=91"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":2B:" title="Brick 2    :2B:" data-shortname=":2B:" />Anyway enough of that mini rant. Honkytonkangel, thank you for the detailed feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />You know the description of Cally was actually inspired by things that Sue Ellen said on the show like "Where is that sweet young thing?" (to JR on his wedding day before going up to see his new bride to be) and I think on another occasion she said something like that JR had cruised the local junior high school to find Cally! :rlol:Oh I could just picture JR/SE on the Jerry Springer show. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ssmile/fun/s0208.gif"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lol:" title="lol    :lol:" data-shortname=":lol:" /> Or maybe not as keeping up appearances has always been important to them so I can't see them wanting to air their dirty laundry on TV. They are embarrassed as it is about the movie. Yes Pam is very biased when it comes to JR and Sue Ellen knows that. Maybe that's why she told her abour JR since she wanted to be reminded by someone just why she shouldn't go back to JR now when her resolve is clearly weakening...Of course staying married to Don is not a solution to keep her from JR. I mean if Don hadn't shown up when he did she would probably have cheated on him already with JR! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" />Ms Southworth, I am glad you enjoyed the inner turmoil of Sue Ellen. I guess it's part of my writing style, I like to focus on what the characters feels and thinks while Jenny is more about what they do. So when you put it together you usually get a pretty good scene. Then as for John Ross and steady relationships, you might be surprised to learn that he's already had steady girlfriends before...you will get to know more than you probably want to know about John Ross and his love life in a later scene where he brags to Chris about his conquests (sorta)...<img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite11" alt=":rolleyes:" title="Roll Eyes    :rolleyes:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":rolleyes:" />I'm glad you think Melissa seems like a nice girl though. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />I think Sue Ellen trying to hide the booze is only funny because it's something that we recognize in Sue Ellen from before. It's so her that we chuckle because of it even though it's not a funny situation at all. Silvie, merci beacoup! I am glad you think the last update was amazing and good enough to be on TV! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Okay so it's time for an update and since you've been good with the feedback I'll give you a double treat tonight: At Wade’s house, Lucas put his plate into the dishwasher before running out the door calling to his mom, “Thanks for lunch mom. I’m going over to Andersons!”“Okay have fun!” Jenna answered. “And close the door on your way out!”Lucas banged the door shut and Jenna turned to Martha who smiled, “He is a great kid!”“That he is,” Jenna agreed. “Are you sure you want me to stay here?” Martha asked sadly. “I mean I don’t wanna put your family in danger.”Jenna reached over the table putting her hand over Martha’s saying, “Martha, you and Anna where really sweet to me when I first came to Italy. I’m happy to help you out now.”                      “Thanks,” Martha smiled gratefully but then a concerned look appeared on her face. “But you didn’t have any baggage like this with you!”                      “Martha don’t worry about it. We’ll handle it!” Jenna reassured her.                        “I don’t know, maybe it would be for the best if I just left.”                      “No way we can’t risk Lorenzo and his guys finding you,” Jenna insisted. “Knowing what you do, he will kill you if he does and I ain’t gonna let that happen! So you’re staying put!”                      Martha smiled sadly, “Thank you. I don’t know what I’d done if I hadn’t run into you.”</blockquote>

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