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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 86455" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>:yw: <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/children/t8503.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jumping:" title="Jumping :jumping:" data-shortname=":jumping:" /></p><p></p><p>If Jenna has too much on her mind to be able to pay attention to her son's activities and whereabouts, then that's definitely a problem! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></p><p></p><p>Anyway, I hope that you know that I'm <strong>not</strong> critizing your excellent writing skills or your creative mind! I'm just reflecting on the "little" things that the characters say or think, which ... I'm sure ... probably may come off in the wrong way! :shy:</p><p></p><p>Just know that I <strong>care</strong> a LOT about not only your fanfic but also numerous of the characters (whom I've known for years and years <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /> ).</p><p></p><p></p><p>I was thinking of Afton and JR and the "fun" they supposedly had at Lucy and Mitch's wedding! :brick:</p><p></p><p></p><p>There are moments when I don't recognize the Afton in your fanfic! And this is one of those times! Why is it so important for Afton to hold onto Mario? Especially when her daughter clearly doesn't like him ... and Mario doesn't make an effort to capture Becky's heart! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1714.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":confuse:" title="Confuse :confuse:" data-shortname=":confuse:" /></p><p></p><p></p><p>Fine!!! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite11" alt=":rolleyes:" title="Roll Eyes :rolleyes:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":rolleyes:" /> I guess a doctor's visit can be uneventful! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>I need to gather my thoughts before I'm able to review the latest update! Thus, it might be several hours before I'm ready to speak my mind! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/misc/m0719.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hat:" title="Hat :hat:" data-shortname=":hat:" /></p><p></p><p>In the meantime, I'll be looking forward to the next update! <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2011/01/shappy_clap_100-101.gif?w=150&h=133" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":clap:" title="Clap :clap:" data-shortname=":clap:" /> :wink@</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 86455, member: 312"] :yw: :jumping: [B][/B] If Jenna has too much on her mind to be able to pay attention to her son's activities and whereabouts, then that's definitely a problem! :( Anyway, I hope that you know that I'm [B]not[/B] critizing your excellent writing skills or your creative mind! I'm just reflecting on the "little" things that the characters say or think, which ... I'm sure ... probably may come off in the wrong way! :shy: Just know that I [B]care[/B] a LOT about not only your fanfic but also numerous of the characters (whom I've known for years and years ;) ). I was thinking of Afton and JR and the "fun" they supposedly had at Lucy and Mitch's wedding! :brick: There are moments when I don't recognize the Afton in your fanfic! And this is one of those times! Why is it so important for Afton to hold onto Mario? Especially when her daughter clearly doesn't like him ... and Mario doesn't make an effort to capture Becky's heart! :confuse: Fine!!! :rolleyes: I guess a doctor's visit can be uneventful! :) I need to gather my thoughts before I'm able to review the latest update! Thus, it might be several hours before I'm ready to speak my mind! :hat: In the meantime, I'll be looking forward to the next update! :clap: :wink@ [/QUOTE]
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