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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 98754" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>Outstanding scene with Sue Ellen and JR! :loveit: I loved everything about it! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /> You really managed to capture the characters of Sue Ellen and JR in a perfect way! <img src="https://i.pinimg.com/originals/3f/d1/cf/3fd1cf7a83ab196e88aebd2886914733.png" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":yep:" title="Yep :yep:" data-shortname=":yep:" /> Especially with all the detailed descriptions! <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2011/01/shappy_clap_100-101.gif?w=150&h=133" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":clap:" title="Clap :clap:" data-shortname=":clap:" /> It was real easy to imagine Linda and Larry acting out this scene for real! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/fun/m0157.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":dance:" title="Dance :dance:" data-shortname=":dance:" /></p><p></p><p>It just cracked me up that JR insisted on playing a chaperone, when Sue Ellen was going to pick up John Ross from the movies! <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_hehe_100-102.gif?w=145&h=150" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle :giggle:" data-shortname=":giggle:" /> But it <em>did</em> give them a good chance to talk (and JR a chance to get on Sue Ellen's good side)! :wink@</p><p></p><p>Since it was a real lengthy scene, it makes it a bit overwhelming to give feedback (and it may have put you to sleep before I'd be done). Instead, I want to hightlight some of my favorite lines:</p><p></p><p>I loved these lines from Sue Ellen:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">“<em>Now tell me JR darling, if that’s so why were you never worried about me when I was out by myself getting drunk in some bar, while we were married?</em>” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“[John Ross] is the best thing that came out of our marriage!” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Because I thought that it was up to him to tell you himself. ... ... Because don’t tell me that you’re not looking forward to have that father-son talk with John Ross.” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/angel/t1301.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":innocent:" title="Innocent :innocent:" data-shortname=":innocent:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Oh <em>please</em>, like you don’t know, the next thing you’re gonna tell me how he’s a chip off the old block.” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite11" alt=":rolleyes:" title="Roll Eyes :rolleyes:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":rolleyes:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“That’s not fair. I only had affairs because you pushed me to. ... ... Yes you did, by your constant neglect. If you had given me half the attention you’re giving to me now I would never have cheated and you know it!” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/agressive/t0128.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":r&r:" title="R & R :r&r:" data-shortname=":r&r:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>"Anyway I didn’t handle things too good. I forced him to break up with Sandra, thinking that would solve the problem. But John Ross just moved on to the first available girl at school.” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“I liked her better than the other girls. She wasn’t a bimbo like Mandy…” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em> “I’m not jealous, if anything I pity [Mandy]. Since she really thought she had a chance with you. But I of course knew you better.” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></em></li> </ul><p>I loved these lines from JR:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“I must say that I’m proud over the young man [John Ross's] turning into. You’ve raised him well.” <img src="https://i.pinimg.com/originals/3f/d1/cf/3fd1cf7a83ab196e88aebd2886914733.png" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":yep:" title="Yep :yep:" data-shortname=":yep:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“So why didn’t you tell me about his girlfriends when we talked the other day?” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Oh I think it’s a little <em>too late</em> for that now. So why don’t you fill me in instead?” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Well how many girlfriends has [John Ross] had?” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Whoa wait a minute now, John Ross goes to live with you and you allow that idiot husband of yours to send him off to summer camp?” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite9" alt=":eek:" title="Eek! :eek:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":eek:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“So why didn’t you? Was it because you were afraid he’d stay here if you let him leave England...” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite5" alt=":confused:" title="Confused :confused:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":confused:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Well figures, asking a teenage boy who’s started to have sex to give it up is like asking a kid in a candy shop not to eat the sweets!” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Those trips are just an excuse for kids to booze and get laid.” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/black/t1607.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":cool1" title="Cool1 :cool1" data-shortname=":cool1" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“I was gonna say daddy’s first wife” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Good, so how about if the two of us pick up where we…” :wink@</em></li> </ul><p>Great descriptions from this update that just makes a unique difference: :loveit:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>... ... a sarcastic tone of voice </em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>... ... words stung her like a bee</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Sue Ellen couldn’t help but smirk as that explained why JR had suddenly taken an interest in her after John Ross’ birth</em>.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>... ... as she remembered how she had resisted all of his advances at the time. She’d just been too hurt to want him then.</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>JR whistled appreciating</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Sue Ellen gave him an annoyed look</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Sue Ellen went quiet</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Sue Ellen sighed</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>JR looked hurt and not finding the words to comfort him Sue Ellen just changed the subject.</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Sue Ellen looked pensive, as she wondered for the first time just what her son had done that summer in Spain</em></li> </ul><p>Keep on going strong, Karin! <img src="http://www.allsmileys.com/files/sweetim-communicate/6278.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":best:" title="Best :best:" data-shortname=":best:" /> I'll be hoping for another award winning (and lengthy) update from you soon! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 98754, member: 312"] Outstanding scene with Sue Ellen and JR! :loveit: I loved everything about it! :kiss: You really managed to capture the characters of Sue Ellen and JR in a perfect way! :yep: Especially with all the detailed descriptions! :clap: It was real easy to imagine Linda and Larry acting out this scene for real! :dance: It just cracked me up that JR insisted on playing a chaperone, when Sue Ellen was going to pick up John Ross from the movies! :giggle: But it [I]did[/I] give them a good chance to talk (and JR a chance to get on Sue Ellen's good side)! :wink@ Since it was a real lengthy scene, it makes it a bit overwhelming to give feedback (and it may have put you to sleep before I'd be done). Instead, I want to hightlight some of my favorite lines: I loved these lines from Sue Ellen: [LIST] [*]“[I]Now tell me JR darling, if that’s so why were you never worried about me when I was out by myself getting drunk in some bar, while we were married?[/I]” :think: [*][I]“[John Ross] is the best thing that came out of our marriage!” :kiss:[/I] [*][I]“Because I thought that it was up to him to tell you himself. ... ... Because don’t tell me that you’re not looking forward to have that father-son talk with John Ross.” :innocent:[/I] [*][I]“Oh [I]please[/I], like you don’t know, the next thing you’re gonna tell me how he’s a chip off the old block.” :rolleyes:[/I] [*][I]“That’s not fair. I only had affairs because you pushed me to. ... ... Yes you did, by your constant neglect. If you had given me half the attention you’re giving to me now I would never have cheated and you know it!” :r&r:[/I] [*][I]"Anyway I didn’t handle things too good. I forced him to break up with Sandra, thinking that would solve the problem. But John Ross just moved on to the first available girl at school.” :([/I] [*][I]“I liked her better than the other girls. She wasn’t a bimbo like Mandy…” :) :([/I] [*][I] “I’m not jealous, if anything I pity [Mandy]. Since she really thought she had a chance with you. But I of course knew you better.” ;)[/I] [/LIST] I loved these lines from JR: [LIST] [*][I]“I must say that I’m proud over the young man [John Ross's] turning into. You’ve raised him well.” :yep:[/I] [*][I]“So why didn’t you tell me about his girlfriends when we talked the other day?” :think:[/I] [*][I]“Oh I think it’s a little [I]too late[/I] for that now. So why don’t you fill me in instead?” :D[/I] [*][I]“Well how many girlfriends has [John Ross] had?” :think:[/I] [*][I]“Whoa wait a minute now, John Ross goes to live with you and you allow that idiot husband of yours to send him off to summer camp?” :eek:[/I] [*][I]“So why didn’t you? Was it because you were afraid he’d stay here if you let him leave England...” :confused:[/I] [*][I]“Well figures, asking a teenage boy who’s started to have sex to give it up is like asking a kid in a candy shop not to eat the sweets!” :D[/I] [*][I]“Those trips are just an excuse for kids to booze and get laid.” :cool1[/I] [*][I]“I was gonna say daddy’s first wife” :p[/I] [*][I]“Good, so how about if the two of us pick up where we…” :wink@[/I] [/LIST] Great descriptions from this update that just makes a unique difference: :loveit: [LIST] [*][I]... ... a sarcastic tone of voice [/I] [*][I]... ... words stung her like a bee[/I] [*][I]Sue Ellen couldn’t help but smirk as that explained why JR had suddenly taken an interest in her after John Ross’ birth[/I]. [*][I]... ... as she remembered how she had resisted all of his advances at the time. She’d just been too hurt to want him then.[/I] [*][I]JR whistled appreciating[/I] [*][I]Sue Ellen gave him an annoyed look[/I] [*][I]Sue Ellen went quiet[/I] [*][I]Sue Ellen sighed[/I] [*][I]JR looked hurt and not finding the words to comfort him Sue Ellen just changed the subject.[/I] [*][I]Sue Ellen looked pensive, as she wondered for the first time just what her son had done that summer in Spain[/I] [/LIST] Keep on going strong, Karin! :best: I'll be hoping for another award winning (and lengthy) update from you soon! :jolly: [/QUOTE]
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