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<blockquote data-quote="Karin" data-source="post: 98760" data-attributes="member: 57167"><p>Thank you for the feedback <strong>Ms Southworth. </strong>I am glad that you loved the latest update and that you think I had managed to capture the characters. I love JR/SE though so writing for them usually comes easy to me. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Okay so here's tonight's <strong>update: </strong></p><p></p><p>Meanwhile inside of the multiplex. John Ross and Paula came walking out from the cinema with their arms wrapped around each other. “Wasn’t it a good movie John Ross?”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah. But I enjoyed the parts we didn’t see better,” John Ross said, nibbling at her neck.</p><p></p><p>“Me too,” Paula smiled and they exchanged a kiss. “So where do you wanna go now?”</p><p></p><p> John Ross looked at his watch which was past eleven, silently cursing to himself as he remembered that his mom was gonna pick him up at 11. “Um…I’m sorry babe, but I have to get going.” Paula looked disappointed and John Ross continued. “But I’d love to see you again.”</p><p></p><p>Paula smiled. “Me too, so you want to get together tomorrow and…”</p><p></p><p>“Um… I can’t. I promised Chris I’d do something with him,” John Ross replied, before adding hopefully, “But maybe in the week if you ain’t busy?” </p><p></p><p>“Well I got a stinking summer job…” Paula sighed, “But how about Friday night, 10 o’clock?”</p><p></p><p>John Ross sighed a little at the prospect of having to wait another week to see her again. But as he looked at her cleavage and long legs in the mini skirt he realized that she was worth the wait. So he said, “Sure. Where do you wanna meet?”</p><p></p><p>“<em>On the Rocks</em> sounds ok?”</p><p></p><p>“A night club?” John Ross asked.</p><p></p><p>Paula looked at him. “Yeah it’s not a problem, is it?”</p><p></p><p>“No, not at all,” John Ross lied. “I’ll see you then.”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah see ya,” Paula said and gave him a kiss before leaving. John Ross smiled as he walked away towards JR’s waiting car.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin, post: 98760, member: 57167"] Thank you for the feedback [B]Ms Southworth. [/B]I am glad that you loved the latest update and that you think I had managed to capture the characters. I love JR/SE though so writing for them usually comes easy to me. :) Okay so here's tonight's [B]update: [/B] Meanwhile inside of the multiplex. John Ross and Paula came walking out from the cinema with their arms wrapped around each other. “Wasn’t it a good movie John Ross?” “Yeah. But I enjoyed the parts we didn’t see better,” John Ross said, nibbling at her neck. “Me too,” Paula smiled and they exchanged a kiss. “So where do you wanna go now?” John Ross looked at his watch which was past eleven, silently cursing to himself as he remembered that his mom was gonna pick him up at 11. “Um…I’m sorry babe, but I have to get going.” Paula looked disappointed and John Ross continued. “But I’d love to see you again.” Paula smiled. “Me too, so you want to get together tomorrow and…” “Um… I can’t. I promised Chris I’d do something with him,” John Ross replied, before adding hopefully, “But maybe in the week if you ain’t busy?” “Well I got a stinking summer job…” Paula sighed, “But how about Friday night, 10 o’clock?” John Ross sighed a little at the prospect of having to wait another week to see her again. But as he looked at her cleavage and long legs in the mini skirt he realized that she was worth the wait. So he said, “Sure. Where do you wanna meet?” “[I]On the Rocks[/I] sounds ok?” “A night club?” John Ross asked. Paula looked at him. “Yeah it’s not a problem, is it?” “No, not at all,” John Ross lied. “I’ll see you then.” “Yeah see ya,” Paula said and gave him a kiss before leaving. John Ross smiled as he walked away towards JR’s waiting car. [/QUOTE]
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