Dallas TNT based on someone else's idea for a start

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Jay swims up to a beau full girl in the midnight light of a full moon. He seems a bit drunk, telling her to “shhhhhh.” She kisses him and walks out of the water. He appreciates the view of her body in a white bikini. He quickly follows her. “You know how rare it is to get this house to myself?”

“Well it’s the first time I’ve been over.”

He leans over her, “Let’s see. My grandmother is in London. A friends party or something. My Uncle Bobby is in California with his wife. Chris and Amy are in Chicago meeting with architects. They’re finally working on moving out. Lucas has moved out. Lucy’s, who ever knows where Lucy’s at. And my dad took Steven on a fishing trip.”

“Wow you gotta a lot of people living here.”

“Yeah we do. And I’m suppose to stay. This is suppose to be my house.”

“You don’t want it to be?”

“I don’t know what I want,” he says rubbing her breasts, “other than you right now.”

“You want me? How bad do you want me?”

“oh darlin’ I ain’t ever wanted something so bad.” He goes to kiss her and winds up sucking on her neck. She looks up.

Lucas stands in the balancing watching and gives her thumbs up.




Josh Ross and Steven walk-in into a rustic cottage in a wooded area off a secluded late. He’s explaining that it’s OK to be grossed out by worms and fish and that he doesn’t have to worry about it, they grossed him out too for a long time.

JR says, “Yeah but you got over it.”

“What are you doing here?”

JR says, “I heard you went fishin’. It is my huntin’ lodge,” as Steven runs up and hugs him by his legs.

Steven asks, “Are you gonna go fishing too?”

“I just might. Would you like that?”

“Of course I would.”

JR muses his hair, “Well first thing next morning we’ll do just that.”

“Is there something special I owe for this visit?”

“Nothing at all. Just wanted to see my grandsons. Where’s Jay?”

“He wanted to stay back.”

“Yeah I bet he did.”

“He’s seventeen. I think he’s old enough to be in how own for a couple days.”

“You know he’s got a girl over, right?”

“It’s the one thing you taught me well. Know everything that’s going on around me. But I think at seventeen I’ve gotta give him some privacy.”

“I’d agree with you. Except this girl’s been hired by Lucas. I told you, you can’t trust him.”

“What are you saying? Lucas hired some girl to seduce him?”

“That boy’s trouble where ever he goes. I told you that. You think that kid made all that money by playing nice? But it’ll be a good lesson for Jay.”

“You’re something else.”

“I told you I’d fix things up. Didn’t I say, show a little interest in the ranch and your Uncle Bob’ll give it and the house to you. He’s chomping at the big to get to California.”

“That why you helped Aunt Pam?”

“Sure wasn’t to get her back to Dallas. No I realized that maybe it was better off he move away and move on. And I told you, be careful with Christopher.”

“I’m not worried about him. He wouldn’t hurt family.”

“No I suppose not.”

“Can’t say the same about you?”

“Me?” JR laughs. “What about you. You been playin’ them like fiddles.”

“Some people just to easy to pass up. I’m proud of you.”

“For what?”

“I never was very good at sharin’. You sharing Ewing Oil. Even finding a way to rein Chris in with Richard Channing and your cousin Lucy. I gotta say, it was a good plan. They’re two people on your team you wanna gave. I know I under estimated little Lucy all these years, but I’m impressed. And not a one if them gonna stand in the way of doing’ what’s gotta be done. And while the oil industry makes some pretty big adjustments, you gonna be prepared to sit back and watch others get their hands dirty.”

“Uncle Bobby wants me as Chairman of the Board, Chris as President and CEO. Lucy in the board. Richard Channing and Greg Sumner.”

“The Senator?”

“He’s retiring this year. He figures his being a former Secretary of the Treasurer and U.S. Senator would be a good idea. I guess he’s a friend of Uncle Gary’s as well.”

“Something like that.”

“We’re in the prices of looking for two more external board members.”

“Alright then.”

“I want to know why tell Lucas he’s Bobby’s son. Why’d you do that? We had everything well in hand.”

“I didn’t. It came to my attention. I’m just tryin’ to get out in front. I don’t know who’s been gettin’ at that boy. But he’s a stick of lit dynamite.”

“You swear this wasn’t you?”

“I don’t lie to you boy.”
 

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Continue the series? Thank you.
Thank you for your interest. I also want to apologize for all the typos. So this set up was a friend’s idea and that’s about all they told me, so I stoped writing. But, I can continue. First, I’ll summarize:

John Ross is raising two boys at South Fork, a rancher with his hands in way more than it would seem. He’s allied with his father but at a distance. He seems to be falling for Pamela and has an unknown x out there that JR has made into an enemy

Pamela Barnes is an executive with the company about to pull it into the direction of alternative energy. She seems to be falling for John Ross, though she shouldn’t.

Jay, his oldest, is a wild playboy sowing his wild oats.

Chris is a bit of a copy of JR, ruthless and married to the bluest of blooded Texans. He runs the company with a trust from his father of 28%, with John Ross overseeing a trust of 28% from Sue Ellen and Lucy having put together a trust of 28%. Richard Channing is also in the mix with 16%.

Amy is Chris’s wife and runs the Ewing Farlow Foundation, a huge operation, sort of under estimated, like her.

Lucas is trying to make moves to get him a share of the family money buy is finding it difficult get in.

Lucy is way underestimated and determined to bring her family together.

also:

JR, living on his yacht, attempting to pull strings from a far, controlling a giant energy corporation.

Sue Ellen, back and forth from London, as Lucy takes her place as matriarch of the clan and even a role on the foundation.

Bobby, retiring to ranching in California and a quite life with Pam.

and?

Who had the information about Bobby being Lucas’s father that JR had to come out ahead of.
 

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You are all very good at writing, better than me. I would invite you to do it all together in a unique series from the end of TNT (very bad in my opinion) bringing back the series you have better times. Somehow I can help out too. Thank you.
 

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You are all very good at writing, better than me. I would invite you to do it all together in a unique series from the end of TNT (very bad in my opinion) bringing back the series you have better times. Somehow I can help out too. Thank you.
There is one I’m working on now that’s a continuation after TNT but more. It’s is a combination of big 4 American prime time soaps of the 80s with Dallas’s John Ross (actually following the TNT series), Dynasty’s Krystina, Knot’s Landing’s Brian and from Falcon Crest Michael, Kevin and Angela.

 

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Maybe we should have found out that the terminally ill J.R. had actually hired Ann to shoot him.

 

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6 months later . . .

John Ross, Jay, Steven and Lucy have breakfast out by the pool when Chris and Amy come out of the house. Lucy asks how the last meeting in Chicago went and Amy says, “Not bad, but I’m not sure Chris and I are on the same page. He wants a neon sign to hedonism and I’m looking for something elegant and comfortable. We’ve got another meeting with an architect near D.C.”.

Lucy says, “Well I think you should just give up and stay here and have children.”

Chris says, “No this is John Ross’s house, speaking of elegant, comfortable and quaint.”

John Ross says, “We could do something with the attic.”

Amy says, “No. we need our own space. Besides, once you remarry.”

“I’m not remarrying. Besides, if I did, I’m not having them monkey with Grandma’s house.”

Chris says, “I hear you’re going to the Oil Barrons’ Ball with Pamela Barnes.”

“That’s a long ways from marriage.”

Lucy says, “I heard JR is going with Sue Ellen.”

“Oh my God, no.”

Lucy smiles at John Ross. “By the way, I saw you meeting with that guy early this morning. What was that all about?”

“Nosey much.”

“Considering he works for Richard Channing I thought it might be of consequence to all of us.”

“We’ll Lucy dear, you did a pretty good job manipulating all of us, even my father, so I guess I might as well tell everyone here what you already know. So she managed to get us all a piece of Ewing Industries. We’re all sharing 28%, Chris, me and my three brothers, Lucy and her three siblings, and thanks to her friend, Richard Channing, Ray’s four children with share sixteen percent.”

“What!” Chris shouts.

“She’s also the one I’m assuming who helped Lucas find out his real father was Uncle Bobby.”

Lucy looks proud. “No more secrets. Ray’s family are Ewing’s. They’re entitled to a piece.” Looking at Chris she states, “You’re by far the single largest shareholder. You run the company, no question. Well with John Ross as chairman and the board.”

“Ray’s a bastard. Lucas is my father’s bastard, that the bastard Ray took in. So are John Ross’s brothers, all bastards.”

John Ross says, “Watch your mouth.”

“I’m just stating facts. Why should you share Ewing Industries with them? Is JR splitting up his shares in Trident among all of you?”

“No,” John Ross answers. “But then my father thinks just like you. He’s furious i set it up so I share my mother’s shares with my brothers. In fact he’s made it impossible for me to do the same with his trust.”

“See what I’m saying? You bought the Southfork Cattle Company from my dad. Are you going to share that too?”

“Maybe. In fact I was thinking of selling it to Ewing Industries so in that sense we’d all share it.”

“Oh my god and what you’d have them all move in here?”

“Why not?” Lucy asks.

“Because you can’t trust bastards,” Chris says standing and walking away toward the cars.

Jay says, “Got any bastards yourself daddy?”

“Yeah you. Your momma and I weren’t married when you were born, thanks to your grandfather that is.” John Ross stands and walks away toward the house.

Amy says, “Well at least no one ended up in the pool.”

Lucy says, “Give it time.”
 

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There is one I’m working on now that’s a continuation after TNT but more. It’s is a combination of big 4 American prime time soaps of the 80s with Dallas’s John Ross (actually following the TNT series), Dynasty’s Krystina, Knot’s Landing’s Brian and from Falcon Crest Michael, Kevin and Angela.

actually it's not exactly what I was looking for. Anyway thank you.
 

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actually it's not exactly what I was looking for. Anyway thank you.
So not sure what you mean. Just a continuation of Dallas TNT?

Maybe:
 
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