Thank you for the feedback Ms Southworth. 
Well yeah Ronald and Randy and their lack of style was meant to be funny. You know originally this scene was when Randy first showed up as he was not in episode 1-4 in the first draft. Of course when we wrote it we didn't know that Randy was portrayed by Brad Pitt on the show! :lolo:
You are right about the interpretation of course. Any text in literature, media etc. are always open to different readings. I know that. So yes you are of course entitled to your own interpretation.
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Okay so one riding scene coming up in this update:
At the Southfork stables was Margaret walking back and forth looking at the different horses, as she read from a book about horses. Ray turned to her and asked, “Margaret, have you made up your mind yet?”
“Um…according to my book I should have a thoroughbred stallion…”
“I don’t think so,” Ray laughed.
“Darling, you can’t read in a book which horse you should have,” Donna said. “Why don’t you just let daddy pick one out for you?”
“That’s right sweetheart and I think you will need Lucy’s old horse. He’s a good one.”
“Alright daddy, now which saddle…” Margaret started looking in her book again.
“Margaret daddy has already picked one out for you,” Donna confiscated the book from Margaret, before she turned to Ray. “Ray will you get me a good saddle?”
“Sure,” Ray said and went to get a saddle. Ray and Donna saddled their horses while Margaret tried to put on her helmet. Ray looked over at Donna and said, “So you still remember how to saddle a horse then?”
“Of course cowboy,” Donna smiled, “How about a challenge?” She asked playfully. “First one to the lake and back?”
“Tempting…” Ray smiled, before he threw a glance in Margaret’s direction. “But don’t you think Margaret would be a little upset with us if we just took off?”
They laughed and Donna said, “You’re right, still the challenge is still good for another day.”
“Oh you’re on! There is no way you’ll beat me there!” Ray grinned.
“Daddy help me!” Margaret called. Ray walked over to Margaret and helped her lock her helmet and then he lifted her up in the saddle. “WOW! How high up I am!” Margaret exclaimed delightedly.
“Yes you are, great huh?” Ray asked.
“Yeah” Margaret nodded.
“Now you kick a little with your legs, hold tight to the reins and the horse will set off,” Ray instructed Margaret. “Okay?”
“And I stop with a prroo?” Margaret asked and Donna laughed, as she sat on her horse.
“Yes darling but don’t forget to pull the reins to make him turn!” Donna reminded her daughter. “So can we ride now?”
“Of course,” Ray said. “I mean what are we waiting for?”
“You!” Donna and Margaret exclaimed in unison. Ray laughed before he got up on his horse and they rode off.
Well yeah Ronald and Randy and their lack of style was meant to be funny. You know originally this scene was when Randy first showed up as he was not in episode 1-4 in the first draft. Of course when we wrote it we didn't know that Randy was portrayed by Brad Pitt on the show! :lolo:
You are right about the interpretation of course. Any text in literature, media etc. are always open to different readings. I know that. So yes you are of course entitled to your own interpretation.
Okay so one riding scene coming up in this update:
At the Southfork stables was Margaret walking back and forth looking at the different horses, as she read from a book about horses. Ray turned to her and asked, “Margaret, have you made up your mind yet?”
“Um…according to my book I should have a thoroughbred stallion…”
“I don’t think so,” Ray laughed.
“Darling, you can’t read in a book which horse you should have,” Donna said. “Why don’t you just let daddy pick one out for you?”
“That’s right sweetheart and I think you will need Lucy’s old horse. He’s a good one.”
“Alright daddy, now which saddle…” Margaret started looking in her book again.
“Margaret daddy has already picked one out for you,” Donna confiscated the book from Margaret, before she turned to Ray. “Ray will you get me a good saddle?”
“Sure,” Ray said and went to get a saddle. Ray and Donna saddled their horses while Margaret tried to put on her helmet. Ray looked over at Donna and said, “So you still remember how to saddle a horse then?”
“Of course cowboy,” Donna smiled, “How about a challenge?” She asked playfully. “First one to the lake and back?”
“Tempting…” Ray smiled, before he threw a glance in Margaret’s direction. “But don’t you think Margaret would be a little upset with us if we just took off?”
They laughed and Donna said, “You’re right, still the challenge is still good for another day.”
“Oh you’re on! There is no way you’ll beat me there!” Ray grinned.
“Daddy help me!” Margaret called. Ray walked over to Margaret and helped her lock her helmet and then he lifted her up in the saddle. “WOW! How high up I am!” Margaret exclaimed delightedly.
“Yes you are, great huh?” Ray asked.
“Yeah” Margaret nodded.
“Now you kick a little with your legs, hold tight to the reins and the horse will set off,” Ray instructed Margaret. “Okay?”
“And I stop with a prroo?” Margaret asked and Donna laughed, as she sat on her horse.
“Yes darling but don’t forget to pull the reins to make him turn!” Donna reminded her daughter. “So can we ride now?”
“Of course,” Ray said. “I mean what are we waiting for?”
“You!” Donna and Margaret exclaimed in unison. Ray laughed before he got up on his horse and they rode off.
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At the same time, it is both funny and tragic how Margaret can't seem to let go of her books! The thought of a child bringing a book to the stables is quite sad, IMO! I know that she means well, but still! 
I'm looking forward to the race that they decided to have! It's probably for the best anyway that they do it alone on a day when Margaret is busy with something else! 
Also, I don't know how he's been spending his time, why he came back a day early, and why he was dressed in "strange" clothes!
I guess that I'll just have to wait to get the answers to my questions! 


