Dallas in the 90's

Presea

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Thanks a lot for the suggestion, @Miss Texas 1967! :kiss::kiss::kiss: I know about www.fanfiction.net already, but unfortunately, so far I haven't been lucky to find good fanfic stuff there! There seems to be a lot of "old" and unfinished fanfics, but maybe I'm not doing a good job at looking in the right places! Could you please share the titles of the three fanfics that you're thinking of?

Besides Karin and Jenny's fanfic, I also truly enjoy reading @Ray&Donna's fanfic, "The Cowboy and the Lady". If you haven't read it yet, please check it out! :wink@

I also love the fanfic, "Return to Southfork", @Karin Schill! :gotcha: It's a long fanfic with 137(?) episodes all our favorite characters ... and then some! It does have parts that I'm not particularly in to (especially in the middle), but overall, I really liked it! :jolly: Honestly, I really liked Katherine's storyline in "Return to Southfork", @Presea. I was shocked when Katherine fooled Pam (again) not only on the cruise but also when they were both living at their Rebecca's old house in Dallas. All of a sudden, Katherine kidnapped Pam and also came close to killing her. It was a great read, IMO! :yep:

:heels: HAPPY MIDSOMMER!!! :heels:
There are only about four Dallas stories (mine included) on ff.net that are being updated fairly regularly. (One is in the M section). And they are all really original and good. (Well, maybe I shouldn't brag about mine. Lol.) My favorite one is The Beauty Queen and the Oil Baron. (Man, does that one take you on an adventure!) Also, if you go to the thread titled Hello in the Writer's Room, there are two direct links to the ones written by Miss Texas 1967 and I. It really is sad that a lot of writers on ff.net for Dallas either just deleted or their work, or stopped updating their stories after the TNT Dallas got cancelled.
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great update Karin. :)JR and Katherine are horrible people for taking Rebecca to see a doctor and for disguising themselves as her parents and for making the doctor draw Rebecca's blood for a paternity test.:( I hope Rebecca tells Bobby and Pam all about her little visit to the doctor with JR and Katherine when they return home from their trip to Houston even though she promised them both that she wouldn't tell Bobby and Pam about it because it was to be their little secret.;)
 
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Miss Texas 1967

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Thanks a lot for the suggestion, @Miss Texas 1967! :kiss::kiss::kiss: I know about www.fanfiction.net already, but unfortunately, so far I haven't been lucky to find good fanfic stuff there! There seems to be a lot of "old" and unfinished fanfics, but maybe I'm not doing a good job at looking in the right places! Could you please share the titles of the three fanfics that you're thinking of?

There's definitely a whole heap of unfinished stuff over there (there used to be here too, I used to make sure to check something was finished before starting to read), there also seems to be a good audience over there though too, different to here.

The stories that I am reading (and one I'm writing) are:

Jealousy, it's a JR/SE/Bobby/Pam/Ewing family story. I'm not sure if the author is on here but this story is engaging and enjoyable, also easy to read (the first chapter appears to be missing but it shouldn't be hard to read after that). https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11717767/1/Jealousy

Written by the same author, shorter story about Sue Ellen post-Don, it's a romance, but also a drama. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12170816/1/Reconciliation

@Presea Writes a JR/Katherine story set in season 6/7, AU naturally. A slow burn (not in a bad way necessarily) drama/romance. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11986117/1/A-Love-Born-From-Tragedy

I write a story that starts off pre-Miss Texas and is currently at 1973, it's a JR/SE story which incorporates the rest of the family too, not just a straight romance though, definitely a drama. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11165941/1/The-Beauty-Queen-The-Oil-Baron

All stories are ongoing with authors who are actually present and active, not uploading once a year or so :) All are fairly long too so once you're engaged in reading it's a nice long period between starting and being caught up.
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for your comments and fanfic tips. :)

Presea, thank you for saying that you prefer my story to RTS I take that as a huge compliment. :)
You know there were some stuff in RTS that I don't like either. Them killing off Jenna for one thing. :(
Also you are right that it's very plot twist focused. But they did reunite Bobby and Pam and I think some fans enjoyed that story mainly because of that.
But yeah I think that RTS might have originated the whole "evil Katherine kidnaps Pam plots" that is so common in fanfics. So I can see why you prefer our version (which was written before I read RTS btw) better. Actually I'm glad that you do. :)

Ms Southworth, thank you. I'm not surprised you loved RTS as it did reunite Bobby and Pam and gave them more kids. Also I stumbled over episode 139 about a week ago. It was unfinished and posted here:

http://returntosouthfork.blogspot.se/

I haven't read it yet though.

Sanda,
thank you for the feedback. You'll find out when Bobby and Pam gets back if Rebecca can keep a secret or not... ;)

Miss Texas 1967, thank you for all the fanfic links. :)
Also did you use to post your story "The Beauty Queen and The Oil Baron" over here as well before the board crashed?
I am wondering since I seem to recall reading a story that dealt with that time.

I also recall enjoying a lot of stories by @Sarah, @Rosie and @Crazy For Sue Ellen before the board crashed as well as several other authors...it's really a shame we lost our entire archieve here when the site went down. :(
 

Miss Texas 1967

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Miss Texas 1967, thank you for all the fanfic links. :)
Also did you use to post your story "The Beauty Queen and The Oil Baron" over here as well before the board crashed?
I am wondering since I seem to recall reading a story that dealt with that time.

Nope, just ff.net, though I did discuss it with a couple of people in one of the threads before the site was wiped.

I have posted one story here, it's on the second page of the writer's room forum. I do prefer the user interface of ff.net though (and I always seem to get more feedback over there than on here) so I think I'll continue to post there and link back to here. What I mean by user interface is that I like having the chapters separate from feedback, and the statistics are really helpful and interesting, there are all kinds of graphs and stuff to let you separate individual readers from the amount of times something has been viewed, plus you can see when and where your views are coming from. It's kind of useless in some regards, it doesn't actually have any impact on the writing process, but it's also helpful to understand your audience and I kind of find it fascinating (such a nerd lol :bag: ).

This was all sort of away from the main question, sorry.
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Thanks to everyone for sharing where to find good fanfics! :spinning: :wave: :wink@

If I was to compare fanfics that incorporates all the central characters on "Dallas" (and not fanfics that focuses on a few characters), I definitely prefer "Dallas in the 90's" over "Return to Southfork" (RTS). :kiss: Thus, even more reason for you to get on with episode 7, @Karin Schill! :kiss: You and Jenny are my #1!!! :loveit: For the record, it appears as though @Jessie is almost caught up now, so there's no excuse!!! Unless, of course, you're not done celebrating Midsummer ... or perhaps still recuperating from all the partying? :D

A few comments from me regarding "Return to Southfork" (RTS):
  • I didn't mind when RTS had Jenna commit suicide, since it tied into the storyline. But I will say that I'd been just as pleased if she had just left town or only rarely made an apperance, since she wasn't part of the core cast, IMO! :hat:
  • As much as I enjoyed Bobby and Pam's storyline in RTS, I just as much enjoyed following all the other core characters' "fate". IMHO, "Dallas" just isn't "Dallas" without the core cast! :danc: Over time, RTS introduced a lot of new characters, which is fine as long as it doesn't take focus away from the storylines of the core cast! :) As far as I recall, the writers of RTS were successful with some and not so successful with others! :re:
  • The idea of Katherine kidnapping Pam didn't originate from RST! It was the writers of "Dallas" who planted that particular idea into the viewers' heads by having Katherine show up in "odd" ways on-screen. And that's most likely why quite a few fanfics have taken that "route", IMO! ;)
LET'S START THE ENGINE ONCE AGAIN, @Karin Schill!!! :spinning: Give it up for the amazing 90's! :clap:
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
I do prefer the user interface of ff.net though (and I always seem to get more feedback over there than on here) so I think I'll continue to post there and link back to here. What I mean by user interface is that I like having the chapters separate from feedback, and the statistics are really helpful and interesting, there are all kinds of graphs and stuff to let you separate individual readers from the amount of times something has been viewed, plus you can see when and where your views are coming from. It's kind of useless in some regards, it doesn't actually have any impact on the writing process, but it's also helpful to understand your audience and I kind of find it fascinating (such a nerd lol :bag: ).
I have to agree with you, @Miss Texas 1967! :gotcha: When reading a long fanfic, it's more reader-friendly that all the comments are separated (but you're still able to access them as desired) from the story itself! :jolly:

However, www.fanfiction.net could use an upgrade in terms of web design! It's difficult to find your way around ff.net and thus not an easy task to discover the "good stuff". :(
 

Miss Texas 1967

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I have to agree with you, @Miss Texas 1967However, www.fanfiction.net could use an upgrade in terms of web design! It's difficult to find your way around ff.net and thus not an easy task to discover the "good stuff". :(

Which part do you find difficult? The only thing I find a pain is when there's a book series and a movie or TV show and the stories are sorted into one or the other and it only occurs to you later that that's where it is, that it does actually exist lol. Once you're in a section though it's fairly easy to navigate imo, you can sort by just about anything as long as the author has input that info. The visual of the site is fairly basic, I doubt anyone has changed how it looks for a long time, but I don't find it hard to use as such.

e.g. Use the dropdowns to narrow down the selection or sort by different things or filter things out.

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I'm a nerd, I like the stats lol

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Presea

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Thank you everyone for your comments and fanfic tips. :)

Presea, thank you for saying that you prefer my story to RTS I take that as a huge compliment. :)
You know there were some stuff in RTS that I don't like either. Them killing off Jenna for one thing. :(
Also you are right that it's very plot twist focused. But they did reunite Bobby and Pam and I think some fans enjoyed that story mainly because of that.
But yeah I think that RTS might have originated the whole "evil Katherine kidnaps Pam plots" that is so common in fanfics. So I can see why you prefer our version (which was written before I read RTS btw) better. Actually I'm glad that you do. :)

Ms Southworth, thank you. I'm not surprised you loved RTS as it did reunite Bobby and Pam and gave them more kids. Also I stumbled over episode 139 about a week ago. It was unfinished and posted here:

http://returntosouthfork.blogspot.se/

I haven't read it yet though.

Sanda,
thank you for the feedback. You'll find out when Bobby and Pam gets back if Rebecca can keep a secret or not... ;)

Miss Texas 1967, thank you for all the fanfic links. :)
Also did you use to post your story "The Beauty Queen and The Oil Baron" over here as well before the board crashed?
I am wondering since I seem to recall reading a story that dealt with that time.

I also recall enjoying a lot of stories by @Sarah, @Rosie and @Crazy For Sue Ellen before the board crashed as well as several other authors...it's really a shame we lost our entire archieve here when the site went down. :(
I'll admit that Jenna wasn't one of my favorites, but killing her off seems a bit extreme. Why do I get the feeling that they might have killed off any character who had either previously been with Pam or Bobby, or wanted to be with them? Lol.

Sarah had a promising fanfic right before the site crashed where Don Dorkwood was evil and Sue Ellen had to run back to Dallas to hide from him because he was abusing her. I think it was called "Boomerang".
 

Presea

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I have to agree with you, @Miss Texas 1967! :gotcha: When reading a long fanfic, it's more reader-friendly that all the comments are separated (but you're still able to access them as desired) from the story itself! :jolly:

However, www.fanfiction.net could use an upgrade in terms of web design! It's difficult to find your way around ff.net and thus not an easy task to discover the "good stuff". :(
I'll admit that the mobile version of the site is sort of a pain in the rear, but the normal version pretty much does all of the work for you, in my opinion.
 

Presea

Telly Talk Addict
Which part do you find difficult? The only thing I find a pain is when there's a book series and a movie or TV show and the stories are sorted into one or the other and it only occurs to you later that that's where it is, that it does actually exist lol. Once you're in a section though it's fairly easy to navigate imo, you can sort by just about anything as long as the author has input that info. The visual of the site is fairly basic, I doubt anyone has changed how it looks for a long time, but I don't find it hard to use as such.

e.g. Use the dropdowns to narrow down the selection or sort by different things or filter things out.

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I'm a nerd, I like the stats lol

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Oh! Is this your view counter? Mine looks like that too now with the Yugioh story! I am such a nerd with the stats as well!
 

Honkytonkangel

Telly Talk Fan
@Karin Schill. It was a lot of thoughts running together. I want JR to win in the battle of wills with Rebecca, as annoying as I find Bobby and Pam I don't want them torn apart again (mostly for Chris' sake though), though I still think there is something Pam is hiding.
I want JR to wipe the floor with Marilee and I want him to get Sue Ellen and John Ross back.
 

Karin

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Staff Member
Thank you for all of your comments. :)

Miss Texas1967, okay thanks for clarifying about your story. Maybe it was another story I read then. Also all those graphs that you posted remind me of my youtube channel. I'm such a nerd for keeping track of the statistics over there too! ;)

Also maybe you should bump up your one shot thread and post your links to your other stories in there?
I think it would be nice to have them all gathered at one place as surely in this long thread those links will get lost among all the other posts.

Ms Southworth, thank you for saying that you prefer this story to RTS so far, I take that as a huge compliment. :)
I think you make a good point about how Katherine being involved in Pam's disappearance was sort of planted or implied on the show. So considering that I can see why RTS and other stories went with the kidnapping plot. I also agree with you that it's nice to read stories that includes all of the main characters since as much as I've enjoyed reading a story that focus on specific pairings it does get another dynamics when you have more characters in the story.

Presea, I am glad that you don't want to see Jenna dead. I agree with you that it's not nice when fanfics goes killing off a bunch of original characters just because they don't like them. I mean if they don't like the characters it's better not to write about them at all.
Also I agree with you about Sarah's new story right before the crash. It was really good. :)

Honkytonkangel, thanks for clarifying what you meant when you said that you wanted JR to win. I think some of those things on your wish list will happen sooner or later... ;)

Okay so the first scene of episode seven will be posted in the next post...
 

Karin

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Staff Member
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JR and Sue Ellen were out riding over the grass fields at Southfork Ranch. The morning sun was slowly rising beyond the horizon and the morning air was fresh and crisp. As their horses slowed down a little Sue Ellen turned to JR with a smile on her face, “Thanks for joining me this morning. It’s been nice with some company.”

“I’m glad you think so,” JR smiled back. “Just too bad we couldn’t take John Ross with us, I’m sure he would have loved it.”

“No he wouldn’t,” Sue Ellen laughed, “in case you haven’t noticed it yet, our son’s a sleepy head.”

“I’ve noticed it, but I thought it was just jetlag.”

“Well if it was jetlag he’d be more awake in the mornings.”

“Right England’s ahead of us in time,” JR laughed.

“They are,” Sue Ellen confirmed.

“Still to tell you the truth, I am not exactly disappointed to have you all to myself.”

“I bet you aren’t.”

“Sue Ellen I mean it, there’s nothing like watching the sunrise together with someone you really care about.”

“I know and it sure has been a long time since we’ve been out riding like this.”

“Too long,” he said sadly and she nodded in agreement.

“Remember how we used to love it when we were first married?”

“Oh yeah I remember those mornings well,” JR smiled. “We used to ride out to watch the sunrise like this.”

“We did and I used to think that I was the luckiest girl in the world, being married to a man who would inherit all this…”

“Southfork sure is a special place.”

“It really is beautiful out here,” Sue Ellen agreed. “You know being out on the ranch like this has been one of the things I’ve missed the most about Texas when I was in England.”

“I’ve missed you,” he said sincerly, giving her a look that made her feel something familiar stir inside. “Do you remember how you sometimes used to bring a pick-nick basket and we’d have breakfast out in the open nearby the lake?”

“Yeah,” she nodded. “That lake sure was cold to swim in at springtime…”

“I remember, luckily we knew how to get warm afterwards…”

“We did, but that was a long time ago,” she tried to cut him off.

But he won’t have it. “It was, but I miss those days. I mean there’s nothing that beats starting the day with a little love making, especially outdoors…”

Sue Ellen shifted uncomfortably from his words as she remembered it all too well, “Well the things you do when you are young and in love…”

“Are you saying we’re too old to act like that now?”

She knew what he was getting at and a part of her wished that they could go back. Yet she could never let him know that so she quickly changed the subject. "I think we’d better head back to the ranch now, before they start missing us at breakfast…”

“Yeah,” JR reluctantly agreed, “I’m starved,” he smiled at her, before they turned the horses around and started riding back towards the ranch in silence.
 

Presea

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Once again, JR is looking at only the past and what few good times he and Sue Ellen had instead of looking at how and why everything fell apart. The picnics and the swimming must have happened before the show, because I sure don't remember JR doing anything like that when I saw Dallas. Also, it was established that JR pretty much hates horseback during their second honeymoon in season 6 (dvd) when he couldn't be bothered to take a ride with Sue Ellen when she asked him, so I don't know how this happened now. But more than anything, if JR really thinks all of this is so wonderful, then why did he completely stop doing it for over ten years of their marriage and just spend most of his time at the office and "lovemaking" with about 50 billion other women who weren't Sue Ellen? That is what he needs to figure out. And Sue Ellen is not being very proactive about discussing these problems, either. It honestly just looks like Sue Ellen is just being passively pushed back into a relationship by JR, and that all transgressions will instantly be forgiven as soon as Don Dorkwood is dealt with and she is divorced. If you want me to believe in this JR/Sue Ellen thing, you're going to have to try a LOT harder than scenes like this, Karin. Sue Ellen was the victim in an abusive relationship with JR, so an easy fix is going to look incredibly unrealistic to me.

Wow, Katherine's chapter sure ended fast, huh? Well, not really fast with all the hiatuses in it, but it seems odd that she barely had any scenes or a storyline that really went anywhere in her own chapter.
 
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Ms Southworth

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Great update! :dance: I'm really excited that episode 7 is finally on the road! :clap:

I wonder what the episode titel refers to ... ... :think: ... ... "Please, don't embarrass me" ... ... Will Miss Ellie catch John Ross and Christopher doing something "bad"? :giggle: I can't wait to find out what it is! :hats:

I liked the conversation between Sue Ellen and JR (although I'm having a hard time picturing JR on a horse)! :giggle: Anyway, the reference to the things they used to like doing way back when sounds really nice! If only JR had stuck to these kinds of "activities" (instead of running around town with ladies other than Sue Ellen) ... ... ... :hat:... ... He could have had it all! :kiss: And Sue Ellen as well! :kiss:

Please update soon! :jolly:
 

Jessie

Telly Talk Superstar
I'm finally caught up, I'm sorry for getting so far behind Karin. I love your story, I love how your writing all the characters.

I also enjoy reading all the comments people are really invested in your story.

You know I love JR and Sue Ellen. I really hope she divorces Don, and reunites with JR. I think she should take her time, and really make sure JR has changed, and won't hurt her again.

I'm not a Jenna fan but I can't wait until she goes To Southfork. I think Ray and Jenna should divorce I don't think they love each other enough to stay together. I really like Lucas but how will he react when he sees Bobby? I think Ray is the Father he wants but it will be interesting to see how Bobby reacts too. I feel bad for Christopher when he finds out about Lucas.

I love the Pam and Bobby storyline. It will be interesting to see Pam's reaction when she sees Jenna and Lucas.

JR and Katherine taking Rebecca for blood tests is aweful but maybe JR will find out she is Bobby's Daughter and be happy about it.

I love how you write all the children in the story.

Can't wait to read more of your awesome story.❤️❤️
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Do you remember my comment about what the episode titel possibly could refer to??? ;)

It just occured to me that it could also be the other way around, i.e. that the teenage boys will "catch" Miss Ellie in an embarrassing situation??? :giggle:
Now I'm even more anxious to find out what it all means! :hats:
 
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