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Dallas in the 90's

Presea

Telly Talk Addict
Okay, here are my thoughts:
I'm pleasantly surprised that Richard is taking Pam's news so well. I hope that she and Bobby can finally put all of their exes behind them and just hurry up and get married already. I feel like we see too many conversations about them talking about it with acquaintances. Okay, you guys are together again. Yes, we already know.

Sue Ellen needs to get her brain together and stop living in vacation land already. No, Sue Ellen, Don Dorkwood is not going to return your calls. He is a control freak who would even go so far as to just settle for having Sue Ellen as his wife in name only with no contact instead of doing the right thing and opting for divorce proceedings. Also, she and JR shouldn't be teaching John Ross how to drive together if they can't stop their arguing and focus on helping him instead. Man, do they ever need to get a clue about their son. He is arranging it so that he can sleep with a twenty-something woman, and that is not good. Seriously, he might just end up grounded until adulthood if this keeps up.

Charlie is such a brat, and I honestly don't know how Randy puts up with her. Oh, so Ray ruined your life just because he tried to be a responsible father figure by laying down some actual rules for you? Cry me a river. Charlie is an adult now, and I don't know what she is whining about now that she has her own life with Randy.
 

Karin

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Okay I'm back! :D
I had the most amazing vacation in California. It was only my second visit in the USA (the first one went to Dallas 9 years ago) but I loved it. :)
Hollywood is something else, definitely the land of make believe and the capital of the world cinema. I've seen so many places with my own eyes now that I had only seen on TV before. It feels sort of surreal seeing something that looks so familiar and yet you've never been there before.

Also had a great time visiting with extended family and a friend. California is such a beautiful state and the people are in generally really nice. Sometimes strangers would compliment me on my clothes and I'd look at them all surprised that they were talking to me!
Definitely not something we would do here in Sweden. But it's nice to hear of course. :)

The weather was fab too. Really warm and sunny like summer weather. Although I hate to think about what's going on in California right now with the wild fires. The fires didn't start until after I had left LA. But it's burning on some of the places I drove by. It makes me really sad. :(
Anyway back to my story. Thank you for the feedback @Ms Southworth , @superman fan , @Pammy P , @Miss Texas 1967 , @Mrs Bobby James Ewing , @Lizzy Ewing and @Presea . I appreciate all of your comments! :bh:

Ms Southworth, it's just my opinion that everyone has the right to have a vacation at least once a year. I mean how much fun would life be if it was just work, work, work 52 weeks of the year?

Well yeah of course Charlie is her mother's daughter. I think in some ways all children are like their parents...

I'm glad you enjoyed Sue Ellen and Miss Ellie's conversation. Agreed about learning to drive a car. Knowing how to drive does offer you such a freedom. I'll never forget the first time I went for a drive all by myself. It was so exciting.

Oh yeah sparks always fly in some way when JR/SE are in a scene together... :)


It’s very promising, because I can’t wait for JR to have “the” talk with his son about safe sex! :lolo: (or when JR finds out that his teenage son is way ahead of him! ;) )

:lolo: somehow you don't have to wait too long for that one!
JR and John Ross will brush this subject soonish...

But no John Ross won't get his driver's license any time soon. I'm not sure if he's aware of it yet. But he still have to take "Driver's Ed" to get it and he can't do that until school starts...

Miss Texas 1967, I agree that Charlie need to let go of her anger from the past. But considering the fact that she and Ray has never worked things out and Ray still doesn't know that Randy is Charlie's boyfriend the past is still a factor here. It's gotten to the point where Charlie wants Ray to know about her and Randy but Jenna and Charlie made a decision many years ago to keep it a secret from Ray and that's somehow wrecked Charlie's relationship with Ray and also caused problems and strain between Jenna and Ray.

Yet I can see where Charlie was coming from and as a teenager I totally sided with her. These days I can see Ray's POV too. But even now as an adult I still think Ray was totally unfair when he shipped Charlie off to that boarding school in Europe. It's one thing if Charlie had wanted to study abroad for a year. It could have been a good experience for her. But to be thrown out made her feel like her mom chose her step-dad over her and caused her a lot of unnecessary pain. So it was not good parenting IMHO. :(

Also no I don't think Jenna and Ray had a good reason to separate Charlie and Randy. Sure she was very young at 15 and surely nobody wants their child to be a teenage parent. But there are 15 year old kids who are having sex and if they want to do it there's nothing their parents can do that will stop them from doing it. If it wasn't Randy it would just have been someone else. If she's ready she's ready and that's her decision. So the responsible parent thing to do IMHO would have been for Jenna to have the safe sex talk with Charlie and show her that she was there if she wanted to talk and confide in her about what she was feeling and going through. Not to try to forbid Charlie from seeing her boyfriend. Also if pushed teenagers tend to do exactly the opposite of what their parents tells them to do just to spite them. So IMHO they handled it all wrong and Ray who had been Charlie's step-dad for less than a year really had no business talking about something so sensitive and embarrassing with Charlie as sex. It really should have been Jenna's job.

I get that Ray wanted to step up and prove himself as a parent. But surely there must have been some other way for him to do that then to butt into her love life.

I agree that Jenna did the best she could raising Charlie when she was a single mom. Yet when she married Ray she did let down her daughter. She should have refused to send her to boarding school against her will. It was not fair.

Sanda, I'm glad you thought the update was cute. :)
I loved all of Sue Ellen and JR's parenting moments on the show. Despite everything I think they were actually good parents to John Ross.

Lizzy Ewing, that's cool. You are definitely not alone in having Sue Ellen as your favorite character on this board. She's loved by many more posters here. Right @Sue Ellen's Nipple Tassles ? ;)

Presea, thanks I'm glad that you like the way Richard reacted to Pam's news. :)
Also maybe Don Dorkwood will surprise you and actually return Sue Ellen's call?
Not that we want them to solve anything as the divorce can't happen fast enough...

Oh yeah we certainly haven't seen the last time John Ross gets grounded in this story! ;)
The kid is a bit of a rebel or as JR would say it "A chip off the old block". Also I agree that John Ross trying to score with a 22 year old is not a good thing!
Yet I'm not sure JR would agree with us if he knew...

Also Charlie may be an adult now, yet she's a young adult straight out of college, so she still has some growing up to do. It will happen soon when she starts working and gets a taste of the real world. She'll learn soon that life after college is not what she thought it would be!


At Disneyland! :rolling:
Yep I had a great time in Sunny California. Vacations when you get to travel are the best. :)

But yeah it's nice to be missed. ;)

She's travelling the world! :spinning:... ... (lucky girl :innocent: )

But I don't think that it'll be too long before we'll have her back where she belongs! :clap:

We miss you, Karin!!! :vote:

Aww that's so sweet. It's nice to know I belong somewhere... :ch:

Anyway enough chit chat, I guess you are all waiting for an update, right? :wink@

Oh and since I've left you hanging for almost a month you'll get a double treat tonight. :)


Tuesday afternoon at Wades’ house, Charlie was sitting in the kitchen, having a cup of tea when Martha came into the room. “Oh hello Charlie.”

Charlie turned around saying, “Oh hi Aunt Martha. Want some tea?”

“Yes please,” Martha said and sat down at the table while Charlie got up to get another cup. Martha looked around before she asked, “Where is your mother?”

“Oh she took Lucas grocery shopping.” Charlie put down the cup in front of Martha and sat back down.

“Really?” Martha was surprised. “I did not think little Lucas liked shopping?”

“Well she bribed him with a toy car. You’ll see he does anything to get those and the grocery store is right next to a Toys R us!”

Martha laughed, “He is a cute boy.”

Charlie smiled too, “Yeah. You never had any kids Aunt Martha?”

Martha looked sad, “No, it never was right. I didn’t get married until recently and well… it didn’t work out so well.”

Martha made a face and Charlie said, “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have asked.”

“No Charlie it is okay. I want us to get to know each other. After all you are all I have left of my brother.”

Charlie bit her lip, “You miss him?”

Martha nodded, “Yes. Despite what happen to him later in life, growing up he was a great big brother. He always looked out for Anna and me.” Martha smiled. “I remember my first visit alone to Roma. He followed me, making sure I was alright!”

“He did?”

Martha nodded, “Yes. You see when I was 14 I convinced my mother that I and a friend would be allowed to go alone to Rome to do some shopping. She was a little hesitant but gave me her blessing. My father said nothing but Renaldo…He was so worried about little old me that he followed us around all day to make sure we didn’t get into trouble.”

Charlie smiled, “When did you find out he’d done that?”

“Not until years later. Your father was good at hiding himself.” Martha got a sad look in her eyes. “If only he could have hidden away that last time.”

“Well I’m glad I got a chance to meet him before…” Charlie looked down and her voice trailed off when she thought about her father's murder. It still hurt to know that because of what had happened she had never truly gotten to know her dad and some days it made her feel like a part of her was missing.

Sensing the younger woman's pain Martha leant over and took Charlie’s hand saying, “I am too! He was so proud of you and he was so sad that he wasted all that time when you were little.”

Charlie looked confused, “But… I didn’t think you had any contact with him…”

“We didn’t for years and years. But before he came back to see you, he and I had made peace and for that I am glad.”

“Was that why you blamed my mom when he died?”

Martha sighed, “Oh Charlie, I was just so upset I could not see straight. You and your mother were never to blame for the actions of my brother. He made bad choices in life, and so do I!” Martha looked pensive before she went on. “I guess we are more alike than I want to admit.”

“Oh come on Aunt Martha. It’s not your fault your husband’s a wife beater. Besides I’m sure he didn’t seem so at first.”

“Oh no, when I met Lorenzo he took me off my feet!” Martha smiled wistfully. “He was rich, good looking and very well mannered. Our first year of marriage was very good. We travel everywhere, go to parties… I guess it really suited a jet set girl like me…but then…” Martha shrugged her shoulders. “He showed his true face!”

“How?” Charlie asked. “I mean what did he do?”

“He got too involved in the family business and things went downhill from there…” Martha explained. “He got abusive too…and things span out of control. After everything he’s done …I can never go back to him now.”

“Well don’t worry Aunt Martha you’re with us now and you’re safe and we’re gonna make sure you don’t have to have anything to do with that creep again!”

“Thanks dear, I really wish it was that easy, ” Martha smiled sadly at Charlie who leant forward and gave her aunt a hug. In doing so she completely missed the troubled expression on her aunt's face.
 
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Karin

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JR was sitting in his office at Ewing Oil reading through the reports he had gotten from Rattigan. He laughed pleased when Sly buzzed him, “Rattigan’s on line one for you.”

“Thanks Sly,” JR replied before picking up the phone. “Hi Rattigan, JR here!”

“Hi JR, I was just calling to say I’ve found something on Pamela Ewing!”

“Oh what’s that?”

“Apparently she’s been living on and off with a man named Richard Brooks for two years!”

“Oh that is interesting,” JR grinned. “I wonder what Bobby will say about that!”

“Do you want me to track him down?” Rattigan asked.

“No but keep looking into Pamela’s life in LA, will you?”

“Sure thing,” Rattigan replied. “So did you get the reports about Nelsons’ and Stones?”

“Yes I was in fact reading them right now,” JR replied. “I must say that you’ve done a terrific job with them.”

“Well thank you JR, I knew some of the information would please you!”

“Yeah who would have guessed that Miss Jessica Nelson ran an escort service during her college years, I’m sure she doesn’t want her parents to know about that!” JR grinned. “And the information about Bruce Stone and his mistresses sure was to my liking. Now if one could just catch the man in the act it would seriously ruin his marriage, which would mean that his company would fall too, considering that he co-owns it with his wife!”

“You really got it in for that kid,” Rattigan commented.

“Yeah well he double crossed me on a deal this spring and just terminated my contract with Cutler’s refinery so I figured it’s about time somebody teach that boy a lesson!”

“Right,” Rattigan grinned.

“You know this combined with the fact that Luke Nelson has done jail time sure gives me enough dirt to get control over the cartel!”

“Happy I could help and I didn’t even have to plant anything,” Rattigan replied. “There are sure some bad seeds in those families!”

“Well considering that Bruce is Marilee’s boy, I’m not surprised he’s looking for excitement outside of his marriage,” JR laughed. “Thanks for this Rattigan.”

“No problem JR, I’ll finish up the report on Pamela and then I’ll get my promised vacation.”

“You can count on it,” JR grinned. “Bye Rattigan.” They hung up and JR added mentally, Poor Cliff Barnes will never understand why the cartel is messing up his affairs! JR smiled his shit eating grin, as a plan was forming in his head since this information was all he needed to kill two birds with one stone.
 
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Ray&Donna

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Glad you have arrived back in SoapChat safely :) :mall:
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Great dialogue between Charlie and her aunt ... well written and all! :)
Sorry to repeat myself, but I'm still indifferent in terms of their "involvement" in "Dallas" as I knew and remember it! :hiding:

Hope that the next update will revolve around some of my favorite characters! :jump2:

Please update soon! :best:
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
I really liked the update from JR's office! :spinning:

So now JR knows about Richard too! :cool1 Let's just hope that he shares this news with his brother before Romeo and Juliet walk down the aisle! ;)

LOL ... :giggle: ... "Miss Jessica Nelson ran an escort service during her college years ... ..." :lolo:

Supposedly, Bruce Stone is an adulterer (unless, of course, he and his wife are in agreement about having an open marriage)! ;) Interesting news! :oops: And I guess that JR does have a point in not being all that surprised, since Bruce did grow up at Marilee's house! :innocent:

Luke Nelson has done jail time! :box: Even more interesting! :hat:

I can't wait to learn more about all of this! :clap:

Please update soon! :best:
 

Karin

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Thank you for the comments everyone. :)

Tommie, I'm glad to be back too. :hb:
Even though the weather in Sweden leaves something to be desired, a bit of snow that is melting and getting all dark with road salt and then freezing to ice in the evening. Bleh. I'd rather have a proper winter with lots of snow than this!

Anyway I will catch up on your stories as soon as I've caught up on work! *sigh*

Ms Southworth, thanks I will tell you more about my vacation at a later occasion I'm sure! ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed the update from JR's office. You will find out later on how JR will use the new information he's just found out...

Okay so here's another update:

Lucy, Mitch, Afton, Becky and Mario were at a restaurant eating dinner. The tension around the table was so thick that you could cut it with a knife. Afton sighed before she put on a forced smile and said, “So Mitch you must be so happy about getting the job.”

“Yes I am. As soon as this arm’s healed I can start working,” Mitch said.

“How nice,” Mario said in a patronizing tone of voice. He then turned to Afton. “By the way sweetheart, shouldn’t you ask your brother if he could take care of your daughter while we’re going home?”

Lucy and Mitch exchanged a look and Mitch said, “Excuse me?”

“Mario wants me to meet his parents,” Afton said.

“Aha,” Mitch sighed.

“And Becky’s not welcome to meet them?” Lucy asked.

“I don’t want to meet them,” Becky insisted.

“Why not sweetie?” Afton asked. “They are going to be your new grandparents.”

“No they’re not,” Becky said in an angry voice crossing her arms.

“Sweetheart, there’s no need to exaggerate,” Mario said. “It’s not like the child needs to call me father.”

“Good because I already have a daddy and he’s much nicer than you are!” Becky said and Mitch and Lucy tried to hide their smiles.

“Pamela Rebecca, you apologize right now!” Afton demanded.

“Oh don’t bother, it’s not like I want to take her dad’s place,” Mario said.

“I’m glad we agree about something,” Becky said. “So uncle Mitch can I stay with you and Aunt Lucy please?”

“Of course you can,” Mitch said. “So when is this visit anyhow?”

“Week 33,” Mario replied.

“Huh?” Lucy didn’t follow him.

“We’ll leave on the 16th of August and will be back on the 20th of August,” Afton clarified.

“Oh you’re in luck then Becky, Christopher’s gonna have his birthday party while you’re staying with us!” Lucy smiled.

“Alright, cool!” Becky smiled.
 

Karin

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Later that evening at Wade’s house, Charlie knocked on Jenna’s bedroom door. “Come in.”

Charlie went in and said, “Hi mom, got a minute?”

“Sure,” Jenna replied. “What’s on your mind?”

Charlie walked into the room closing the door behind her and said, “I had a talk with Aunt Martha earlier today.”

“Oh really?”

“Yeah, Mom we got to do something to help her. She can’t go back to this Lorenzo dude!”

Jenna sighed, “No she can’t but Charlie we are helping her.”

Charlie pulled her hand though her hair, “How, by letting her stay here?” Charlie asked in a no nonsense tone of voice that indicated that she didn’t think that was enough. “Mom you know as well as I do that’s not gonna fix the problem. She needs to divorce this guy!”

“Yes she does, but I’m afraid it’s not that simple.” Jenna motioned for Charlie to sit down next to her on the bed. “Charlie, Martha is afraid of Lorenzo, she doesn’t want to meet him again.”

“Well I understand that but…”

“No!” Jenna interrupted Charlie who looked questioning at her. “Look darling, Martha and I are handling this situation. We’ll go to see a lawyer soon I promise, but right now just give your Aunt some breathing space. She’s been though hell with this guy. She needs a little time to gather her thoughts ok?”

“Okay, but…”

“No buts. Charlie it’s gonna be fine. Don’t worry,” Jenna said and Charlie nodded her head in agreement, however feeling a bit puzzled at the strangeness of the situation. But then she shrugged her shoulders and shook it off, surely mom will fix everything. Charlie felt confident of that. Jenna on the other hand couldn’t help but wonder what she’d gotten her family into and how the hell she was gonna solve it!
 
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Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Great update from the restaurant! :up: Really thick level of tension ... that’s for sure! ;)

Uhh, Mario really drives me up the walls the very second he opens his mouth! :hair: (BTW, great writing in that regard, Karin! :)).

Gotta love Lucy for speaking straight from the heart: “And Becky’s not welcome to meet them?” :gotcha:

Afton is (again) getting on my nerves: “Why not sweetie? They are going to be your new grandparents.” :rolleyes: Why don’t you (Afton) give your daughter a break and stop pushing her into liking/loving someone? :mo: Mario and his parents will only be family to Becky, if she chooses for them to be! :frustration:

Go Becky ... go Becky!!! :girl: “Good because I already have a daddy and he’s much nicer than you [Mario] are!” :lolo:

I can’t wait for Christopher’s birthday party to take place! :cb: And you will invite us, right Karin? ;)

Please update soon! :bowing :best:
 

Karin

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Staff Member
Thank you everyone for the feedback on my story. :)

Shan, I'm glad you still think this story is fantastic. :)

Ms Southworth, of course you are all invited to Christopher's birthday party. It will happen in the next episode. ;)

Glad you enjoyed the restaurant scene. Yeah I think it's pretty obvious that Becky doesn't want Mario and his family to become her family. Only Afton is too blind to see it right now... :(

Okay so here's tonight's update:

The next day at the Dallas memorial hospital, Miss Ellie walked into Doctor Haynes office. “Excuse me Doctor Haynes, have you got a minute?”

“Sure, ma’am,” Doctor Haynes smiled at the sweet little lady in front of him. “Sit down please,” he motioned towards one of the chairs on the other side of the desk. Miss Ellie sat down and the doctor said, “So what can I do for you Mrs…?”

“Ellie Ewing Farlow,” Miss Ellie replied. Crap, Doctor Haynes shifted uncomfortably, as he was not too happy to be talking to JR Ewing’s mother.

“I’m gonna get straight to the point. Why have you told my husband Clayton to work out?”

“Um…that’s really between me and my patient.”

Miss Ellie looked sternly at Doctor Haynes, “Don’t you know that he has had two heart attacks and his cardiologist has told him not to work out?”

Doctor Haynes avoided meeting her gaze, “I’m sorry Mrs. Farlow but I’m quite busy today. Would you mind coming back another day?”

“Yes I would. I’m worried about my husband. I love Clayton very much and I’m not gonna stand by while he drives himself to another heart-attack,” Miss Ellie said in one of her firmest voices. “If you won’t answer my questions I will simply have to disturb Doctor LeClaire on his vacation…”

“Um…that’s not necessary,” Haynes said in a strained tone of voice.

“So?” Miss Ellie demanded.

“Let me check his journal…” Doctor Haynes turned to his computer and did a quick search. Then he started reading through Clayton’s medical records, “Oh…that is not good.”

“What?” Miss Ellie demanded to know.

The doctor scratched his head saying, “I’m terribly sorry to say there’s been a mix up in our files…”

“What do you mean?”

“The computer has mixed your husband’s file with another patient’s…”

“You’ve mixed up the files?” Miss Ellie exclaimed. “Don’t you know what dreadful consequences that could get?” Miss Ellie lectured the doctor. “You could have killed someone!”

“Yes,” Doctor Haynes harked. “It’s very serious. We’ll have to report this to technical department immediately. This is so what happens when you computerize everything!”

“Well you’d better keep better track of the files, or I’ll sue this hospital!”

“Calm down ma’am. We’ll fix this immediately. You are completely right. Your husband shouldn’t be working out!”

“Yes I know that and you know that. But Clayton doesn’t know that so now you get on that phone and tell him to stop working out immediately!”

“Of course I will,” Doctor Haynes said sheepishly. “I’m really sorry about this ma’am.”

“I surely hope so and I’ll let this slip this time. But I warn you, if you ever mistreat anyone in my family again, I will report you to the medical professions office for breach of duty,” Miss Ellie threatened. “Good day,” with that Miss Ellie walked out of the office leaving a very nervous Doctor Haynes behind.
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

Telly Talk Well-Known Member
Welcome back Karin.:) Great updates!:) I am glad you had a great time on your vacation.:) I have enjoyed all of your updates you have posted to your story since you have returned home from your holiday.:) I am not a fan of Afton's boyfriend Mario.:( I hope Afton dumps him soon, :)I love Miss Ellie in your story. :)She rocks putting Clayton's doctor in his place. :)I am glad Clayton's doctor told her the truth about his health even though the doctor broke doctor patient confidentiality speaking to Miss Ellie about her husband's health behind Clayton's back. :):(
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Thank you everyone for the feedback on my story. :)
:yw:

Ms Southworth, of course you are all invited to Christopher's birthday party. It will happen in the next episode. ;)
Yeah! :cb: :party::cb:

Glad you enjoyed the restaurant scene. Yeah I think it's pretty obvious that Becky doesn't want Mario and his family to become her family.
Even if Mario had been a nice guy, Afton should never just expect Becky to consider him or his family her family too! It should be completely up to Becky, when (and if) she will ever come to love any beau of her mother's. It's important that she accepts and respects him, but love is not something that you can force on anyone!
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Great update from Dallas Memorial Hospital! :jolly:

You did an excellent job on the dialogue and the description of their thoughts and emotions. :loveit: It was easy to picture the whole scene played out for real! :jump2:

I love it when Miss Ellie is tough! :box: And I love her sincere love and concern for Clayton! :kiss:

It's no wonder Dr. Haynes refused to look Miss Ellie in the eye and tried to get rid of her: “I’m sorry Mrs. Farlow but I’m quite busy today. Would you mind coming back another day?” ;)

A mix up in the doctor's files? :eek: Yeah, right! :rolleyes:

It serves Dr. Haynes right when Miss Ellie threatened to sue the hospital! :gotcha:

My favorite Miss Ellie line of today: “I surely hope so and I’ll let this slip this time. But I warn you, if you ever mistreat anyone in my family again, I will report you to the medical professions office for breach of duty! Good day!” :bang::hat:

And a close runner up is this: “Yes I know that and you know that. But Clayton doesn’t know that so now you get on that phone and tell him to stop working out immediately! ” :jolly:

I can feel Dr. Haynes's job hanging in a thin thread, because who knows if Miss Ellie will talk to others about her experiences? :think: And when all the stuff about the DNA tests slip out too, someone will be going to H***! :mad:

Please update soon! :best:
 

Karin

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Staff Member
Thank you for the feedback everyone. :)

Sanda, thank you for welcoming me back. :)
Well you know I love Miss Ellie on the show and since we're trying to write her as close to the character we saw on the screen as possible I guess it's not hard to love her in this story! ;)
But yeah to hear you say that is in a way a compliment that we've managed to write her in a way that stays true to the character. So thanks.

Well I'm not surprised the doctor broke the patient-doctor confidentiality considering the fact that Doctor Haynes is on JR's payroll!
I mean if that doesn't say that he's a crooket doctor I don't know what does? ;)

Ms Southworth, I agree with you about Becky and Mario. Nobody can force her to love her mother's fiance. He has to earn her love and so far he's done nothing to do that. In fact I'd say he and Becky both dislike each other.

I'm glad you enjoyed the Miss Ellie scene. I love it when she's tough too!
A mix up in the doctor's files? :eek: Yeah, right! :rolleyes:

Actually he blamed it on the computer. But still! :rolleyes:

Okay so here's tonight's update:


Out in the hallway Miss Ellie met up with Bobby and Pam who were done with Bobby’s doctor’s visit. “Bobby, how did the check up go?”

“Fine,” Bobby replied. “I’m glad to have this over with…”

“Me too, so how about doing some shopping before we go home?” Pam smiled teasingly at Bobby.

“Shopping?” Bobby exclaimed. “I’ve had enough of bad experiences for today.”

“I think shopping sounds good,” Miss Ellie said.

Bobby grimaced, “Mama!”

“Some other day, I need to go home and check on Clayton!” Miss Ellie reassured Bobby.

“Good,” Bobby said before turning to Pam. “I’m looking forward to go to the disco on Friday.”

“I bet you are,” Pam said.

“Yeah it’ll be just like in the good old days,” Bobby smiled.

“Except that we’re more mature now,” Pam said. “I’m not sure I can take a whole night at the discos. The idea is exhausting!”

“Well if that’s so how about that the old lady takes a nap,” Bobby teased her.

“Oh you, I’m not that old,” Pam said. “But maybe if you’ll join me...”

Bobby and Pam kissed each other and Miss Ellie said, “Come on you two it’s time to go home.”
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Amazing update :spinning::clap::up: However, it was too short, IMHO! :embarrassed:

I laughed when Pam suggested that they go shopping after Bobby’s doctor’s appointment! :lolo: Bobby’s reply wasn’t unexpected: “Shopping? I’ve had enough of bad experiences for today.” :giggle:

Miss Ellie’s comment caught me off guard, but in a pleasant way: “I think shopping sounds good!” :rlol:

I bet that Bobby is counting the hours until he can hit the dance floor at the disco! I wonder if he will end up with a strained muscle or two on Friday night? :lolo: Maybe he should secretly reconsider and instead take Pam to an “adult”, fancy restaurant with a dance floor next to the dining tables? :think: :)

Cute dialogue about taking an afternoon “nap”! :kiss::kiss::kiss: Let’s hope that Bobby takes Pam up on her offer (and that we get to join in by being a “fly on the wall”)! :wink@ Personally, I like taking naps and also having “personal” time in bed with my better half (no matter what hour of the day! :yep: :giggle: )

Please update soon! :best:
 

Karin

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Staff Member
Thank you for the feedback Ms Southworth, I do appreciate it! :)

I bet that Bobby is counting the hours until he can hit the dance floor at the disco! I wonder if he will end up with a strained muscle or two on Friday night? :lolo: Maybe he should secretly reconsider and instead take Pam to an “adult”, fancy restaurant with a dance floor next to the dining tables? :think: :)

:lolo:I know what you mean and you are right that going out to a nightclub or "disco" is not the same when you grow older...
So yeah I see the point you are trying to make. It's pretty obvious that Bobby and Pam are trying to recapture their youth by going out to a place they enjoyed when they were younger (before they had kids) and well you will find out later in this episode if there will be any strained muscles or what will happen... :Clol:

Also since the last update was so short I'll give you a tripple treat tonight:

At Wade’s house, Jenna knocked on Martha’s bedroom door. “Martha?”

Martha opened the door saying, “Jenna. Come on in.”

“Thanks,” Jenna said as she walked into the room and closed the door behind her. “Look we need to talk. You had a talk with Charlie yesterday.”

Martha looked concerned. “Oh Jenna I am so sorry, if you don’t want me to talk about my brother…”

“No Martha! I don’t mind that. I do want you and Charlie to get to know each other better. Family is important and your side is all she’s got.”

“Good,” Martha smiled relived.

“Yeah well I don’t mind you talking about Naldo but don’t discuss Lorenzo with her.”

“Oh I am so sorry but Jenna I haven’t told her about…”

“I know and we won’t.”

Martha looked confused at Jenna, “So what is the problem?”

“Charlie feels sorry for you and wants us to help you get a divorce from him.”

“Oh I couldn’t…not now,” Martha looked terrified. “If I contact him, if he knew I was here he’ll...he’ll kill me!”

Jenna put her hands on Martha shoulders and said, “Martha look we’re not gonna do anything to jeopardize yours or our safety. But if Charlie should ask just tell her we’ve contacted a lawyer and…”

“But I can’t.”

“No you can’t but she doesn’t know that. So as far as she’s concerned you and I are handling this. Ok?”

“Ok, thank you Jenna,” Martha said.

“You’re welcome,” Jenna smiled before she gave Martha a hug.
 
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