Dallas in the 90's

Honkytonkangel

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Arrghh. Why is JR STILL blaming Sue Ellen for everything?
I'm sure he wasn't an angel at that age given how he is now, despite being raised mainly by a controlling bully (John Ross' whole attitude might just be DNA from daddy).
I can't decide if I wanna roll my eyes or smack him upside the head. Seriously how many times does she have to apologise?.
I can understand why Sue Ellen isn't thrilled about talking to Don again too and I don't think anything she says is gonna make much difference now.
He and JR could make their own movie together with their attitude 'How Sue Ellen tried to ruin my career and reputation, While I did NOTHING wrong' LOL.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
 

Ms Southworth

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The fact that I try to avoid kids does play a big part in how I viewed John Ross, Christopher, and Rebecca. This is like the TV show when it comes to how the Ewing parents usually seemed way too absorbed in their own little dramas to spend more time with their kids! lol! Although I think that is changing in this story. Rebecca's accident gave them the wake-up call they needed. Especially Pam, who will hopefully really talk to Christoper now. I hope that this will also make JR warm up to Rebecca a bit more now. I just can't see him completely ignoring any kid at Southfork. I couldn't help laughing when the kids said they thought being in the pool was completely normal because of Bobby and JR's fights! The pool is a very important part of life at Southfork!

I agree that it seemed like the children of Southfork (when they were really young) were raised by "nannies". However, I'd like to think that the children spent more time with their parents than we actually saw. ;)

I really like how Bobby has been taking time off from work to spend with Pam and Rebecca (and sometimes Christopher when he wants to join in). :)

Yeah ... let's hope that the family dynamics will change for the better after the pool incident with Rebecca. :dance: But somehow I doubt that it will be smooth sailing for everyone from now on! ;)
 

Karin

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:thank: everyone for your feedback and comments. It's much appreciated. :)

Ms Southworth, I'm glad that you found JR/SE's conversation about John Ross funny. :)
Then as for your guess, I won't tell you if it's right or wrong. But I will say this, considering the episode title and graphics it's pretty obvious what's gonna happen this episode...
"Smooth Sailing"...haha, there's actually an episode a lot further ahead that is called that!

Presea, I see where you are coming from. I guess the fact that you don't want kids explains a lot while you think the kids in this story are annoying.
You are right that the kids are little brats though. I mean Rebecca expects Christopher and John Ross to do as she says since she is spoiled rotten and used to getting her way. She can wrap Pam around her little finger. I think why they threw her into the pool though is because they have seen their fathers fight in the pool and they laughed when James threw in Michelle into the pool. That's just the way they are raised. They haven't been told it's wrong to throw someone into the pool and they didn't know she couldn't swim. Naturally they wouldn't have thrown her in if they had known that!
You are right that Christopher is jealous of Rebecca though for all the time she spent with Pam after he left her. Then as for the adults, you are spot on when you say that the kids have partly been neglected and well as for JR you do have a point that he loves kids.

Honkytonkangel, I'm sure that you are right when you say that JR was no better than John Ross at that age. Also you are right that JR doesn't score any points with Sue Ellen when he criticizes her parenting skills. But she does need to talk to Don...

Anyway our next update takes us away from the drama at Southfork for a little while:


Over at Dallas Fort-Worth Airport had the flight from Washington DC just landed and the passengers were now approaching the baggage claim area. A woman with red blond straight hair dressed in a blue green suit jacket with matching long skirt and a white blouse underneath it was walking confidently in high heels, as she held the hand of an eight year old girl with red brown curly hair cut in a page hair do. The little girl was dressed in a black skirt and a white short sleeved blouse with red straps and was walking gracefully in her black sandal shoes. The woman was Donna Culver Krebbs Dowling and the little girl was her daughter Margaret Krebbs Dowling. “Mom have you seen dad yet?” Margaret asked. “I can’t recognize him…”

Donna looked for Ray in the crowd of people standing waiting over by the baggage claim area. Suddenly she spotted him. He was wearing his signature white cowboy hat, black cowboy boots and was dressed in jeans with a belt buckle and a red and blue stripped shirt. Finally there he is! Donna could feel her heart skip a beat at the familiar sight of him. It had been so long since she’d last seen him and yet he was looking almost exactly the same. He has a few more grey hairs than I can remember but he’s still looking good, Donna smiled, as she took in the sight of her ex-husband. He was a few years older than she remembered but he was still very handsome in that kind of rough cowboy way that she had found so attractive about him when they’d first met. “Yes there he is,” Donna smiled, before she started to wave at him, “Ray we’re over here!”

Ray’s face lit up in a smile when he spotted his ex-wife and daughter. Wow! Donna is still looking like such an elegant lady and Margaret…she’s like a little miniature Donna…Ray reflected as he hurried to walk towards them. Margaret smiled when her dad finally stopped in front of them and greeted them, “Hi Donna!” he gave Donna a kiss on the cheek before he looked straight into her blue eyes. “It’s good to see you. You’re looking as lovely as ever.”

“Hi Ray, It’s good to see you too,” Donna looked into his blue eyes a little longer than necessary before she gestured towards the child. “This is Margaret.”

“Hi Margaret,” Ray smiled before he gave his daughter a big hug. “I’m your daddy do you remember me?” Ray asked. “I visited you and Do…your Mama in Washington.”

“Honey it is okay if you don’t remember Ra…your dad hasn’t visited us in years,” Donna said.

“I know mom but of course I remember daddy,” Margaret beamed towards her father and Ray could feel himself getting all emotional when he looked into her innocent blue eyes.

“I’m glad you remember. But your mama’s right it has been too long since I’ve visited you. I mean look at you, you’ve grown so much.”

“Well that’s what normally happens when a child grows from four to eight years old,” Donna stated as a matter of fact and Ray felt embarrassed.

“Four years?” Ray asked. “Has it really been that long since I last visited you?”

“Yes we last saw you in 1991,” Donna informed him with a certain chill in her voice.

“You’re right,” Ray realized. “Look I’m sorry I meant to visit you more often. It’s just that I’ve been living in Europe for a few years so…”

“In Europe!” Margaret eyes lit up. “How exciting daddy, in which country did you live?” Margaret asked. “Was it Germany, Austria, Poland, Sweden, Spain, Greece, Denmark, Great Britain, Finland, Hungary, Italy…”

“Yes Italy it is,” Ray smiled. “Jenna and I’ve got a house in La Spezia.”

“Who’s Jenna?” Margaret asked.

“Your father’s wife,” Donna replied.

Margaret frowned and was just about to ask something when Ray, who didn’t want to talk about Jenna, hurried to switch the subject, “So do you like Geography Margaret?”

“Yes sir. It’s one of my favorite subjects at school.”

“And which are the others?”

“Oh social science, history and English,” Margaret replied. “But I like the other subjects too. I love to learn new things so school is great.”

“Well that’s great,” Ray said before turning to Donna, “Donna why have you never told me that our daughter loves school so much?”

“Oh Ray there’s a lot of things about Margaret that you don’t know,” Donna said.

“Well seems like it. But I can already tell that she’s smart like her mama,” Ray complimented them.

Donna smiled, “Thank you Ray.”

“Dad you can never guess what I like to do in my spare time?”

“Oh I don’t know…but I hope you like to ride horses because that’s what we’re going to do at the ranch,” Ray said.

“I know mommy told me. I think it’s so exciting I have never ridden a horse in my life,” Margaret replied to Ray’s disappointment.

He however tried not to show it as he said, “Well before this summer is out you’re going to ride like you’ve been born in the saddle…”

“I doubt it,” Margaret giggled. “Besides we can’t go riding all the time. I need some time for myself so I can read books.”

“Read books?” Ray echoed.

“Yes dad, I love reading a book that’s my favorite hobby,” Margaret replied before she turned to Donna and asked, “Mom did you remember to bring my reading glasses?”

“Yes sweetheart you don’t have to worry,” Donna tousled Margaret’s hair. “Do you want to show them to your dad?”

“Sure,” Margaret said. “Where are they?”

“In your back pack along with the book you read on the flight,” Donna replied.

“Oh silly me,” Margaret hit herself on the forehead. “You are right. I had my glasses on the flight so of course they are packed!” Margaret then started to look around in her back pack until she found her glasses. She took them out and put them on her nose. The glasses were big and glaring red. “This is my glasses dad, what do you think?”

Ray sighed when he saw them. This is just great, my daughter looks like a bookworm in those, he reflected as he started to realize that he had more in common with his step-son Lucas, than with his biological child. However he didn’t want to hurt his daughter’s feelings so he just said, “Oh I think you look very intelligent in those,” Ray smiled strained before he turned to Donna. “Are you two all ready to go to Southfork?”

“Almost we’re still waiting for our luggage,” Donna said.

“Oh that’s right, we need to get your bags,” Ray said, as they turned their attention to the transportation band.

Immediately Margaret exclaimed, “Oh look mom there’s my book bag, can you go and get it for me. I can’t wait to show dad my books!”

“I have a better idea, why don’t we go and get your bag together so I can help you carry it,” Ray suggested.

“Thanks dad,” Margaret smiled, as they walked up towards the transportation band and Margaret pointed out a big red suitcase. “That’s the one dad.”

“Okay,” Ray said and picked up the bag, thinking it was a light bag. But it was not as the bag was a lot heavier than he had anticipated and because of the extra weight Ray accidentally dropped the bag on the side of the transportation belt when he tried to lift it.

“Uh-oh,” Margaret said, as the bag hit the belt hard.

“Damn!” Ray cursed as the bag opened and 50 Nancy Drew books fell out on the floor, right in front of his feet. Shame on dad, he used a bad word Margaret reflected when she heard her father’s foul language, as she had been taught not to curse. However she didn’t say anything out loud about the cursing as she was too upset about her books.

“Oh no all my books!” Margaret exclaimed when she saw the mess her dad had made. She then got down on the floor and frenetically started to collect her books with the help of her mother, while her father just stared at her, unable to even help her, as he was so dumbstruck that he didn’t know what to say or do. He sighed as he realized that his daughter had planned to spend all summer reading instead of spending time with him. At that moment he knew that he had to work harder than he’d thought if he was going to succeed with turning Margaret into a little cowgirl before the summer was over. Yet he promised himself to try, since even if the child in front of him came from another world where politics, dinner parties and cultural activities like reading, going to museums and ballet was the norm. She was still his own flesh and blood and he had missed too much of her upbringing already. In a few years her habits and personality would be fixed and it would be too late to change anything. So he knew that this summer was really his last chance to influence his daughter’s lifestyle…
 

Ms Southworth

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Loved today's update :spinning::danc::spinning:

Nice to have Donna and Margaret in Dallas ... finally :)

Even though it was hysterically funny to read about Ray accidently dropping Margaret's heavy suitcase, I do feel sorry for him. He must not only be embarrassed, but at the same time also somewhat sad that the daughter whom he hadn't seen in four years supposedly has planned to spend the summer reading a ton of books! :( I hope that Ray will manage to turn his daughter into a real Texan cowgirl before long. And that Margaret and Rebecca will hit it off! ;)

Let's have another update real soon, okay? :best:
 
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Honkytonkangel

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Damn 4 years. Ray HAS got some making up to do (though I'm convinced it's almost ALL the Wade Witch' fault).
I hope that they can find some way to bond during this visit, but saying that Ray has got NO business trying to change ANYTHING about Margaret (shame one of her books didn't land on his head). She's probably the only kid in that family that has their head screwed on right.
I hope mama's horsewhip is in good condition cos she's gonna need it with that brood under her roof LOL.
 

Ms Southworth

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You're right! Four years is a long time! Just imagine all the changes that I child goes through from age 4 through 8? I really hope that Ray has a "valid" reason for not visiting his daughter for such a long time! After all, Italy is not that far away! ;)
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great updates Karin!:) I love your story so much.:) Please update it again soon.:) I am so happy that Donna and Margaret are finally in Dallas. :) I can't wait to find out why Ray hasn't seen his daughter in 4 years. :(His explanation better be good. ;)
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. I love reading all your detailed comments. :)

Ms. Southworth, I'm glad you thought Ray dropping that book bag was funny. It was supposed to be. Margaret and Rebecca will meet later this episode. You will see how it goes. Also 4 years might seem like an eternity for a child, whereas for an adult four years can fly by really fast. I am sure Ray hadn't planned to stay away that long.

Honkytonkangel, you are right that Margaret has her head screwed on right. She's very bright and probably the least trouble out of the Ewing grandkids. :lmao:
Also you might have a point that Jenna could have kept Ray otherwise occupied whenever he brought up visiting Donna and Margaret.

Sanda, I'm glad that you're happy that Donna & Margaret has finally arrived. I don't think Ray has a good excuse for not seeing his daughter, hence the certain chill on Donna's part. But I do know that Ray will do his best to make up for lost time this summer.

Okay so here's another update:


At Braddock hospital were Bobby and Pam waiting nervously, as a middle aged female doctor was examining Rebecca. The pediatrician listened to her lungs and heart in a stethoscope and asked the little girl to take deep breaths. Eventually she put her stethoscope down and turned towards the little girl’s parents and said, “Okay I’ve done a through-out check up on your daughter and given the circumstances she seems to be fine.”

“Oh thank you Doctor Allen, I’m so relieved to hear that,” Pam let out a breath she’d been holding in.

“Yes thank you,” Bobby said.

“However I would like to keep her overnight for observation just to make sure,” Dr. Allen threw a glance at Rebecca who pulled the sweater over her head.

“Observation?” Pam echoed. “But I thought you said Rebecca was fine!”

“She is but sometimes there are complications,” Dr. Allen stopped, as she noticed that the child was listening to everything she said. “I really think it’s best if Rebecca would spend the night at the hospital.”

“No, I don’t want to sleep at the hospital,” Rebecca objected before she started crying. “I wanna go home!”

“I know sweetie,” Pam said, as she sat down next to Rebecca and pulled her into a hug, as she tried to comfort the upset child.

As she did Bobby turned to the doctor and asked, “Are you sure we can’t take her home?”

“Well it’s your choice of course,” Dr. Allen replied, as she lowered her voice so only Bobby could hear her. “But I wouldn’t recommend it. I mean sometimes there can be neurological damage which causes swelling of the head or there are chemicals or fluids left in the lungs that can cause secondary drowning.”

Bobby looked questioningly at her, “Secondary drowning?”

“Yes after a near drowning incident there are sometimes damages to the lungs that can in the worst case scenario lead to respiratory failure.”

“But you just said that Rebecca’s breathing was normal!”

“Yes, I couldn’t hear anything when I listened to her lungs. But we need to wait for the Chest X-rays and blood works to come back before we could say for certain that everything’s normal.”

“Okay,” Bobby nodded, “and if those comes out fine?”

“Well then you could think about bringing your daughter home. But if you do you need to keep her under observation for 8 hours. If she runs a fever and starts coughing in a way that makes it hard for her to breathe, you need to bring her back here immediately.”

“I see,” Bobby said with a grim look on his face. “And what are the risks of neurological damage?”

“Well usually only 6 out of 100 children get permanent neurological damage and there’s nothing that indicates that your daughter has suffered any neurological damage, since you were able to bring her back to consciousness,” Dr. Allen said, “So most likely your daughter will be just fine. Still as a doctor I feel like it’s my duty to inform you of all the risks before you bring your daughter home.”

“Okay, thank you Dr. Allen, you have been most helpful,” Bobby said, before he looked over at Pam and Rebecca. Their little girl had calmed down significantly and was now sitting comfortably in her mother’s lap. Looking at them Bobby could feel himself on the verge of tears as he was just so emotional. He just loved that little girl so much and he was so grateful that they hadn’t lost their daughter. Despite all the dangers the doctor had just told him about he knew in his heart that their daughter would be just fine and he vowed to himself to be a good father to her.
 

Ms Southworth

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:bravo: Fantastic update :bravo:

Loved how detailed all the medical concerns were ... I'm definitely all for spending the night at the hospital! No need to take any chances ... Rebecca has got to be 100% healthy! I'm sure that the Ewings can get a private room, where her parents can stay too! It's not like it's been that long since they all slept within the same four walls, right? And Rebecca deserves to have both her parents there! ;)

Just sad if they miss Donna and Margaret's homecoming :(

The weekend is just around the corner, so let's give it up for yet another chapter of this incredible fan fic :yep: Don't leave us hanging, please! :wave:
 
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Karin

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Thank you so much for the feedback. :)

Ms. Southworth, the scene at the doctor is a new one that was added on later. So I checked up a lot of facts for it online to get it as realistic as possible. Yeah Rebecca does deserves to have both her parents with her but at the same time they do need to talk to Christopher too...

Here's another update:




In Southfork’s living room had the family started to gather for drinks before dinner. Mitch was busy typing on his laptop with the one hand that wasn’t in a cast, as Lucy was sitting bored by his side. Meanwhile JR and Sue Ellen were engaged in a conversation of their own about John Ross’ grounding.

“I still think one week is too little, I mean Rebecca could have died,” Sue Ellen said.

“But she didn’t…”

“No thank God she’s alright but then there’s the question about the R-rated movie…”

“Oh come on Sue Ellen boys will be boys…”

“I still don’t think we should encourage him to…”

“Well it’s just a movie and John Ross is almost old enough to watch it…”

“I know, but Christopher isn’t,” Sue Ellen sighed.

“But that’s Bobby’s problem.”

Sue Ellen sighed before she said, “So how about one and a half week?”

“I think that sounds reasonable…” JR agreed.

“Good, I am glad we got that settled. Now we just need to go and tell John Ross that…”

“Tell me what?” John Ross suddenly interrupted his parents.

“John Ross! Why aren’t you on your room?” Sue Ellen asked.

“Because I’m hungry and you never said I had to eat on my room tonight,” John Ross explained. “You don’t mind me coming down for dinner do you?”

“No it’s fine. In fact your dad and I were just about to go up and see you anyway.”

“Yes your Mama and I have talked it over and we have decided that your punishment should be…” JR was suddenly interrupted by the voice of a little girl, who said,

“Death penalty.”

“What?” John Ross exclaimed. “What does death penalty has to do with my punishment?”

“Nothing silly, your dad and I love you enough to die for you," Sue Ellen said, "you know that don't you?”

“Yeah I remember dad even took a bullet for me once,” John Ross nodded.

“I did,” JR said, as he remembered the time he went up against BD Calhoun too well. But not wishing to discuss it further he then informed John Ross, “Anyway we have decided that you will be grounded for one and half week.”

“Yeah one week for throwing Rebecca into the pool and a half week for sneaking into that R-rated movie,” Sue Ellen explained when Donna, Margaret and Ray entered the living room, still involved in their own lively discussion.

“But daddy listen, I still thinks it is wrong that certain states have death penalty. I mean no one should have the right to take another human beings life.”

“I don’t agree, at certain occasions it’s necessary to end a life,” Ray said, as he remembered how he had pulled the plug on his paralyzed cousin Mickey Trotter. Even if you hate every moment of it, he then added mentally. Looking over to where Lucy was sitting with Mitch he couldn’t help but wonder if it could have been Lucy and Mickey if Mickey hadn’t died.

“But dad, I still think that death penalty should be abolished I mean…”

“Margaret please be quiet,” Donna said uncomfortably since she also remembered Mickey's death and what it had done to Ray all too well.

"Yeah I want to introduce you to your family,” Ray said and Margaret went quiet enough for him to carry on, “Everyone this is my daughter Margaret and Margaret this is your cousins John Ross and Lucy and this is Lucy’s husband Mitch and this is your uncle JR and his ex-wife Sue Ellen.”

Margaret smiled at the people her dad introduced her to and shook their hands, before she said, “Hi, nice to meet you all.”

“Nice to meet you too Margaret,” Lucy replied.

Ray smiled, “Then of course you all remember Donna, right?”

“Of course, hi Donna,” Lucy smiled, as she got up and gave Donna a hug.

“Lucy, Mitch,” Donna smiled, before turning to the rest of the people in the room, “JR, Sue Ellen, it’s so nice to see you all again,” Donna said politely.

“Nice to see you too Donna,” Sue Ellen smiled, as she walked over and gave Donna a hug as well.

“And is this young man really John Ross?” Donna asked.

“Sure is,” John Ross replied.

“You really have grown up fast!” Donna said.

“So has little Margaret,” Sue Ellen said.

“Of course I am eight years old now and you do grow up fast from living in Washington D.C,” Margaret replied. “Speaking of which, did you know that the President lives in Washington and that I have met him?”

“You’ve met Bill Clinton?” John Ross asked.

“Yes,” Margaret beamed.

“Well that’s cool,” John Ross said.

“I disagree son. Bill Clinton is a fool for trying to implement those health care reforms by taking out more taxes from us,” JR insisted.

Margaret looked insulted before she said, “No he is not, the President happens to be a very intelligent man.”

“Well if you say so, but I still don’t like his politics,” JR said.

“Sorry about that Margaret but this is the old south and therefore almost everyone in this family supports the republicans,” Ray explained.

“So where are Miss Ellie and Clayton?” Donna asked. “I thought they’d be here.”

“Oh they are in the kitchen,” Lucy replied.

“What are you waiting for?” Donna looked from Margaret to Ray, “We must go and say hello to Miss Ellie and Clayton.” Ray nodded in agreement before he, Donna and Margaret started walking towards the kitchen.
 

Ms Southworth

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Really enjoyed JR and Sue Ellen's discussion about John Ross' punishment! :dance::dance::dance:

However, John Ross didn't get what he had coming, IMO. One and a half week grounding is not enough, everything considered! Only 10 days for almost taking a life? I can't help but wonder what the punishment would be for violating ... let's say a curfew! ;) His parents should have put him on bread and water AND made him work as a stable boy from early morning until late afternoon for a week and a half! :D (And I would have liked to see John Ross act as a role model for his younger cousin ... but I guess that he is his father's son after all :D)

I'm so happy that Donna and Margaret are finally at Southfork! :) Part of me really enjoys listening to all the wisdom that comes out of Margaret's mouth. And part of me want her to be a "normal" eight year old who is into the same kind of things that Rebecca seems to enjoy! I REALLY hope that the two girls can find common ground somehow! :ch:

I'm so anxious to hear what happens next, so please update REALLY soon, Karin! :bh:

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Honkytonkangel

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Well at least Sue Ellen got JR to add a few days to Lil JR's grounding, but it is definitely NOT enough and it makes JR's criticism of Sue Ellen as a parent even more laughable to me (Miss Ellie should ground HIM for being a insensitive, chauvinistic dick).
It's enough for the movie thing because THAT was boys being boys, what they did to Rebecca wasn't.
Loved Margaret's introduction to Southfork during cocktail hour. That was really clever and really funny (to me anyway) I totally thought that death penalty comment had come from Rebecca at first and nearly choked on my doughnut.
Again so happy mama is back. PLEASE let her sort that lot out.
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great updates Karin. I am so happy that Rebecca is going to be ok and I loved Margaret's introduction to life at Southfork. JR and Sue Ellen were way too lenient with John Ross's punishment. He should have been grounded for one month for trying to drown Rebecca in the swimming pool. I can't wait to find out how long Bobby and Pam are going ground Christopher for trying to drown his sister Rebecca in the pool.
 

Ms Southworth

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PS. I'm happy that I'm not the only one who think that John Ross' punishment wasn't enough. ;)

Also, I'm looking forward to reading how Bobby and Pam will deal with Christopher. I realize that this is a "delicate" time for him because of the recent return of his mother and sister. But this doesn't excuse his behavior at the pool! (The incident at the movie theatre somehow seems insignificant now due to the seriousness of the near drowning accident). Part of me hope that Bobby and Pam will follow the doctor's advice and spend the night at the hospital. Just to be on the safe side! The talk with Christopher can wait until the doctor has given the green light regarding Rebecca's health. Also, it will teach the boys that the accident did in fact come close to having a different outcome! Thank goodness, it seems like Rebecca will recover without any physical scars! Emotionally, I'm sure that she will have a long way to go before feeling confident in the water! :(
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for the detailed feedback. I enjoy reading your comments. :)

As for John Ross punishment I agree with you all that it's not long enough. But if you look at it from JR's perspective it makes total sense. I mean John Ross is visiting his dad over the summer after living abroad for 4 years. So it's not like he would want his son to spend all summer grounded. He wants some time to catch up with his son. So since Rebecca didn't die JR can easily brush the seriousness of the incident underneath the carpet to fit his own agenda.

Ms. Southworth, yeah Margaret is not your average 8 year old. She is very refined and polite. I guess time will tell if Rebecca's more normal manners will rub off on her or if the girls will clash due to their differences. You will find out soonish if they stay at the hospital or not.

Honkytonkangel, too funny that you thought it was Rebecca who said it. Yeah it totally could have been. It is written that way so I'm glad you thought it was funny.

Sanda, you will find out a bit later how Bobby & Pam will punish Christopher. But I can tell you this already. He will get a longer punishment than John Ross.

Here's another update:


Donna, Margaret and Ray walked into the kitchen where they found Clayton sitting by the table reading a newspaper and Miss Ellie standing by the stove helping Teresa making dinner preparations. Hearing the door slam shut Miss Ellie looked up, “Donna!” her face lit up in a huge smile before she hurried to get up and the two women embraced in a long hug, “How nice to see you.”

“It’s nice to see you too Miss Ellie,” Donna replied before she gestured towards the little girl. “This is Margaret.”

“How nice to meet you Margaret, I know you don’t remember but we visited you back in Washington when you were about three years old.”

“I’m sorry Ma’am but I don’t remember that,” Margaret said before she went on. “Do you know that I’ve met the president?”

“No but I bet that must have been exciting,” Miss Ellie said.

“Oh it was the best I…” Margaret then went on telling Miss Ellie more about her meeting with Bill Clinton.

Meanwhile Clayton hugged Donna and exchanged a few pleasantries before he turned to Ray and said, “Ray how nice of you to invite Donna and Margaret.”

“I’m glad you think so,” Ray smiled.

“Of course I do, it’s really been too long since your last visit,” Clayton said.

“I know we haven’t been that good at visiting but I’ve really missed you and Miss Ellie a lot since I moved to Washington,” Donna said.

“We’ve missed you too Donna,” Clayton said.

“I gotta say that it feels great to be back at Southfork again. It’s almost like old times only that the kids are older now,” Donna said.

Clayton nodded, “Yes it is!”

Then Margaret called on their attention by saying, “And I’ve also written a book about the day when I met the President. Mom had it printed in a hundred copies for me so you can all have one,” Margaret said keenly before she started to look around in her book bag that Ray had placed on the floor.

“You’ve written a whole book by yourself?” Miss Ellie asked stunned.

“Yes ma’am,” Margaret confirmed.

“But you’re only eight,” Miss Ellie reflected.

“I know but I am rather mature for my age,” Margaret replied.

“Yes she is,” Donna agreed. “I think it’s because Margaret has spent more time with us adults than with kids her own age. I mean she has friends and all but sometimes she rather prefers to attend a political lunch meeting with me rather than to stay at home and play with her friends!”

Ray sighed, this isn’t right, Margaret is only eight so she should be out climbing trees, playing with dolls and riding horses. Not attend stuffy old meeting with a bunch of bores!

“Here they are,” Margaret exclaimed happily, as she pulled out three copies of a book from her book bag. “Here you go Ma’am, Sir, Dad,” she handed one book to Clayton, one to Miss Ellie and one to Ray.

Ray stared at the book cover and read, “A day at the White House,” by Margaret Krebbs Dowling. In between the title and the name of the author there was a photo of a six year old Margaret who was shaking hands with the president. He knew that as a father he should be incredibly proud over his daughter but all he felt was alienated, as he couldn’t believe how that little girl on the cover could be his daughter as she was so foreign to him that she could just as well have been from another planet.

“Thank you Margaret. This looks really interesting,” Clayton said.

“Yes it sure does, you must be so proud of her Donna,” Miss Ellie smiled.

“Oh believe me, I am,” Donna said and the women smiled warmly at each other.

Then Miss Ellie noticed more books in the now opened book bag on the floor. She turned to Margaret. “Are all those books also copies of this book?”

“No Ma’am, those are my other books that I read for fun. Do you wanna have a look at them?” Margaret asked eagerly.

“Sure,” Miss Ellie nodded.

“Oh no Miss Ellie, you shouldn’t have said that. Margaret loves to read,” Ray sighed, as Margaret started to pile up her Nancy Drew books on the kitchen table.

“This is all my Nancy Drew books,” Margaret eventually said and Miss Ellie and Clayton stared in amazement at the overcrowded kitchen table.

“Oh you like to read about Nancy Drew Margaret?” Miss Ellie asked.

“Oh yes Ma’am, she’s my favourite. Do you want to know what the books are about?”

“Sure,” Miss Ellie nodded, as she expected to get a short summary about Nancy Drew.

But instead Margaret went on, “Oh good, I’ll read on the backcover of the books for you then,” Margaret said happily and Miss Ellie didn’t have the heart to stop her as Margaret picked up a book and started reading on the backsides. Oh dear lord, just what I didn’t need today, Miss Ellie sighed, as she realized that it was going to take Margaret at least half an hour to go through all the books…
 

Ms Southworth

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Thanks so much for yet another great update :spinning::spinning::spinning:

Margaret is something else ... so incredibly innocent and sweet ... I just can't help but love her (even though I totally understand why Ray almost feels alienated from his own flesh and blood). I really hope that her stay at Southfork will give her a new perspective on life, and that she will grow into being carefree and ... yes, just an average 8 year old girl! :jump3:

Please give us another update soon! The suspence is killing me! :D. PLEASE KARIN :site:

:10::10::10::10::10::10::10::10::10:
 
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