Dallas in the 90's

Ms Southworth

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Cute update :spinning: Loved the dialog :) I'm guessing that Rebecca: a) falls asleep listening to Margaret's book; b) starts asking all kinds of questions related to the book; or c) simply asks her mom to read her a different bedtime story! :D Also, I was very surprised that Rebecca - considering her young age - knows the term, "politics"! I wonder where she picked that up! :confused:

I'm hoping for a more lengthy update tomorrow. I'm just so curious about what going on with all the other characters both at Southfork and elsewhere. Please update soon! :10::10::10:
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Cute updates Karin!:) I love your story so much.:) Pam is so cute reading Margaret's book that she wrote to her daughter Rebecca. :)Please update your story again soon because I can't wait to find out if Rebecca and Bobby both fall asleep on Pam
while she is reading Margaret's book to them. ;)
 
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Karin

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Thank you everyone for all your feedback. :)

Ms Southworth, one of your guesses is correct. ;)
I think Rebecca picked up the word politics from Margaret. It's probably a new word to her!

Presea, good point about Lucas. I think Christopher has easier to deal with Lucas than Rebecca because he's always known about Lucas existance and his father has chosen him over Lucas before whereas his mother has "chosen" Rebecca over him.
But yeah naturally it's inevitable that Lucas will show up at Southfork sooner or later...You will see how their first meeting will go then...

Sanda, you'll find out soonish if anyone falls asleep on Margaret's book. ;)

Silvie, I am glad that you're still keeping up with this story as well. :)

Okay so now it's time for another update:


Meanwhile downstairs in one of the guest rooms were Donna and Ray tucking Margaret in. Ray picked up a book and said, “Are you sure you don’t want me to read to you?”

“Yes dad, I can read you know,” Margaret replied.

“I know that, I just thought that you might enjoy having someone read to you?”

“Thanks dad but no thanks,” Margaret collected the Nancy Drew book from her dad’s hands. “I’m used reading silently by myself. I mean it’s only little kids who need someone to read to them.”

Ray sighed. “Okay if you’ll say so. Goodnight then daddy’s little Angel,” Ray hugged Margaret.

“Goodnight daddy,” Margaret then hugged Donna. “Goodnight Mommy.”

“Goodnight Margaret,” Donna replied before she broke the hug. “Now remember what I’ve told you. Nine-thirty is the light supposed to be out.”

“Nine-thirty?” Ray exclaimed. “But Donna, isn’t that a little late bedtime for an eight year old?” Ray objected. “I mean Lucas is normally asleep at eight.”

“Who’s Lucas?” Margaret asked and both her parents answered at once.

“Your cousin,” Donna replied.

“Your brother,” Ray replied.

“Huh? How can he both my brother and my cousin?” Margaret asked clearly confused by the situation. Ray and Donna exchanged a look.

“Um…it’s complicated,” Donna said.

“Yeah we’ll explain it to you some other time, ok?” Ray promised.

Margaret nodded, “Okay dad. So how long could I read now?”

“Nine-thirty like your mother said.”

“Yeah and don’t you try reading with your flash light under the cover Margaret. Since I can tell when you do. Nine-thirty I’ll be back to check on you and then I want the light to be out,” Donna said.

Margaret smiled, “Yes mom.”

“Good, sweet dreams,” Donna said before she closed the door to the guest room she shared with her daughter. They then started walking back towards the living room. Once they were out of earshot from their daughter Donna turned to Ray and said, “Why did you have to bring up Lucas for?”

“Well he’s my son,” Ray replied. “Why did you say he’s her cousin for?”

“Because we both know he’s really Bobby’s son.”

“Only biologically and Lucas doesn’t know that.”

“He doesn’t?” Donna asked surprised.

“No Jenna and I thought that it was best for him not to know,” Ray explained.

“Best for whom Ray?” Donna asked sternly. “Best for you or for Lucas?”

“Best for Lucas of course,” Ray replied. “So if Margaret asks again I want you to tell her he’s her brother…”

“But Ray…”

“No buts Donna. Remember we’re only in this situation since you choose to walk away when you were pregnant with my child…”

“I know that but I never told you to find another family to replace us with.”

“Well I did and frankly that’s none of your business.”

“No I guess it’s not, but still I’ve never lied to Margaret about who her father is. What’s going to happen the day when Lucas finds out?”

“Donna…”

“I know, I know, I’m putting my nose in where it doesn’t belong. But still since you’re asking me to lie to our daughter, I think you owe me some sort of explanation.”

“Okay, Jenna and I have agreed to tell him some day when he’s older…”

“How much older?”

“Oh I don’t know. We haven’t really discussed it, maybe when he’s 13 or 18.”

“I see, so I guess I’ll have to tell Margaret then…” Donna sighed. “But I am not sure how she’s going to take it. I mean she and Lucas are about the same age, so what if she believes you were cheating on me with Jenna?”

“I haven’t thought of that,” Ray sighed.

“No of course you haven’t. Luckily for you, I have so I won’t tell her until I absolutely have to. I mean as long as she and Lucas don’t meet it doesn’t really matter now does it?”

“No I guess not,” Ray shrugged his shoulders.

“I mean I don’t want to confuse her unless I absolutely have to,” Donna insisted.

“I can understand that,” Ray nodded. “Oh and Donna?”

“What?”

“Margaret’s really lovely. You’ve done a good job raising her so far.”

“Thanks Ray,” Donna smiled warmly at him.
 

Honkytonkangel

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Krebbs by name but god Ray is SUCH a Ewing by nature. He pushed Donna away way before she finally walked (times like this and then I totally see why he and JR used to be friends LOL). No-one forced him to play the white knight for the Wade witch.
Not completely his fault though because this situation also wouldn't exist if Jenna hadn't walked out on her and Bobby's wedding the first time LOL.
I like that he's still trying to find a way to bond with Margaret though and I loved what he said to Donna at the end.
It's all gonna kick off when Jenna turns up and I can't wait LOL.
 

Crazy about SE and JR

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Things are too quiet between JR and Sue Ellen!!! :(:(:(
Pam is so full of bullshit! She left Chris and suddenly she wants to decide things about him with bobby! Rebecca is very annoying, it suits her mother.:mad:
I really enjoyed Donna's return and having another child besides Rebecca in the house. :)
What about Jamie? Any chance of this character ressurrect? She was the best friend Sue Ellen had!
Nice work Karin!!!
 

Ms Southworth

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Yet another great and very interesting update :bravo:

I liked the dialog between Margaret, Donna and Ray ... and also Donna and Ray. (However, I already feel bad for Lucas :( It's not always a good thing to show up unannounced, but I guess that's all on Jenna ;))

Although I totally sympathise with all the JR and Sue Ellen fans, you need to take the "backseat", until the Bobby/Pam/Christopher situation is resolved! It's been underway for so long ... and postponed several times, so we really need it "fixed". Maybe the next episode in Karin's wonderful fan fic will focus on JR and Sue Ellen (and her British husband)? :)

Please update soon, Karin :10::10::10::10::10::10::10:

PS. I just realized that Bobby could be the one to fall asleep ... and neither Rebecca nor Pam would likely complain about him spending the night in the guest room! ;)
 

Karin

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Thank you so much for the feedback everyone. I really appreciate that you take the time to tell me what you think. :spinning:

Honkytonkangel,
you are so right when you say that Ray is a Jock's son. He does act like a Ewing!
True also about Jenna. She did blow it when she left Bobby the first time around and I bet she's regretted that decision ever since, except for where Charlie is concerned, as I'm sure she wouldn't have wanted to be without her daughter. Yeah things will kick off when Jenna arrives. But it's not gonna happen just yet...
I mean Donna, Ray and Margaret ought to have some alone time to bond first, don't you think? ;)

Crazy about SE and JR, thank you. I'm glad you're still enjoying my story. :)
I can see why you think JR/SE's plot is slow-moving at the time. But like Ms. Southworth pointed out, this episode is really more centered around Bobby, Pam and their kids. But don't worry JR/SE will be back very soon (tomorrow in fact)... ;)
Unfortunately Jamie was killed off on the original show and I don't really remember the details about how it was done, as I haven't seen that episode in a while. But I think there was some accident when she was out climbing with a friend. So well the only way to bring back Jamie would be to say she'd had amnesia all those years she disappeared, but if we went that route she would still be married to Cliff when she showed up. So well I'm sorry to say it but Jamie will remain dead in our story. :rip:
Jack on the other hand might make an appearance later on...

Alexia, oh there will be plenty of more JR/SE stuff coming up in this story. But it's a bit of a slow burn at the moment...
In the meantime I hope you've enjoyed the Donna & Ray stuff.

Ms. Southworth, you are right when you guess that the episodes shift focus a bit. Some episodes are more focused on certain characters while other episodes are more focused on other characters and yes usually the episode title and fanart is a pretty good indicator which characters will play a bigger role in that episode. But yeah in general a lot of the plots have a build up and then ends up more in the focus when they reach their pay offs.
You will find out in the next update who will fall asleep! ;)

Update will follow in the next post.
 

Karin

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Pam closed the book and read, “The End.” Then she put it down and said, “So Rebecca which book, do you want to hear next?”

“I think she’s sleeping,” Bobby said.

Pam looked surprised, as looked down on her daughter, “Oh should we be worried?”

“I don’t think so, she is breathing normally,” Bobby said, as they both turned their attention to their daughter and observed her as she was sleeping.

“Yeah,” Pam said as she put her hand on her forehead. She felt a bit calmer when she felt that her temperature was normal. Then she gently stroke a lock of her hair away from her head and kissed her goodnight. Before she went on in an amazed tone of voice, “but I never think I’ve seen her falling asleep that fast!”

“Well I guess it’s because you’ve never read to her about Margaret’s day at the White House before,” Bobby said half jokingly. “My guess is you won’t be reading that book again anytime soon!”

“I suppose you’re right,” Pam smiled, as she carefully got up from the edge of Rebecca’s bed. “The book was sort of boring!”

“It totally was,” Bobby agreed.

“Yeah I’m surprised that a child wrote it, it sounded so mature.”

“I guess Margaret’s not your average child,” Bobby said. “She’s grown up in Washington. The city where people eat, breathe and sleep politics.”

“That’s true,” Pam nodded, as she sat down on the edge of her own bed instead. “I guess she must have been heavily influenced by Donna’s political involvement ever since she was born!”

“Yeah since she certainly doesn’t seem to take after Ray much,” Bobby agreed.

“That’s for sure.”

“Then again, I guess a child always takes after their parents and if that child is only raised by one parent, the other parent doesn’t really have a chance to be involved even if he would want to be.”

It was something in the way that Bobby said it that gave Pam a bad conscious and she licked her lips nervously before she said, “I’m sorry Bobby.”

Bobby looked at her, “For what?”

“For keeping your daughter away from you,” Pam said with tears in her eyes. “It was wrong of me and I wish I could have been a better mother.”

“What are you talking about?” Bobby asked. “I’ve seen you with Rebecca and you are a great mother to her.”

“Yeah but not to Christopher,” Pam said.

“Well you were once. So if you just explain things to him, you could be again…”

“Thanks for your faith in me,” Pam said. “But I think it might be too late!”

“No it’s not too late,” Bobby said, as he got up from the chair he’d been sitting in and walked over towards Pam’s bed. “That is unless you’re thinking about going back to Los Angeles.”

“I’m not,” Pam shook her head.

“Good,” Bobby said, as he sat down next to her, looking at her intensively. “So how long do you think you’ll be staying?”

“I don’t know,” Pam said. “I just know that I wish I’d never left you in the first place. If I could do it all over again I would have stayed. Maybe then we still would have been married…”

“Most likely yes,” Bobby sighed. Before he broke eye contact and looked away. “Still nothing gets better from sitting here and talking about what might have been…”

“I know but I’m still really sorry for leaving you,” Pam said with tears falling down her cheek.

“I know, so please don’t cry.”

“I’m sorry but I can’t help it,” Pam sobbed. “It’s just that with everything that’s happened today. I can’t help but thinking of what would have happened if you hadn’t been there. What if Rebecca had fallen into the pool in Los Angeles instead?”

“Pam you’re not making much sense,” Bobby told her, as she was starting to get hysterical.

“What if Rebecca had died before you’d even met her?”

“Well she didn’t and I was there to rescue her today.”

“I know, but I wasn’t and I should have been there…” Pam sobbed. “I mean Rebecca could have died today and this whole thing wouldn’t have happened if I hadn’t left you.”

“Stop blaming yourself. Nothing gets better from it and frankly I don’t see what you leaving me have to do with Rebecca almost drowning…”

“But it has everything to do with it,” Pam insisted. “If Christopher and Rebecca had grown up together he would have known that she couldn’t swim and he would have known better than to throw her into the pool.”

“That’s true,” Bobby nodded.

“So can’t you see that this whole thing is my fault?”

“No it’s not,” Bobby said. “Rebecca almost drowning was an accident. You can’t blame yourself for that.”

“But…” Pam started to object, before her voice broke and she just sobbed so hard she couldn’t speak anymore.

“Come here,” Bobby said, before he pulled her into his arms, giving her a comforting hug. This seemed to soothe Pam a little even if she kept crying against his chest. “Pam, you have to pull yourself together. We are here to observe Rebecca and all your crying is only going to wake her up.”

“You’re right,” Pam nodded. “God I almost forgot that we have to watch Rebecca. She’s not out of the woods yet and why isn’t she waking up?”

“I guess she’s tired.”

“What if something’s wrong with her?” Pam said, as she lifted her head up and dried her tears before she turned her attention back to their little girl.

“There’s nothing wrong with her, she’s breathing normally,” Bobby said reassuringly.

“Good, but I’m so scared she’ll stop!”

“I know me too,” Bobby admitted.

“Seriously if Rebecca dies, I don’t know what I’d do.”

“She’s not going to die,” Bobby insisted. “After all she’s a Ewing and we’re strong. So I’m sure she’s going to be just fine.”

“I know,” Pam smiled, through her tears. It was the first time she’d heard him refer to Rebecca as a Ewing and hearing him say it, she knew that he had accepted the child as his own now and that felt good. He believed her now and that made her feel hopeful for their future. Pam felt much calmer as she put her head back onto Bobby’s chest again. Having her back in his arms made him feel better too, as for the first time since he’d brought her back to Southfork, it felt like she had really came home to stay. They were both keeping their eyes on their daughter but their arms wrapped around each other. It seemed like this crisis had brought them closer together. They were able to take comfort in each other’s embrace now and it felt good. None of them said anything more, for a long while. There was no need to, as just sitting there together, watching their daughter toss and turn in her sleep, as she was dreaming, made them feel whole again.
 

Ms Southworth

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Great scene and great dialog from one of Southfork's many guest rooms :spinning::spinning::spinning:. (I forgot to comment on the fact that Donna and Margaret supposedly are "camping out" in one of the bedrooms downstairs at Southfork ... ... I'd didn't think that SF had that many sparerooms, but I guess that all is possible in the land of make believe! ;) )

I wonder how Bobby and Pam will end up "killing time", while Rebecca is on her way to the land of dreams! ;)

Next update ASAP, please :10::10::10::10::10::10::10:
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great updates Karin. :)I love your story so much.:) I really hope things work out for Donna, Ray, and Margaret and for Bobby, Pam, Rebecca, and Christopher as well. :)They all deserve to have their happily ever afters that that the writers original Dallas failed to give them because they meant to be together forever. :):(
 

Crazy about SE and JR

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I understand this need for explanations, B & P fans. I liked them in the original show, but I find it difficult to forgive Pam. Sometimes (when I got very pissed with JR) I wondered what would have been like if Sue Ellen had gotten involved with Bobby ... under certain circumstances it might work! As for Jamie, it was an accident, yes, she would have to resurrect. A pity, she was a very cool character! Karin, I do not comment too often because English is not my idiom (it's portuguese, I'm brazilian), but I read all the updates! :popcorn:;)
 

Jessie

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I'm caught up once again. I love your story so much.
I'm so glad Rebecca is ok. I don't think Christopher and John Ross wanted to hurt her but they should have known better.

JR and Sue Ellen discussing John Ross's punishment was funny. I didn't like how JR was implying she maybe didn't raise him right. It made me laugh when JR didn't really worry about John Ross going into a R rated film. I doubt Sue Ellen can stop the movie from coming to the US. She needs to talk to Don but he already has set things in motion. Talking about the movie, I would love to see it.

I love the scenes with Donna and Margaret. She is such a smart child, I really like her. I just hope she gets to have fun on her trip, and not just read.

I felt bad for Christopher, I understand his anger. He needs to be punished for what he did to Rebecca but Pam needs to explains things to him. The longer she waits it makes it worse. I like Rebecca but she is spoiled.

It will be interesting to see how things go when Jenna, and the kids show up.

Your story is amazing, I can't wait to see what will happen next.
 

Ms Southworth

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Yikes ... Bobby with Sue Ellen??? That was and will always be a nightmare! :eck: LOL :eck:

Well, I don't think that we fans necessarily need to understand the behavior of the couple that are not our favorites! ;) I see that Sue Ellen and JR had great chemistry and definitely were physically attracted to each other when times were good, but I just don't understand why a beautiful and intelligent woman/lady like Sue Ellen would want to get back with JR! But the thing is ... I don't have to! Thus, I have no problem with Sue Ellen and JR ending up in bed together (after her divorce is final)! :) I find their relationship entertaining to watch, but I never dream of walking a day in Sue Ellen's high heels! ;) Another thing is ... didn't Sue Ellen miss out on John Ross's first year (and several time periods after that) due her struggles with alcoholism? Nobody's perfect ... ... but most people can change, thank goodness :):):) I love the way Sue Ellen is with John Ross in Karin's fan fic! :) And yes, Pam needs forgiveness ... ... however, I think that Pam hasn't told Bobby everything, so even if she winds up with Bobby again, I think that we have to prepare ourselves for trouble in paradise! :(
 

Crazy about SE and JR

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Every couple has their chemistry, their motivations and, as a fan, what works for me is JR and SE, that's all. ;)
Karin, your story is very good and I'm more than willing to wait until things get hot between my favorite couple!
About them, I think it's time for Sue Ellen to see that her marriage is far from ideal and that she will never love anyone besides JR. But she has to make him deserve her!
Please, continue! :)
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback. :)

Ms Southworth, I am sure Southfork had more guest rooms than we ever saw on the show as the ranch was lots bigger on the show than the actual house! :lol:
Then as for the different favorite couples, honestly I think the reason why Sue Ellen keeps going back to JR is because she still loves him. No matter what he does he was/is the love of her life. :kiss:
Then as for Sue Ellen's behavior after John Ross birth. She got a postnatal depression. It can sometimes happens to new mothers or even fathers and have nothing to do with her alcoholism.
I also think Bobby & Sue Ellen would have been a weird pairing. I read somewhere that the writers were tossing around with the idea but decided not to go down that route as the relationship wouldn't offer any conflicts = it would be boring to watch!
Anyway I am glad they never did go down that route as I much prefer the Bobby/Pam and JR/SE pairings.

Sanda,
I agree that the original Dallas didn't offer any happily ever afters or closure on the characters' or main relationships. Shortly it was a crap ending unworthy of a show of Dallas cult status. :(
But oh well we'll always have fanfics...

Crazy about SE and JR, don't worry about English not being your first language. It's not my first language either since I'm Swedish. So the important thing is that we all understand each other. :pals:
I have a friend who is Brazilian. I visited her a little over two years ago and I loved your country. :)
Obrigado for the feedback on my story. It's much appreciated. Also you are right when you say that every couple have their own fans and I think that's cool. Also thanks for saying that you're willing to wait for the good JR/SE parts. They will come eventually, I think we all know that! ;)
Then as for her marriage, I think Sue Ellen understood the moment the movie was released that her marriage was not as good as she thought it was.

Jessie, I am so happy that you've caught up with my story once again. :)
I'm glad that you're still loving it. You will find out very soon how it will go when Sue Ellen tries to talk to Don about the movie...
Also we did saw bits and glimpses of it on Dallas when they were filming it and also in Reel Life. I think after all the fuss she made about making it and holding it over JR's head it's sort of strange how that plot was never followed up again. Are we supposed to believe that Sue Ellen just tucked her movie away and never released it?
Yes Margaret is mature for her age. You know for Margaret reading is fun. But yeah she will do more than just read all summer.
You are right about Pam and Christopher too. The longer she waits to explain it to him the harder it's gonna get...

Okay a short update will follow in the next post. :)
 

Karin

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Sue Ellen awoke at 6.25 a.m. the next morning. She sighed, when she realized what time it was. Jetlag really is a bitch, Sue Ellen reflected before she remembered the conversation she’d had with JR last night. Oh well might just as well talk to Don. It must be lunchtime in England, Sue Ellen reached for the phone by her bed. A part of her really didn’t want to have this conversation but knowing that the whole Ewing family’s honor hung in the balance she reluctantly dialed the number home.

After three rings their housekeeper Rose answered the phone, “Lockwood residence.”

“Hi Rose, this is Sue Ellen, I was wondering if my husband’s at home?”

“Oh hi Mrs. Lockwood, how nice to hear from you, actually no he’s at work. So may I suggest calling there instead?”

“Thanks Rose, I’ll do just that.”

“Do you need the number?”

“No it’s fine, I’ve got it,” Sue Ellen hung up the phone and then picked up her phone book and started calling another number instead.

After two rings Don’s secretary Jane picked up the phone, “Lockwood productions, how can I help you?”

“Hi Jane, this is Sue Ellen Lockwood, I was wondering if you could please put Don on the phone for me.”

“I’m sorry Mrs. Lockwood but he’s out on a business lunch,” Jane replied.

“Oh I’ll see,” Sue Ellen said in a disappointed voice.

“Do you want me to try to track him down at the restaurant for you?” Jane offered.

“Yeah if you don’t mind that would be very helpful,” Sue Ellen said.

“Okay hold on then I’ll try to redirect the call for you…” Jane said and Sue Ellen sighed as she sat waiting by the phone.
 

Ms Southworth

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Great update :spinning: ... ... just way too short ... almost like a "teaser" :( Any chance that this is just the first part, so that the next scene from your wonderful fan fic will follow in a few minutes? ;) Maybe not, but I'm allowed to dream, right? ... :rolleyes:

Great work :bravo:
 
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