Thank you so much for all your feedback Robin. I have enjoyed reading your comments. 
I am glad that you enjoy reading about all the characters. I think most fanfics just focus on a specific pairing. Our story is a bit slower moving as we have pretty much all the characters from the original show and then some new ones that we created. But I think we try to make it as true as possible to the original Dallas.
Of course Jenna and her kids have to go back to Dallas at some point. What's the fun with keeping them in Italy indefinitely?
I also preferred Cliff with Afton. She was the best match for him. Even if he didn't treat her that good sometimes. I remember watching when she came back with little Pamela in the later seasons. I think it was a missed opportunity not to have them stick around as it would have made Cliff's character evolve a lot and made him more likable.
I think one of JR's strenghts was that no matter how rotten he could be, he could always claim he did things for the sake of his family. His love for John Ross was genuine and made the character more likable.
I know the way Donna left Ray when she was pregnant with his child made no sense at all. I always thought Ray should get to know his daughter.
Oh yes of course it's more interesting with them all living under one roof. I think a huge mistake that was made on the TNT show was to have them all at their separate houses. It didn't create the same family dynamic.
Yes poor Christopher, he finally gets what he wants. His mom returns. But then he also gets a sister that he knew nothing about. I could totally understand if the boy would need to see a child psychologist. But he seems to be handling things quite well on his own. I guess it must be Bobby's influence as he's raised him singlehandedly for years.
Of course JR/SE will kiss at some point. But I am not telling you when...you just have to keep on reading.
Don's a jerk for releasing the movie. But it will backfire on him big time!
I look forward to read more comments from you as you keep on reading!
Love,
Karin.
I am glad that you enjoy reading about all the characters. I think most fanfics just focus on a specific pairing. Our story is a bit slower moving as we have pretty much all the characters from the original show and then some new ones that we created. But I think we try to make it as true as possible to the original Dallas.
Of course Jenna and her kids have to go back to Dallas at some point. What's the fun with keeping them in Italy indefinitely?
I also preferred Cliff with Afton. She was the best match for him. Even if he didn't treat her that good sometimes. I remember watching when she came back with little Pamela in the later seasons. I think it was a missed opportunity not to have them stick around as it would have made Cliff's character evolve a lot and made him more likable.
I think one of JR's strenghts was that no matter how rotten he could be, he could always claim he did things for the sake of his family. His love for John Ross was genuine and made the character more likable.
I know the way Donna left Ray when she was pregnant with his child made no sense at all. I always thought Ray should get to know his daughter.
Oh yes of course it's more interesting with them all living under one roof. I think a huge mistake that was made on the TNT show was to have them all at their separate houses. It didn't create the same family dynamic.
Yes poor Christopher, he finally gets what he wants. His mom returns. But then he also gets a sister that he knew nothing about. I could totally understand if the boy would need to see a child psychologist. But he seems to be handling things quite well on his own. I guess it must be Bobby's influence as he's raised him singlehandedly for years.
Of course JR/SE will kiss at some point. But I am not telling you when...you just have to keep on reading.
Don's a jerk for releasing the movie. But it will backfire on him big time!
I look forward to read more comments from you as you keep on reading!
Love,
Karin.