Dallas in the 90's

Ms Southworth

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Every time Don says or does something I think I can't possibly wanna punch him more and then he does something else and I realise I do.
He is a spineless shit and now I don't want Sue Ellen to divorce him, I want her to shoot him.

Funny as ever to see JR being his usual charming self. I really wish he could sort things out with Sue.
You don't want Sue Ellen to end up on death row for murder??? :eek: We are in Texas, you know! ;)

Also, I'm not following JR's logic when it comes to the amount of effort he puts into breaking up Bobby and Pam! :confused:. JR should focus on Sue Ellen ... or better yet his own flesh and blood! John Ross has been at Southfork for over a week, and JR hasn't bonded much with him except for that trip to the Dallas Fort Worth Adventure Park (as far as we know)! :(
 
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Ms Southworth

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I agree with you about Bobby and Pam. Lol. I wish they would stop taunting JR already. Well, I expect that from Bobby because he always annoys me, but it seems kind of OOC for Pam to be this obsessed with annoying JR. She had let a lot of that cool off in her later years on the show. I want to see JR wipe that smirk off her face! Although his pouting is kind of annoying me, too. Sue Ellen is the only one of the four who is being mature and not getting into it. I thought that Rebecca had inherited her brattiness solely from Bobby, but now I think it might have come more from Pam!
Every time Pam gets within 10 feet of JR, he's always in her face ... ... one way or the other! :think: It's been like that since she returned to Southfork, so I honestly don't blame her for sending JR those glances at the breakfast table! :D Especially because Miss Ellie made it very clear, how happy she is for Bobby and Pam! :)

Most likely, JR pouts because deep down, he is jealous! :D I'm sure that he would have other things to think about, if Sue Ellen was free and available! ;) I wonder why JR doesn't appear to use his ressources to dig up dirt on Don! Dirt could potentially speed up a divorce between Sue and Don. And JR would be ready to lend Sue Ellen a shoulder to cry on! :cooler:

I didn't get why Sue Ellen suddenly started the discussion about John Ross again at the dinner table! She and JR had just come to an understanding, and then she starts over! :rolleyes:

What behavior from Pam, Bobby, and Rebecca do you find bratty (if you don't mind me asking)? It's such a strong word! o_O
 

Karin

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Thank you for the feedback everyone. I enjoy reading all of your comments. :)

Honkytonkangel, too funny about the Don comments. I can tell he's not your favorite character and honestly I can see why.
My sister really doesn't like him either. She finds him boring. I found him boring on the show but writing him I somehow found him more entertaining than on the show. I am not sure why.

Ms. Southworth, I think Sue Ellen will see the light the moment she realizes that Don hasn't stopped the movie...
You are right that JR ought to focus more on putting his family back together again than to break up Bobby's.

Presea, as for Pam. I think it was only during her last season on the show that she and JR sort of came to a truce. I mean in the season before the dream season when she found out JR had sent her to look for Mark in the caribean I think she bitchslapped JR for it, didn't she?
Either way she did join Cliff and Jamie in their fight for control over Ewing Oil because she hated JR more than she loved Bobby. So they were definitely not getting along at that point.

You are right that Ewing Oil is still very much JR's true love as well. I think it's because the company represents his daddy to him.
Don't worry about John Ross and Christopher, just like other boys their age they will have time for fun too. ;)

Oh yeah Sue Ellen is married to Don so if anything were to happen between her and JR she would be cheating on him! :giggle:

Crazy about SE and JR, well at the moment JR is waiting for Sue Ellen to adapt to being back in Texas. He doesn't want to come on too strong to start with since he doesn't want to scare her off. So well he's just awaiting the right time to make his move.

Silvie, I am glad that you enjoyed the updates. :)

Update will follow in the next post.
 

Karin

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At Southfork have John Ross and Christopher now joined the family at the breakfast table. The boys were eating with a good appetite and the other Ewings were small talking, when Lucy and Mitch came out of the house. Miss Ellie looked up and said, “Well good morning!”

“Good morning,” Lucy replied.

“You’re late for breakfast this morning. Did you oversleep?” Clayton asked.

“Um…yeah,” Mitch replied and the grownups smiled as they saw the lipstick on Mitch's face.

As they sat down Pam said in a low voice to Lucy, “Maybe you ought to wipe that lipstick off of Mitch cheek!”

“Oh, thanks!” Lucy smiled sheepishly before she strokes Mitch cheek. Mitch turned to her and smiled at her and she mouthed, “Lipstick”. Where as they both start to laugh.

“What’s so funny?” Rebecca asked.

“You’ll understand it when you are older,” Pam said.

“Bob we really better get going to the office now,” JR said.

“Wait for us, we’re coming with you,” John Ross and Christopher said in unison.

“Oh no you don’t, ‘cause you’re grounded,” Rebecca gloated.

“Sorry John Ross you can come some other day instead,” JR said and John Ross nodded in defeat, as this wasn’t how he had pictured his summer.

“Oh and before I forget you’re also grounded Rebecca,” Pam informed Rebecca.

Rebecca looked at her with questioning eyes, “What?!” Rebecca pouted before she asked innocently, “What have I done mommy?”

“You ruined my tie,” Bobby reminded his daughter.

“You left your roller blades where we could trip on them,” JR added.

“You are grounded for two days Rebecca,” Pam said seriously. “Today and tomorrow you’ll be staying in your room.”

“Yes this is a fair world after all,” John Ross smiled.

“Enjoy your grounding Rebecca,” Christopher gloated.

“Come on Bob, time for work,” JR reminded his little brother.

“Okay,” Bobby wiped off his mouth before he turned to Pam and said, “Well bye then,” and then he fell back into an old habit without thinking and gave her a goodbye kiss, just like that in front of everyone.

Rebecca and Margaret giggled when they saw that while Christopher just stared at them, as a sense of déjà vu came over him and it hit him like lightning. “Oh my God, my parents are back together again!”

Bobby felt like kicking himself for acting so recklessly around his son. But it was too late to deny it now. So he threw Chris an apologetic glance and said sheepishly, “I’m sorry you had to find out like this son, I should have told you.”

“Yes you should have,” Chris crossed his arms, as he was not sure how to feel about this.

“It just happened so fast,” Bobby said apologetic. “It’s not like we planned it, but your mother and I are very happy so I hope you won’t have a problem with this pal,” Bobby gave Chris shoulder a little squeeze and Christopher bit his lip, as he tried to control his temper.

“I don’t have a problem with it, I think it is great daddy,” Rebecca smiled.

“Well good,” Bobby smiled. “Christopher?”

Christopher looked up and seeing the look in his father's eyes he sighed, before he muttered, “As long as you know what you are doing dad.”

Bobby grimaced at that but before he had the time to reassure his son JR butted in, “Bob come on we must get to the office now!”

Bobby sighed, “Sorry duty calls, bye!” Bobby then got up from the table and hurried off.

Pam smiled as she looked after him. But her smile vanished when she turned around and saw the look on Christopher’s face, “What’s the matter Christopher?”

“Nothing, I’m just not hungry,” Christopher looked down, as he tried to compose himself.

“You’re not sick are you?” Pam asked in a concerned voice.

“Like you care,” Christopher spat out.

“What’s that supposed to mean?”

“You can’t just come back here and act like nothing’s happened. You didn’t just go into the hospital for a few months and came back. You’ve been gone for almost eight years mom!”

Pam looked like she was about to start to cry, as it was obvious to her that her son hated her. It didn’t matter what everyone said, “I’m sorry Christopher. I really am. I don’t know what I can do to make it up to you?”

“You don’t have to do anything, just leave me alone,” Christopher yelled angrily, as he got up and left the breakfast table.

“Why can’t I do anything right when Christopher’s concerned?” Pam asked upset, as she was on the brink of tears.

“I’m sorry Pam but you hurt him really bad when you left,” Miss Ellie said.

“Yeah you can’t just expect that to vanish in a week. You’ll have to give him some time,” Sue Ellen reasoned. “I’m sure he’ll calm down.”

“I hope you’re right,” Pam said.

“I don’t understand what’s going on either,” Rebecca said. “Mommy I thought you said everyone would be happy if we could go live with daddy and Christopher. But Christopher isn’t happy.”

“I know sweetie, how about if mommy and you go for a little ride and I’ll explain it all to you?”

“Okay,” Rebecca smiled.

“But Pam I thought Rebecca was grounded,” Sue Ellen reminded her.

“She is, starting tomorrow,” Pam said, as she took Rebecca’s hand and the two of them walked away towards the stables.

John Ross sighed. “Can I be excused?” He asked. “I wanna go check on Chris?”

“Sure,” Sue Ellen replied and John Ross left the table. Looking after him Miss Ellie sighed. Her good mood from earlier this morning had evaporated as this breakfast had just reminded her off that her family still had some serious issues to work out before they could all live happily together under one roof.
 

Honkytonkangel

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Poor Chris, and STILL Pam can't go and actually TALK to him (and so much for disciplining Rebecca, will she actually BE grounded tomorrow or pout and get away with it again).
Happy that Bobby seemed to really feel bad (though he should've stayed and talked to him too no matter what JR said).
Feel bad for Miss Ellie too, but she can't seriously have believed they were all gonna end up one big happy family.
At least Lucy and Mitch are happy.

And Karin, I hate Don here, but on the show he was the only one of Sue Ellen's other men I really liked.
 

Presea

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Every time Pam gets within 10 feet of JR, he's always in her face ... ... one way or the other! :think: It's been like that since she returned to Southfork, so I honestly don't blame her for sending JR those glances at the breakfast table! :D Especially because Miss Ellie made it very clear, how happy she is for Bobby and Pam! :)

Most likely, JR pouts because deep down, he is jealous! :D I'm sure that he would have other things to think about, if Sue Ellen was free and available! ;) I wonder why JR doesn't appear to use his ressources to dig up dirt on Don! Dirt could potentially speed up a divorce between Sue and Don. And JR would be ready to lend Sue Ellen a shoulder to cry on! :cooler:

I didn't get why Sue Ellen suddenly started the discussion about John Ross again at the dinner table! She and JR had just come to an understanding, and then she starts over! :rolleyes:

What behavior from Pam, Bobby, and Rebecca do you find bratty (if you don't mind me asking)? It's such a strong word! o_O
While it is true that JR has been pretty mean to Pam since she came back, I honestly believe that some of it has to do with the fact that he saw how much it hurt Bobby and Christopher when she left them and that he doesn't want them to get hurt again. If Pam is really the sweet, innocent lady that everyone except JR thinks she is, then it would make more sense for her to rise above his anger towards her and ignore him altogether. She's only feeding JR's craving for attention. And that includes negative attention a lot of the time, too.

I do agree with you about JR being jealous. Since his own mother hardly ever pays attention to him except to usually just yell at him and has made her preference for Bobby and the other sons quite clear, having to see Bobby get lavished with attention for being back together with Pam and their "miracle child" must make JR feel even more left out of his family. But he should focus on making things right with Sue Ellen and John Ross more. That might help him get some positive attention and keep his mind off of Pam. I wish JR would get rid of Don, too. I hate how he doesn't seem to have any power in this story and mostly just seems to complain about things at the table. What happened to "nobody ever beating JR"? Guess that is still lost from the later TV show years. Sigh.

What I find bratty: 1. Bobby has tried to use physical violence against JR in this story. And it was not in self-defense, either. Quite inappropriate and immature for a grown man. 2. Pam not being able to take the JR thing with a grain of salt after all of these years. Gloating at JR like a little kid at breakfast. (So you are back with Bobby again. So what?) Demonizing JR in her stories to Rebecca about him while probably not even really explaining anything good about or why he is the way he is. Being stupid about Christopher and STILL not talking to him while continuing to just only focus and spoil the "miracle child". 3. Rebecca seems to always have to have her way. Has to have her cola, whines the whole car ride back and after about not seeing the end of Pocahontas, demands that Christopher and John Ross pick up her doll and wrestles and scratches with them like an animal when she doesn't get her way ("They cursed at me!" ???), eavesdrops on conversations, has an inappropriate interest in her parents love life ("Now that's what I call a kiss!" Her parents were feeling each other up and about to have sex, so it was a bit strange to see a seven year-old kid get excited to see her parents in such an adult situation. What has she been watching? Lol!), taunting Christopher and John Ross about being grounded (and of course, Queen Rebecca gets out of her punishment for a day, possibly forever), her rude comments towards JR ("You were right! JR is mentally ill!" "Way to go, mom! He deserves it!" after Pam pushes him into the pool), her fixed opinions on JR based entirely on her mother's biased stories about him and her vow for vengeance against him (she would make her uncle JR pay one day) are awfully strange and a bit extreme for a seven year old kid. Especially since JR has said or done nothing mean to her, personally. Has she even thought about getting to know Uncle JR for herself? This kid is supposed to be highly intelligent, after all. That is everything I find bratty. Although I do think that Rebecca was a little better since she actually seemed worried about how unhappy Christopher was at the table.
 
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Presea

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"She is, starting tomorrow"!!! Really?!?!?! :mad::mad:
Sorry guys, but I hate Pam and Rebecca's relationship. It's ridiculous for Pam to postpone Rebecca's punishment and not go talk to Chris.
I agree. Pam should have immediately went to talk to Christopher after breakfast. But instead, she goes for a drive with the "miracle child" and spoils her even more by disregarding the grounding. But on the upside, it might help Rebecca understand Christopher better if she hears Pam's explanation. But Pam should have done that AFTER she talked to Christopher.
 

Crazy about SE and JR

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I agree. Pam should have immediately went to talk to Christopher after breakfast. But instead, she goes for a drive with the "miracle child" and spoils her even more by disregarding the grounding. But on the upside, it might help Rebecca understand Christopher better if she hears Pam's explanation. But Pam should have done that AFTER she talked to Christopher.

Rebecca is a consolation prize for Pam! I'm glad it's all fiction because I would not be proud to say I hate a kid, but I hate Rebecca!
On the other hand, as the only real relative, Sue Ellen should talk to Chris. By the way, this is a secret that I really want to see revealed. Maybe through the movie! :popcorn:
 

Pammy P

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Great update Karin, I can picture all the characters sat at the table - acting out this scene it is like the original Dallas but with a twist. Amazing writing, about time Pam should talk to Christopher, but I think he is jealous of Rebecca.....and Yes I agree too that Sue Ellen should be in on the conversation as she is his maternal aunt, well said CFSE!
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great updates Karin! I am so happy that Bobby and Pam are back together in your story but I feel horrible for Christopher. Pam really needs to have that talk with Christopher and she also needs to spend some time with Christopher and not focus all of her attention on her and Bobby's miracle child Rebecca.
 

Ms Southworth

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Poor Chris, and STILL Pam can't go and actually TALK to him (and so much for disciplining Rebecca, will she actually BE grounded tomorrow or pout and get away with it again).
Happy that Bobby seemed to really feel bad (though he should've stayed and talked to him too no matter what JR said).
Feel bad for Miss Ellie too, but she can't seriously have believed they were all gonna end up one big happy family.
At least Lucy and Mitch are happy.

And Karin, I hate Don here, but on the show he was the only one of Sue Ellen's other men I really liked.
I completely agree ... ... poor Christopher! I feel so bad for him! :(

I just don't get Pam at all! :mad: She's acting out of character when it comes to Christopher! :confused:

It doesn't make any sense why Rebecca's grounding all of a sudden is postponed for a day! Christopher is entitled to (and deserves) his mother's time more than Rebecca does right now!

In terms of grounding, I would much rather have seen that the children were given various chores instead of time in their room! I don't care if it means polishing silver ware, dusting the living room, or cleaning the stables! Just something so that they don't get to sit on their behind in their own room! Really ... that's not punishment in my book! :cool1
 

Ms Southworth

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While it is true that JR has been pretty mean to Pam since she came back, I honestly believe that some of it has to do with the fact that he saw how much it hurt Bobby and Christopher when she left them and that he doesn't want them to get hurt again. If Pam is really the sweet, innocent lady that everyone except JR thinks she is, then it would make more sense for her to rise above his anger towards her and ignore him altogether. She's only feeding JR's craving for attention. And that includes negative attention a lot of the time, too.

I do agree with you about JR being jealous. Since his own mother hardly ever pays attention to him except to usually just yell at him and has made her preference for Bobby and the other sons quite clear, having to see Bobby get lavished with attention for being back together with Pam and their "miracle child" must make JR feel even more left out of his family. But he should focus on making things right with Sue Ellen and John Ross more. That might help him get some positive attention and keep his mind off of Pam. I wish JR would get rid of Don, too. I hate how he doesn't seem to have any power in this story and mostly just seems to complain about things at the table. What happened to "nobody ever beating JR"? Guess that is still lost from the later TV show years. Sigh.

What I find bratty: 1. Bobby has tried to use physical violence against JR in this story. And it was not in self-defense, either. Quite inappropriate and immature for a grown man. 2. Pam not being able to take the JR thing with a grain of salt after all of these years. Gloating at JR like a little kid at breakfast. (So you are back with Bobby again. So what?) Demonizing JR in her stories to Rebecca about him while probably not even really explaining anything good about or why he is the way he is. Being stupid about Christopher and STILL not talking to him while continuing to just only focus and spoil the "miracle child". 3. Rebecca seems to always have to have her way. Has to have her cola, whines the whole car ride back and after about not seeing the end of Pocahontas, demands that Christopher and John Ross pick up her doll and wrestles and scratches with them like an animal when she doesn't get her way ("They cursed at me!" ???), eavesdrops on conversations, has an inappropriate interest in her parents love life ("Now that's what I call a kiss!" Her parents were feeling each other up and about to have sex, so it was a bit strange to see a seven year-old kid get excited to see her parents in such an adult situation. What has she been watching? Lol!), taunting Christopher and John Ross about being grounded (and of course, Queen Rebecca gets out of her punishment for a day, possibly forever), her rude comments towards JR ("You were right! JR is mentally ill!" "Way to go, mom! He deserves it!" after Pam pushes him into the pool), her fixed opinions on JR based entirely on her mother's biased stories about him and her vow for vengeance against him (she would make her uncle JR pay one day) are awfully strange and a bit extreme for a seven year old kid. Especially since JR has said or done nothing mean to her, personally. Has she even thought about getting to know Uncle JR for herself? This kid is supposed to be highly intelligent, after all. That is everything I find bratty. Although I do think that Rebecca was a little better since she actually seemed worried about how unhappy Christopher was at the table.
I don't see Pam as innocent at all! The world is not black and white, and everyone has skeletons in their closets! I'm sure that there will be things about her that we have yet to learn (as I'm sure there'll be about the rest of the characters in this fan fic)! :D

JR has always been Jock's son more than he has been Miss Ellie's! However, JR is a grown man now who should be able to tell which kind of behavior scores points with his mother and which doesn't! ;) Also, Miss Ellie has had to endure quite a few years with Southfork practically being an empty place, so in my opinion, it's only natural for her to be happy to have the place completely filled up again with family members, and also to see her youngest son in love again! ;)

You know ... ... the things that you find bratty about Bobby could easily be turned the other way around, so that it's JR in the "hot" seat!!! :lolo:

I find the description of Rebecca in this fan fic to be a fair description of an average seven year old child! That's not to say that there aren't children who either are much worse in their language and/or in their behavior, or who are so well-behaved that it makes you wonder! Personally, I think that it's sweet that Rebecca want her parents to be together! She wants the fairytale for them just like in the stories she loves so much! I'm guessing that she's seen her friends' parents kissing, and she was thrilled when she saw her own doing "it"! It's not like she witnesses anything inappropriate between her mom and her dad, IMO! :giggle: I do agree that if she has said that JR is mentally ill, then that's way out of line and most likely not words that she came up with herself! ;)

You're so right! :) It was nice to see Rebecca questioning why Christopher is so unhappy! It goes to show that she does care about him even though she really hasn't gotten a chance to know him yet! I really hope that the two of them are able to grow close at some point! :)
 

Ms Southworth

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Great update, Karin :spinning::spinning::spinning:

I laughed quite a few times during my read! For instance, the lipstick incident and all the gloating going on! :D
I was happy about Bobby and Pam holding hands, and that she is moving in with him again! It was also nice to hear how happy Miss Ellie about it! :kiss:

I was sad and quite upset a few times! :( Why did Christopher had to learn about his parents' being together again in such a rotten way? It was just plain cruel and very thoughtless of Bobby! And why didn't Pam take the initiative to talk with Christopher after breakfast? :( Finally, why did Rebecca get out of her punishment just like that? It didn't make sense to me at all! o_O

Why didn't JR just go to the office in his own car? JR and Bobby never used to drive to Dallas together! :rolleyes: Even though it was funny to hear JR over and over again saying that it was time to get going, I would have just left Bobby behind, if I'd been JR! :cooler: Also, being the "good" brother that he is, JR could have suggested to Bobby that he stay back and talk with Christopher! ;)

Next update, please! :tv: :best: :wait: :wave:
 
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