Dallas in the 90's

Ms Southworth

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I got a good laugh out of reading my own reviews! ... ... :rlol: ... ... I wrote the reviews with the best intentions at heart, but some of my remarks don't make sense even to me! :giggle: Sorry to do that to you! :embarrassed: I was so tired when I wrote those reviews.:shy: My family and I went to a great 4th of July celebration, and looking back now, I guess that the amount of speakers and entertainment mixed with sunshine, a soft breeze, great food, great company, finishing off with a two hour drive and then an amazing walk along the beach eventually made me more tired than I thought! :giggle:

:jum: HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY !!! :jum:
 

Ms Southworth

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HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!! The! scenes cracked me up at some point!
Sorry once again for writing non-sense! :shy: And I'm even more embarrassed, because that particular reply was reply no. 1,000 on this thread! :embarrassed: (You have a lot of loyal fans, Karin!)

Anyway, please bear with me and let me give it another go! :wink@

First of all, I was amazed that you (@Karin Schill) managed to time this 4th of July celebration perfectly, i.e. that the Ewing family celebrated Independence Day on the very day that the American people did as well! :gotcha: Just brilliant! :loveit:

Somehow, I wasn't surprised that Margaret made a comment about the magnitude of the fireworks at Southfork! :D There must come a point when Donna will agree with me that her daughter needs to take a 101 class about when to speak and when not to! ;) But until then, I'm very entertained ... :giggle:

It's quite understandable that Rebecca misses her parents, and I feel sad for her and just want to hug her! :mall: However, I'm thrilled that Bobby and Pam aren't rushing back from Houston, but supposedly are taking their time to get "business" done, both in terms of "oil" and "love" (if you know what I mean!) :clap: And that's why I had to laugh, when Rebecca said: “What are they doing in Houston anyway?” (... ... if she was only old enough to understand what makes the world go round!) :lolo: :kiss:

No wonder John Ross gets fed up with his parents' bickering every now and then! :a2: I feel very sorry not only for him but for everyone else who has to listen to it (although I suspect that the bickering is somewhat connected to the "unfinished" business between JR and Sue Ellen!) However, I loved how John Ross brought Don into the conversation to make his parents be quiet ! :giggle:

Please update soon! :best:
 
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Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. :)

Alexia, I hope you had a nice 4th of July. :)

Ms Southworth, I enjoy all of your comments even when you don't think you make any sense. ;)
As for Trevor and Lynette, don't think of them as characters that are central to the plot. Think of them more as a replacement for Muriel. That is they are best friends with Lucy and Mitch and we see them hang out together and occasionally talk about their problems etc. But they don't really have any plots of their own. I don't think it's so weird that Lucas has never heard of cheerleaders considering that he's grown up in Europe. When I was 8 I had no idea what a cheerleader was either.

I'm glad that you had a nice 4th of July celebration with your family. :)
Then as for the scenes being timed with the holiday, that was just lucky. There are more holidays coming up in this story but well with my luck we'll probably get Halloween in the spring and Thanksgiving in the summer! :lolo:
So don't expect all of the holidays to match as well as the 4th of July one did!

I think you are right that Margaret need to learn when it's appropriate to say thing. But so does all children. It's not something you know from start it's a social skill that needs to be learnt with age.

Okay so here's tonight's update:

Wednesday evening in Houston. Bobby and Pam were seated at a table in a restaurant while they were waiting to start a business dinner. While waiting for the person who had a company for sale to show up they ordered some drinks. “I’ll have a Gin & Tonic,” said Pam.

“What about you sir?” The waitress wondered.

“I’ll have a Scotch on the rocks,” Bobby replied.

“Okay,” the waitress left to get the drinks.

Bobby and Pam returned to their small talk before they were suddenly interrupted, “Ewing!” howled a man with grey hair that approached them.

Bobby who recognized him yelled back, “Guzzler you old racketeer!” Bobby was delighted to see his old college friend. “It must have been at least 15 years since I last saw you. How have you been?”

“Oh just fine,” Guzzler said when the waitress returned with their drinks.

“Here you go, enjoy your drinks,” the waitress puts down the drinks before she motioned at Guzzler, “Is your friend joining you?”

“No,” Pam shook her head.

“Well we were supposed to have a business dinner but…” Bobby started to say when Guzzler started to laugh.

“I know, you’re here to buy an oil company, right?”

“Yes,” Bobby nodded.

“Well the company that you are going to buy is mine!” Guzzler smiled.

Bobby’s face splits up in a big smile from hearing that. “No kidding, it is a small world after all,” Bobby said and Pam sighed in despair as she did not look forward to spend the rest of her evening with Bobby’s sleazy friend. “Have a seat,” Bobby pointed to the chair next to his and Guzzler sat down.

“So what can I get you to drink?” The waitress asked Guzzler.

“Well I’ll have whatever my friends are having,” Guzzler smiled.

“But Pam’s having a Gin and Tonic and I’m having a Scotch on the rocks,” Bobby said.

“Good, then I’ll have a mixture of both drinks,” Guzzler said and the waitress looked surprised.

Bobby laughed. “You’re nuts!”

Guzzler laughed too. The only one who was not laughing was Pam. She just gave Guzzler the fish eye and said suspiciously, “I didn’t know you were in the oil business Guzzler. The last time we met it was construction wasn’t it?”

“Well a lot happen in fifteen years,” Guzzler said. “I guess you two have kids by now?”

“Yeah two,” Bobby said.

“A boy and a girl,” Pam said and her face softened a bit when she spoke of the kids.

“Rebecca’s 7 and Christopher will be 14 in August,” Bobby said.

“That’s nice,” Guzzler smiled politely, when the waitress arrived with his special drink.

“Here you go enjoy your drink,” the waitress puts down the drink on the table and Guzzler took a sip of it.

“So how did you end up in the oil business?” Pam changed the subject since she didn’t trust Guzzler and didn’t want to get too personal with him.

“Well I’ll tell you all about it over dinner,” Guzzler smiled. “However don’t you think we should get the business part of the dinner over with first?”

“Fine by me,” Bobby said. “So how much do you want for your company?”

“Well the company is estimated to 40 million dollars, but I’m willing to let Guzzler Oil go for 35 just because of old friendship sake,” Guzzler said.

“Bobby I am not sure the company’s worth it,” Pam objected.

“I see your wife is still a shrew,” Guzzler said.

“Bobby please don’t buy his company,” Pam said in a demanding voice. “There’s something fishy about it.”

“Oh please do buy it Guzzler Oil. It’s a very good company. I’ve got all the papers in my briefcase, all you have to do is sign it,” Guzzler said.

“Don’t do it Bobby,” Pam objected. “At least not without reading the contract first,” Pam pleaded with Bobby to listen to reason.

“She does have a point, would you mind if I look over the contract first?”

“No not at all, if you’d rather waste 15 minutes of our dinner on reading instead of catching up be my guest. But I must warn you I only have an hour for dinner as I’m supposed to catch a flight to Jamaica later tonight.”

“Oh well if that’s the case I guess I can read the fine print later,” Bobby agreed.

“But Bobby…”

“No Pam, it’s okay, we can trust him. He’s an old friend,” Bobby said.

“Great so do we have a deal?” Guzzler asked.

“Yes it’s a deal,” Bobby shook Guzzler’s hand.

Pam sighed as Guzzler picked up the documents from his briefcase, “Great, let’s sign the contracts.”

“You weren’t kidding when you said you had the contracts all drawn up,” Bobby remarked.

“No, like I said I do have a flight to catch later tonight.”

“So I guess you were pretty sure I was going to buy the company then,” Bobby said.

“Well I hoped you would, Guzzler Oil is like my baby. So I feel better knowing it will go to a friend.”

“But if you feel so strongly about it, why sell it?” Pam asked.

“Because there’s more to life than business, I’ve found this girl in Jamaica, so I figured it was about time for me to settle down. But I can’t run the company from there. So I figured an early retirement might be in order,” Guzzler explained and Pam rolled her eyes.

“That’s great, I never thought you’d settle down. But I guess it’s true as they say, better late than never,” Bobby smiled.

“Yeah, also I don’t wanna stress you, but the contract.”

“Oh of course, do you have a pen?” Bobby asked.

“Bobby are you sure you aren’t going to at least skim read through the documents before signing?” Pam asked.

“Nope I don’t need to,” Bobby signed the papers. Guzzler also signed them and then they took one copy of the contract each. “So how would you like to get paid?”

“You don’t happen to have cash on you?” Guzzler asked and Pam frowned.

“Cash?” Bobby questioned.

“Relax, I’m only kidding, a check will do just fine.”

“Okay good,” Bobby took out the check book and wrote out a check to Guzzler for 35 million dollars.

Guzzler took the check, “Thanks Bobby, I always knew that I could count on you,” Guzzler smiled. “So now what are we doing to eat, I’m starved,” Guzzler said as he started looking at the menu.

“Well I think I’ll just have a salad,” Pam said.

“But Pam I thought you said you wanted a Texas steak before,” Bobby said.

“Well that was before, right now I’ve lost my appetite,” Pam said and as she looked from Bobby to Guzzler who happily joked and chatted away she just knew that it was going to be a long evening.
 

Presea

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I enjoyed the chapter with Guzzler. He may have been a bit silly on the show, but I always liked that episode because I thought it showed just what good friends they really were. If Guzzler Oil really is worthless, then I have a feeling that Bobby already suspects that and just signed the contract because he wanted to help Guzzler.
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great updates Karin! :)I loved Bobby and Pam's reunion in Houston with Bobby's friend Guzzler even though Pam and I don't trust him. :) :(I hope Christopher and Rebecca are reunited with their parents real soon because I hate reading about them both being so sad.:) :(
 

Ms Southworth

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Top of the line update from Houston! :dance: Very much so an update with "Dallas" (the young and glory years) hanging all over it! :kiss:

Even though I'm not a fan of the "original" Guzzler, I totally loved that you "included" him in your fanfic! :gotcha: I also loved how Pam's gut instincts told her that there could be something fishy going on! :jolly:

It'll be interesting to see whether Bobby knows more than he's let us in on at this point in time! :wink@

Please update soon! :best:
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's very much appreciated. :)

Presea, you make a good point about Bobby and Guzzler's friendship. I really enjoyed their episode as well as they came across as so normal somehow. :)
I mean I think we all have had a good friend from school or work at some point in our lives who we grow apart from later in life and yet that friendship still matters to us.

Sanda, you will be happy to hear that Chris and Rebecca will be reunited with their parents in the next episode. :)
After Rebecca's had some more time to blackmail "Butler JR"... :lolo:

Silvie, you'll find out later if Bobby will regret trusting Guzzler or not. ;)

Shan, thanks for all the emoticons and the score board. :)

Ms Southworth,
I am glad that you think this update reminded you of the glory years of Dallas as it's of couse what inspired it. :)

So well here's another update:


At the club where Afton works were Mitch, Lucy, Becky and Mario sitting around a table. Afton was on the stage singing. Afton finished the song and the audience applauded. Afton smiled at the crowded room and said, “Thank you. I’ll be taking a short break now so enjoy your drinks and I’ll be right back!” Afton walked over to the table and sat down.

“You’re really great Afton,” Lucy paid her sister in law a compliment, “You know I once wanted to be a singer. Not that JR would let me, but even if I would have, I would never have been as good as you!”

“Thank you Lucy,” Afton smiled. “It means a lot to hear you say that.”

“Well she’s right sis. You just wait and see, today the club, tomorrow Madison Square Garden!” Mitch said encouragingly.

“Oh Mitch,” Afton smiled even wider.

However her smile faded as Mario said, “Well it’s a nice dream but not very realistic. Seriously you would have it much better with a real job or at home!”

Mitch and Lucy exchanged a look and Becky said, “I think mommy is great! I hope to be a successful singer too one day.”

Afton smiled at her but Mario said patronizing, “You really should have higher goals child. An ivy league school would not approve such an unserious profession.”

Mitch folded his arms and said, “Nothing saying Becky have to go to Ivy League if she doesn’t want to. I went to SMU and it’s a great school.”

“Really and what is your profession then?” Mario asked.

“Mitch happens to be a doctor,” Lucy said.

Mario nodded approvingly, “That’s a good profession. Are you a specialist?”

“Yes plastic surgery,” Mitch replied. “I managed the burn unit at the hospital in Atlanta.”

Mario twitched and said, “Oh! How…repulsive!” Then he turned to Afton and said, “Darling it’s been a lovely evening but I got an early golf run in the morning so I think I better call it a night.”

“But darling you just got here half an hour ago!” Afton objected.

“I know but I need to be rested. Nice meeting you!”

“You too,” Mitch stood up to shake hands with Mario.

But he pretended not to notice and turned to Afton instead. Mario gave her a peak on the cheek and said, “I’ll call you. Bye!” Mario left and Mitch turned to Afton with a concerned look.

Afton quickly said, “I have to get back on stage!” Then she left too.

Mitch sat down and Lucy said, “Wow that Mario was really a jerk.”

“Jerk? He’s an idiot!” Becky said and Mitch looked even more worried.
 

Karin

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Thanks for the feedback Tommie. :)

Yeah you are right Mario is not a catch that's for sure!

Here's tonight's update:


In Houston were Bobby and Pam coming in thru the hotel door after their business dinner with Guzzler. They were both happily intoxicated from a little too many drinks. “Admit that you had fun tonight Pam?”

“Alright, I admit it. It was a nicer evening than I thought,” Pam agreed. “But I still don’t understand how you could buy that company from that joker, he’s rude and don’t you remember how he tried to fool you back in 1978?”

“Oh come on Pammy that was ages ago,” Bobby brushed it off.

“Well some animals never changes,” Pam said. “I’m willing to bet you that there’s something fishy in that contract.”

“Oh so what are you willing to stake?” Bobby asked teasingly.

“How about 200 dollars?”

“Hey that’s no fun, money means nothing…I want you to upper the stakes,” Bobby whispered seductively, as he wrapped his arms around Pam.

“Bobby stop, I’m serious,” Pam tried to wrangle out of his arms.

“So am I,” Bobby said before he placed a kiss behind Pam’s earlobe.

“Mm…I can see that…” Pam’s resolve started to weaken.

“So I ask again what are you willing to bet?” Bobby wondered, as he started kissing his way down Pam’s neck.

“Oh…are you trying to make me forget all about business?”

“Who me?” Bobby asked innocently. “No of course not, if you want me to stop so we can read through the contract right now just say so,” he then added teasingly.

“Oh I think that can wait until tomorrow.”

“Smart choice, I mean why spoil our evening with that?” Bobby asked. “When we could be doing…” Bobby whispered something in Pam’s ear and she laughed before she turned around and kissed him. They kept kissing passionately, as they started to undress each other and moved towards the bed…
 

Presea

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I think it's time for Afton to dump Mario. He is dull as dishwater, and now he is also a jerk. I wish that Cliff would quit palling around with Marilee already and get back to Afton and Becky. Maybe then Afton would give up on Mario.

The Bobby and Pam update was cute, but just how long do they want to stay in Houston? They could have been doing fireworks with their kids at Southfork on the 4th of July, and they need to know that their siblings caused some major heck while they were away.
 
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Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. :)

Pammy, Bobby and Pam will head back to Southfork in the next episode... :)

Presea, I think the reason Bobby and Pam wasn't back for 4th of July was because they had a business meeting with Guzzler booked later that week.
They will be heading back to Southfork at the end of the week.
I agree with you about Mario, he sure is annoying. But unfortunately Afton is in love with him so she can't really see his faults.

Okay here's another update and it's a double treat tonight:


At a bar in downtown Dallas, Randy stepped in dressed in leather pants and a leather jacket. He walked over towards a group of guys in their mid-20s. They were his old friends from High School. One of them called out, “Randy hi man great to see you.”

“You too,” Randy replied and the guys hugged.

“So why so late?” Dex asked. “Did someone tried to keep you from coming here?”

“Nah…or maybe a little,” Randy said.

The guys smiled and one said, “Spent some time in bed, huh?”

“Come on man, on a scale 1-10, how is she?” Dex asked.

“Hot ten man!” Randy grinned. “So anyone’s in for a game of pool?” Then he turned to the waitress, “Give me a beer darling.”

“Make that two,” Dex said. “So pool, 2 bucks a ball as back in the old days?”

“Yeah,” Randy said and grabbed a beer bottle.
 

Karin

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The next morning at the hotel in Houston. Bobby was already in the shower when Pam woke up. Pam got out of bed and put on her robe. Then she picked up the pile of clothes that they’d left on the floor last night. Pam smiled as she remembered how she and Bobby had spent yet another night making passionate love. However her smile faded away when the contract fell out of Bobby’s suit pocket. Pam hesitated for a moment before she decided to have a look at it. She was not really snooping. She was just looking out for Bobby’s best interests. But as Pam read the contract she looked concerned. After getting to page two of it she called out, “Bobby!” when there was no answer, she walked over towards the bathroom door and walked into the bathroom. “Bobby,” she repeated.

Bobby turned off the water and peaked out through the shower door, “Good morning,” Bobby smiled. “Would you care to join me in the shower?”

“No and it’s not a good morning,” Pam replied.

Seeing the concerned look on her face Bobby realized that something was wrong. “What’s the matter?” Bobby asked, as he stepped out of the shower and grabbed a towel “Is something wrong with the kids?”

“No it’s not the kids,” Pam said.

“What is it then?” Bobby asked.

“Here, read this,” Pam handed Bobby the contract.

“What is it?” Bobby asked as they stepped out of the bathroom.

“Guzzler’s contract,” Pam informed Bobby as he started to read the papers.

When he got to page two of the contract Bobby was disappointed. He had suspected that Guzzler might be in trouble and he didn't mind helping an old friend. But there was a limit even to his good will and Guzzler had really pushed the envelope with this deal. “Damn! This is one hell of a rip off!” Bobby exclaimed as he rushed towards the phone.

“Who are you calling?”

“The bank, I’ll better have that check stopped,” Bobby explained, as he called up Cattleman’s bank in Dallas. Once he got his banker on the phone he said. “Oh yeah I’m calling about a check I wrote last night…yes it’s the one to Taylor Bennett…I was wondering if you could have it stopped immediately?” Bobby’s facial expression got even angrier when he listened to what the banker had to say. “What do you mean there’s nothing you can do?” Bobby yelled. “Oh I’ll see, oh well thanks for nothing” Bobby hung up the phone.

“Let me guess it’s already been cashed in?” Pam asked.

“You’ve got it. Damn it! How could Guzzler do this to me?” Bobby said angrily. “I mean I thought he was my friend.”

“Well I’m sure that he was, but that was 25 years ago and people changes Bobby…”

“Yeah but that man was like an older brother to me Pam. Never in my wildest imagination could I have imagined that he would sell me an oil company with 20 million dollars in debts…”

“Yeah and don’t forget that its only asset is one oil field that produces 1000 barrels of oil a year!”

“Don’t remind me,” Bobby sighed.

“I’m sorry Bobby,” Pam said. “But you really should have read the papers before signing.”

“Oh yeah, I wish I had listened to you now. Seems like you were right all the time,” Bobby sighed. “But how could you know that I should have read them?”

“Oh I don’t know call it female intuition.”

Bobby made a face. “Don’t give me that crap.”

“Alright then, let’s just chalk it up to experience,” Pam amended.

“But I don’t get it. I have more experience of the oil business than you do and my daddy always told me that the best deals are the ones that are made with just a handshake.”

“Bobby a lot has changed since Jock’s time,” Pam reminded him.

“I guess you are right, but I still don’t understand how people can be so rotten.”

“Well I guess it’s just me and you that are too honest huh?”

“What’s wrong with that?”

“Nothing except that others takes advantage of us. Like do you remember that letter Katherine read you?”

“Yeah it's not something you forget,” Bobby sighed, “but what does that have to do with anything?”

“Well everything,” Pam paused before explaining. “You’ll see if I had read the letter before signing I wouldn’t have signed it.”

“I see,” Bobby sighed.

“So yeah let’s just say that after I realized that my own sister had fooled me in order to break up our marriage I knew that you can’t really sign anything without reading it first.”

“You’re right. I can see why Katharine taught you not to trust people after what she did to us.”

“Yeah but let’s not forget about JR’s role in all this…”

“Oh damn it! I almost forgot about JR!” Bobby exclaimed. “I mean how am I going to tell him I’ve made the worst deal ever?” Bobby frowned. “He’s going to be pissed.”

“Oh I wouldn’t be too worried about JR if I were you. I bet he’ll find some poor sucker to re-sell the company to and still make a profit.”

“Yeah I guess you’d better call Cliff when we get back and give him a fair warning,” Bobby joked.

Pam patted him on the arm, “Oh Bobby you’re horrible. I mean this deal is such a stinker that even Cliff will see right through it.”

“I guess you’re right” Bobby said. “This deal really is that bad.”

“It is,” Pam nodded before she suddenly cracked up laughing.

“What?”

“Oh I was just imagining JR’s face when he finds out,” Pam laughed and although Bobby was not looking forward to tell JR about the news, Pam’s laugh was contagious and soon Bobby was laughing too about the whole absurdity of this deal gone wrong…
 

Jessie

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Love all the recent updates.

The boys golfing with Miss Ellie. I love how Miss Ellie stuck up for the boys but at the same time knew she needed to get out of there fast.

I loved the scenes with Rebecca , Margaret and JR.

I'm looking forward to see what happens when the movie is released in the States. It will at least end Sue Ellen's and Don's marriage.

I'm looking forward to Jenna showing up but more to see how Lucas will act with Bobby.

Sad Guzzler ripped Bobby off but not reading the documents like Pam was telling him to was a stupid thing to do.

Great story Karin and Jenny❤️❤️
 
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Ms Southworth

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Great update from Afton's workplace! :clap:
I loved how both Lucy and Mitch supported Afton in regards to her singing career. :kiss: It's what Afton really loves doing, so how could you not support that? :wink@

The reference to Lucy's short-lived dream of a singing career was really precious! :danc: Although JR's intentions might have been right, his ways to go about it were completely wrong! :frustration:

I really disliked not only how Mario kept putting Afton down with nasty and hurtful remarks about how she makes a living, but also that he could only spare half an hour on the woman he's supposed to be in love with! Honestly Afton, wake up and smell the coffee ... Mario needs to go!!! Hopefully, Becky is smart enough to see that Mario's behavior is completely unacceptable! I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Becky will help her mom see the light soon!

Keep up the great work, Karin and Jenny! :best: I love this fanfic! :kiss::kiss::kiss:
 

Ms Southworth

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Great scene with Bobby and Pam coming home from the business meeting with Guzzler! :loveit: It had so much of the very best Dallas seasons hanging over it! :bravo: I love Bobby's boyish charm and his ways of seducing Pam with sweet kisses and remarks! I especially came to think of a particular scene in season three or four! :fantastic: Your imaginative writing definitely deserves 10 out of 10 points! :10::10::10::10::10:

I'm gonna take a wild guess that Pam never told Bobby back in 1978 that Guzzler had tried to kiss her and get her in the sack. :think: If Bobby'd known that, he might have reacted somewhat differently when seeing his old friend again. ;) But if I'd been Pam, I probably would have kept that unfortunate incident to myself too, since it would only have hurt Bobby to know that his friend would sink that low!

It's a bit unfortunate that the bet got lost in Bobby kissing and seducing Pam (unless of course, it was included in whatever he wispered into her ear ... ...)! :kiss: What if he'd said something to this extent: "Honey, I'll bet you that I can take the both of us to 7th heaven and back in less than 30 minutes!" :wink@ Of course, Pam wouldn't have argued with that! :giggle: Like Karin and Jenny wrote, Pam would just have smiled and laughed and turned around and let him have his way! :kiss::kiss::kiss:

I'm so in love with this fanfic! :kiss: Please continue all your hard work! :bowing :best:

PS. I can't help but wonder when all of this bliss and happiness that Bobby and Pam are sharing right now will come to a complete stop! When will the "skeletons" fall out of the closet? When will untold stuff from their years apart be revealed? I hope that it won't happen for a while yet ... and certainly not until a seed has been planted and begun its journey of 266 days! :wink@
 
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