Dallas in the 90's

Jessie

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Awesome updates Karin and Jenny❤️

The movie is being released this is going to cause a lot of problems for a lot of people. You would think Cliff would realize he would not be portrayed really good in a movie about Sue Ellen and JR's life.

Rebecca and JR scenes are cute. I think JR is starting to really like her. I'm sure Bobby and Pam will find out about the Doctors appointment.

It is sad the kids get involved in adult issues when their parents argue in front of them.

I love the Ray and Donna scenes, I hope they get back together. I love the bond between Clayton and Ray.

John Ross's girlfriend is cute sad she witnessed JR and Sue Ellen fighting.

I love your story hope you update again soon.
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :)

Honkytonkangel, I'm glad that you're enjoying that Afton and Cliff get to watch and react to Sue Ellen's movie. You will find out what they think of the movie after they have seen it. ;)
I'm also delighted to hear that you're enjoying John Ross date so far...

Ms Southworth,
you make an interesting point about how Melissa might let John Ross win on purpose...
Also the trampoline was there on the show. Bobby made Christopher jump canon balls from it up to the roof in this scene:

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Cool that you enjoy the mentionings of the Ewing family's past. Melissa has really been thrown right into it...

Jessie, I am delighted to see that you've caught up again. :)
You're right about Cliff. He should have known he'd be in the movie too!

Well Melissa is not really John Ross girlfriend just yet. It's just their first date...

It seems to me like the kids on Dallas always got affected by their parents complicated lives though. It's sad but that's in tune with how the show was and sadly in real life the kids also suffers when the parents argue, divorce, get remarried etc.

Tommie, I'm glad you like Rebecca. :)

Okay so it's time for an update and since you all were so good with the feedback I'll give you a double treat tonight:


At Wade’s rented house were Charlie and Randy getting ready to leave for their double date when Lucas came down the stairs. Charlie popped her head into the living room where Jenna was reading the newspaper and said, “Okay mom we’re leaving now”

“Okay have fun and you Randy be careful,” Jenna said.

“Relax, I’ve been driving those cars before,” Randy said.

“Did someone say something about driving a car?” Lucas perked up.

“No,” Charlie hurried to shake her head since she didn’t want Lucas to know where they were going.

But Randy didn’t pick up on it so he said, “Yeah we’re going to the racetrack…”

Lucas eyes widened as he realized, “Oh then you’ll have to take me. I’m a great go-cart driver.”

“Oh I don’t think so,” Charlie said.

“Oh come on the kid deserves some fun, he could ride in the car with me,” Randy offered.

“Great, can I mom?” Lucas turned to his mother with such an excited look on his face that Jenna felt really bad about crushing his hopes. Yet she shook her head since she didn't want her son killed on the race track.

“Absolutely not.”

“But mom! I’ve always wanted to go in a big car,” Lucas objected.

“I said no, it’s dangerous,” Jenna insisted.

“But if it’s so dangerous why can Charlie and Randy go?”

“Because I ain’t going in no stupid car,” Charlie said.

“But then I can come and just watch?” Lucas asked.

“No,” Charlie said.

“But daddy let me watch the race in Monaco,” Lucas whined.

“Yeah but your daddy’s not here and Charlie doesn’t wanna babysit you,” Jenna said.

“I can take care of myself,” Lucas insisted.

“Lucas, we’re not discussing this any further, you’re not going and that’s it,” Jenna said strictly.

“But I wanna go, I love cars!” Lucas started to cry.

“Stop it kiddo, your tears don’t work on me,” Charlie said harshly.

“Mom Charlie’s mean to me!” Lucas cried.

“Am not and we’re leaving, goodbye!” Charlie said and turned to walk out the door. Once she realized that her boyfriend wasn't following her as he was feeling bad for her little brother she nudged his arm, “Come on Randy.”

“IT’S NOT FAIR. I WANNA GO…” Lucas cried and Randy sighed before he followed Charlie out of the house and the last thing they heard was Lucas crying and screaming…
 
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Karin

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Out on Southfork ranch were Ray and Donna riding their horses as fast as they could across the land. They were wearing cowboy hats and the wind was blowing in their hair. They rode into a grove where they finally stopped in front of a big oak tree, where they got off the horses. Donna said triumphantly, “See I told you I could beat you!”

“Oh yeah, how do you know you really beat me, maybe I just let you win?” Ray teased her.

“Oh Ray Krebbs you are just hopeless, don’t you know that?”

“I know,” Ray smiled. “So how about some snack before we head back?”

“Good idea,” Donna said and took out a couple of sandwiches and some beer bottles from the packing behind her saddle. “Here have a sandwich and some beer,” Donna gave Ray one of the bottles and two sandwiches.

“You really think of everything,” Ray said as they sat down below the tree.

“Well I try,” Donna said, as they uncorked the bottles.

“So let’s toast.”

“Sure to what?”

“To the winner,” Ray smiled.

“You mean me?”

“Yep, but I want a rematch when we’ll head back.”

“Sounds fair enough.”

“Good, so here’s to you Donna. You’re a hell of a woman and I’m glad to have you back in my life,” Ray smiled.

“Thanks Ray so am I,” Donna replied before they clicked their beer bottles together and drank straight from the bottle without a glass. Sitting there together they both forgot about everything else for a while, as they wished that life could always be like this.
 

Ms Southworth

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Also the trampoline was there on the show. Bobby made Christopher jump canon balls from it up to the roof in this scene:

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LOL ... Now I'm really glad that I brought it up, since I had a quite different "picture" in my head of the Southfork pool area after reading yesterday's update! :giggle:

IMO, Christopher is diving off a springboard ... ... and not a trampoline! :giggle:
And I hope that you (@Karin Schill) are laughing along with me at this point! :rolling:
 

Ms Southworth

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I googled trampoline and I see what you mean now! :haha:

I guess it's the Swedish word "trampolin" that had me confused. What Americans call a trampoline we call "studsmatta".

I think the correct word for this story should be "diving board" though...
On the Olympic webpage (under various diving disciplines), they call it a springboard, i.e. "3 M springboard", "5 M springboard", etc. :cooler:

Interesting though, that the swedes seem to have come up with their "own" word for a trampoline.

I just googled what a trampoline would be called in italian, french, german, spanish, danish, norwegian, polish, etc. And in every single case, the word is identical or almost identical to "trampoline"! ;) Even in islandic, it's called a trampoline! :D
 

Ms Southworth

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Thank you so much for the "double scoop" today! :bravo:

Great update! :) (... ... although I'm feeling sad at this point! :()

I feel so bad for Lucas! :cry: I really think that Jenna and Charlie should have worked out a way for Lucas to get to go to the racetrack! :frustration: Poor judgement on their part, IMO! :r&r: And I especially hold Jenna responsible, since she's Lucas' mother! Why couldn't Jenna give her son a (perhaps) once in a lifetime experience? :bang: Lucas could just watch and didn't have to drive at all! ;)

Too bad that Randy's opinion wasn't taken into consideration, because he's acting like a better brother to Lucas than Charlie is at being Lucas' sister (if that makes sense! :cool1 ). Randy, let me give a piece of advice! You need to man up and take a stand! :gotcha: That little boy needs you! :yep: Stop letting Charlie bully you around! :mo: Grow some hair in your chest!!! :hair:

On a personal note, I'm not into cars or trucks or any other kind of vehicles (except for traditional transportation of myself and my family), but I have taken my son to a tractorpulling event! And my son loved it and still talks about it to this day! :gotcha: You might find it amusing that I found out that tractorpulling was actually rather entertaining (although also very noisy)! ;) Anyway, I'm glad that my son sees me as "mom of the year", because I was willing to move my "boundaries" and take him to an event that I (deep down) knew that my son would go crazy over! :wink@

Please update sooner rather than later! :loveit:
 
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Ms Southworth

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The second update about Ray and Donna going for a ride was just as amazing and every little bit romantic as I'd hoped! :kiss:

Great writing in this update! :bravo: Thus, I give you 10 out of 10 points! :10::10:


I had to chuckle when I read Ray's comment to Donna winning the race: “Oh yeah, how do you know you really beat me, maybe I just let you win?” Ray teased her. :kiss:

I love Ray's words to Donna: “... ... You’re a hell of a woman and I’m glad to have you back in my life ...”. :hug:

And to top things off, you gave us the perfect ending: "Sitting there together they both forgot about everything else for a while, as they wished that life could always be like this." :dance: :wink@

Oh, wait a minute ... ... :( I just realized that this scene could also be the scene that leads up to the long awaited showdown at Southfork where Jenna finally shows up (thus ruining the magical day that Ray and Donna has just shared!) :scream: Oh please, Karin and Jenny ... ... let the Cowboy and the Lady have this day to look back on with fond memories (instead of it being "ruined" by Ray's soon-to-be ex-wife)! :mo: :a2:

I can hardly wait to see what happens next! :jolly: One of these days, I'm going to have to make a list of all the storylines that have us longing for you to speed this up! :thinks: I have a feeling that the list is going to be long! :wait:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :bowing :best:
 
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Karin

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Thank you for the feedback. :)

Ms Southworth, you make a good point why Jenna should let Lucas go to the race track. At least Randy is being nice to him.
I'm glad that you found so much to enjoy in the Ray and Donna update. Also I wouldn't worry about Jenna if I were you as she still thinks Ray is visiting Donna and Margaret in Washington. Still that she refuses to call him there says a lot about the state of their marriage! :(

You know I would love to read that list of storylines that you long to read more about that you mentioned. It would be interesting to see what's caught your interest... ;)

Sanda, I am very pleased to hear that you still enjoy this story so much. I know Bobby and Pam are your favorite couple and you will certainly see a lot more of them in the next episode. This episode however is more centered around events that are happening at Southfork and since they are away on a business trip they are a little removed from the other plots at the moment. So this episode is more centered on JR/SE and John Ross/Melissa. However once Bobby and Pam do appear again I have a feeling you are going to be pleased with what's happening...:kiss:

Okay so here's tonight's update:


Back at the ranch were John Ross, Melissa, JR, Sue Ellen, Miss Ellie and Clayton sitting down at the outdoors table. They were drinking lemonade and eating cookies. “These cookies are really delicious Mrs. Ewing,” Melissa said politely and took a bite of her cookie.

“Thanks but I didn’t bake them,” Sue Ellen said.

“I know, Mrs. Lockwood, I was talking to John Ross’ grandma,” Melissa smiled.

“Oh,” Sue Ellen blushed, as she realized that she automatically thought of herself as Mrs. Ewing. To make matters worse JR gave her his shit eating grin.

“Thanks child, but actually it’s Mrs. Farlow,” Miss Ellie said.

“Oh I’m sorry but I thought you were John Ross’ grandpa,” Melissa looked at Clayton.

“Well he is like my grandpa,” John Ross said.

“Thanks John Ross,” Clayton smiled.

“But he sure as hell ain’t my father,” JR said.

“My first husband died when John Ross was just a little boy,” Miss Ellie explained.

“Yeah I don’t really remember him much,” John Ross said.

“I’m sorry to hear that, so how did he die?” Melissa asked and it got silent around the table as the older Ewings thought back of that awful barbeque in 1982 when they’d heard that Jock’s chopper had gone down. It got uncomfortably silent around the table as no one wanted to talk about that. It was especially hard for JR and Miss Ellie.

Eventually Clayton said, “It was a helicopter crash in South America.”

“Oh that’s horrible,” Melissa said.

“It was,” Miss Ellie nodded as she tried to push the unwanted memories away. Most days it didn’t hurt to talk about Jock anymore, but today it did. “Oh well if you’ll excuse me I think I’ll better go check if the pie I put in the oven is done.” Miss Ellie got up and left.

“Aw I think I upset your grandma,” Melissa commented. “I’m sorry I didn’t mean to.”

“What do you mean she was just going to go check on the pie?” John Ross didn’t get it.

“No, John Ross, that was just an excuse to go away,” Sue Ellen said and when John Ross looked like a question mark she went on. “I’m sorry Clayton, but she still misses him.”

“We all do,” JR said. “And today’s especially hard on mama.”

“What’s so special about today?” Clayton asked.

“It’s the day they got engaged,” JR said.

“Oh, I’ll better go check on Ellie,” Clayton said.

Melissa sighed, as the older man also left the table. Because that meant that she and John Ross were stuck with only his parents and after the conversation she had overheard between them earlier this afternoon, she found that embarrassing. Just looking at the way JR and Sue Ellen glared at each other made Melissa feel uncomfortable.

Luckily his parents knew better than to bring it up as JR asked her, “So Melissa, John Ross told me that you’re originally from San Francisco. So how do you like it here in Dallas?”

“Fine Mr. Ewing, I’ve only been here a couple of weeks but I’ve already made some new friends and I’ve found myself a summer job.”

“Well good,” JR nodded approvingly.

It got silent for a moment, before Melissa started talking about the only thing she knew that JR and Sue Ellen had in common. “So your son’s really good at diving, he keeps beating me all the time.”

“Well he is a Ewing,” JR grinned proudly.

“I’d better warn you that all Ewing men have a competitive side,” Sue Ellen said.

“So was it you who taught John Ross how to swim and dive?” Melissa asked JR.

“Yes,” JR nodded.

“That’s funny, because I thought it was…Peter Richards…” John Ross spat out the name angrily. “Wasn’t it mama?” He then added to see how Sue Ellen reacted.

Unfortunately his mom got uncomfortable from the mentioning of that name, which added to John Ross’ suspicions that his dad was right. “No you remember it wrong, it was your dad,” Sue Ellen insisted, hoping to nip this conversation in the bud.

“Yeah son don’t you remember when I taught you how to swim?”

“Only vaguely,” John Ross replied.

“Well I remember it like it was yesterday,” Sue Ellen said warmly and turned to JR. “In fact I was thinking about it just the other day when I saw you in the pool with Rebecca.”

“Oh did you?”

“Yeah you’ve always been a wonderful father,” Sue Ellen acknowledged.

JR smiled, “Too bad I wasn’t a better husband huh?”

“JR don’t start again…I thought I told you earlier that…”

“Who’s Peter Richards?” Melissa interrupted, as the last thing she wanted was to listen to another one of John Ross’ parents’ perverse fights. Unfortunately her innocent question just opened up another can of worms as the tension around the table intensified.

“Nobody of importance,” Sue Ellen hurried to say. “He was just John Ross’ camp counselor at a summer day camp that he went to when he was like 5.”

“Summer camps are fun. I remember my parents sent me to one when I was 8,” Melissa smiled. “Did you enjoy yours too?”

“No a damn child-shrink recommended me to go there,” John Ross said bitterly.

“Oh come on don’t be like that, I remember you loved that summer camp. You even wanted to spend time with Peter in your spare time, so your dad invited him here to play with you,” Sue Ellen said.

“Are you sure he wasn’t here to play with you?” John Ross asked bitterly.

Sue Ellen tensed, “Of course not, darling. Peter really liked you,” Sue Ellen insisted.

“Sure but I bet he liked you more mama,” John Ross insisted.

Sue Ellen gave JR a look that could kill and JR cleared his throat, “John Ross that was uncalled for. Peter was here to spend time with you. I mean to think that a college boy like that would be interested in your mother is absurd.”

“But if that’s so absurd, why did you accuse mom of having an affair with Peter the other day?” John Ross asked and Melissa and Sue Ellen both shifted uncomfortably.

JR sighed before he said firmly, “Never mind what I said. I shouldn’t have mentioned him. It was a long time ago and really between your mother and me.”

“I’m confused, so did you or didn’t you have an affair with Peter?” John Ross asked.

“It wasn’t an affair. It was just a mistake…” Sue Ellen said.

John Ross frowned, “I don’t understand…”

“She means it was a misunderstanding,” JR clarified. “Your mother spent some time with Peter and I got jealous. That’s all.”

“Really?” John Ross asked relieved.

“Yeah,” JR lied. “So I don’t want you to hold what I said against your mama, ok?”

“Okay dad,” John Ross said. “I’m sorry Mama. I should have asked you about this before instead of giving you the cold shoulder.”

“It’s quite alright John Ross, let’s just forget about the whole thing,” Sue Ellen gave JR a grateful look, as she reached out to squeeze his hand as to say thank you.

Melissa frowned when she noticed the gesture.

“Good, so can you forgive me for what happened earlier today too?” JR asked. “I know I came on too strong.”

“Well as long as you won’t do it again, I suppose I can,” Sue Ellen said.

JR smiled gratefully, “I won’t.”

“What happened earlier today?” John Ross asked.

Since Melissa really didn’t wanna talk about that she hurried to change the subject, “John Ross, I’m sorry but, did I hear you right when you said before that you went to a child-psychologist?”

“Yeah,” John Ross sighed.

“Why did you do that?”

“I don’t remember,” John Ross replied. “Maybe you can answer that question?” John Ross looked at his parents who look at each other.

Then Sue Ellen said, “Well I thought it would be good for John Ross to get some professional help. You’ll see he was pretty traumatized after the fire.”

“You were involved in a fire?” Melissa’s eyes widened.

“Yeah, it was awful. I would have died if it wasn’t for daddy and my uncles. They saved my mama and me,” John Ross remembered.

“They did,” Sue Ellen agreed, as she gave JR an appreciative look.

“Wow! So you’re almost like a hero then Mr. Ewing,” Melissa said.

“Well I don’t know about that,” JR smiled. “I just do whatever I have to do to protect my family,” JR brushed it off. “I remember when I noticed the house was on fire all I could think of was to save my wife and son, because life isn’t worth much without them.”

His words touched Sue Ellen more than she would like and she hurried to remove her hand from JR’s. Sue Ellen then said nervously, “I was asleep when the fire started, so I don’t remember much from it. But our part of the house was totally destroyed.”

“I’m sorry,” Melissa said. “I can’t imagine how horrible it must be to lose all your stuff in a fire.”

“Thanks,” Sue Ellen said. “But at least we all survived and that’s what’s most important. Stuff can always be replaced, people can’t.”

“That’s true,” Melissa said thoughtfully.

They went silent for a while before Sue Ellen said, “Well this has been nice, but I think I’m gonna go in and try to call Don now.” Sue Ellen got up. “Besides I’m sure you two would rather wanna be alone,” she then added. Sue Ellen walked inside the house.

JR picked up a newspaper and said, “And I think I’ll just read the paper for a bit.”

John Ross and Melissa exchanged a glance and John Ross said, “Daddy do you have to sit here?”

“Oh I’m sorry, of course not son,” JR said and also got up and left.

Once he had disappeared upstairs John Ross turned to Melissa and said, “So alone at last.”

“I thought they’d never leave,” Melissa smiled.

“I’m sorry for my parents I know they can be a little much.”

“Well they do seem a little strange,” Melissa said.

“So does that mean that I am strange too?”

“No,” Melissa shook her head. “I like you.”

“I like you too,” John Ross smiled and leant forward and kissed Melissa. JR grinned as he was observing them from the balcony where he’d got a front row seat to everything that happened down at the pool.
 
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Ms Southworth

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Ms Southworth,

You know I would love to read that list of storylines that you long to read more about that you mentioned. It would be interesting to see what's caught your interest... ;)
:rlol: ... ... I might just do that when this episode comes to an end! :lolo:

I have no doubt that the list (with episode 1 being the starting point) would be too long to post here, but I could mail it to you! ;)
 

Ms Southworth

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Today's update was outstanding! :10::10::10::10::10::10:

Gotta love Sue Ellen for being confused about her current last name! :giggle: It's a good thing that she's not sleeping next to the man she's married to! What if she happened to let the "wrong" first name slip? :lol: Like I said the other day, JR is "hauling" her in - inch by inch - and loving every minute of it! :D

I'm very impressed with JR remembering the date of his parents' engagement! :gotcha: I'm also impressed with how he had Sue Ellen's back after they'd argued over the status of Sue Ellen and Peter Richards' relationship! :cooler:

Melissa noticed how Sue Ellen thanked JR for the support, i.e. squeezing of his hand! But what does it mean? :think: Will she "witness" more future interaction between Sue Ellen and JR (that no one else knows about)? :confuse: Go figure why Melissa at this point thinks that John Ross' parents come across as being a little strange! :lolo:

I loved all the references to storylines from the glory years of "Dallas":
  • Miss Ellie's marriage to Clayton (and JR's dislike of him)
  • Jock's passing (and the search for him in South America)
  • Sue Ellen / Peter Richards
  • John Ross / Peter Richards
  • John Ross seeing a child-psychologist
  • JR's poor marriage skills
  • JR's great fatherhood skills
  • The horrible fire at Southfork.
Go John Ross!!! :bravo: “Daddy do you have to sit here?” :giggle: “So alone at last.”

Overall, an amazing update! :wink@ I don't even want to begin to think about how much time it must have taken to write that scene! :loveit: Great job! :jolly:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :best:
 
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Honkytonkangel

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John Ross can really be a brat sometimes, though I do get how hard he has had it. it does seem to me that he's putting way to much focus and blame at the moment on the things that Sue Ellen did. I'm proud of Sue Ellen for trying to shut the conversation down and also not retaliating by telling him all about Holly.
Loved that JR stuck up for Sue Ellen here (though obviously I wish he'd kept his mouth shut in the first place) and loved how Sue Ellen squeezed his hand to say thank you.
Sue Ellen's confusion over her last name was funny and it's obviously a sign from the universe sent through Melissa that she needs to ditch the name and the husband pronto. (though can you go back to using a previous married name?).
I still feel bad for Melissa, she really has been thrown into the deep end and learned WAY too much about the family for a first date LOL.
But it's very cool to have these scenes throwback to classic Dallas moments before the writers lost the plot.
Also because I forgot to comment last time loved seeing Ray and Donna together happy and having fun and I still hate Jenna and her whiny kids, especially because once they FINALLY get to Southfork that is gonna be ruined.
Can't wait to see what else is in store for all of them.
 

Honkytonkangel

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Another thing I forgot (I'm getting old) LOL at JR planning to keep crashing JRo and Melissa's date by reading the paper and then spying on them from the balcony.
And boo at Sue Ellen phoning Don (unless it to say the divorce is on, then YAY) and I think I'm done now.
 

Presea

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I feel so sorry for Lucas! Jenna and Charlie are jerks right now for putting their own little dramas ahead of him. Jenna can't get herself together, and Charlie only seems to care about Randy. And I really hate the way Charlie talks to Lucas. He is her brother and she treats him like garbage! Randy is the only one who seems to care about Lucas right now.

I'm thinking that John Ross and Melissa need a date AWAY from the adults. They are discussing topics that they really shouldn't be in front of guests. Sue Ellen was a bit better here, and she and JR did kind of save face eventually. But JR looked like a big baby when he complained about Clayton. He's a grown man, and he should be used to it now. If I was Miss Ellie, I would have just told him that he is welcome to move out if he can't handle her remarriage. But more than anything, I'm disappointed in John Ross. I can't believe he that he has no problem with bringing up his mother's affair and his own treatment with a child psychologist in front of his girlfriend so soon after they met. Isn't he embarrassed about all of his whining? Melissa is a lot more mature than him and JR and Sue Ellen, and they are all pretty darn lucky for that, because I would have dumped John Ross and ran from his mostly screwed-up family as fast as I could after that! Lol. I did feel sorry for Miss Ellie, though. Even though I like her with Clayton better, I liked the reference to Jock here.

So, how about some more Katherine scenes?
 

Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :)

Ms Southworth, I wouldn't mind you posting a list of the storylines here as that way other fans could also see it and comment on it!
I always love a good discussion around whatever topics my fanfic brings up. ;)

I'm glad you thought the latest update was outstanding. :)
Oh yeah I bet Don would be thrilled if Sue Ellen happened to say JR's name in her sleep. :lolo:
You're right that JR is doing his best to haul her in again...
Honestly I don't know how long it took me to write this scene. I think it's an add on scene that I wrote later and whenever I write I tend to loose track of time and place as I enter the world of the characters and I just love to write. So even if two-three hours pass by I never notice it until I look at my watch and realize how late it's gotten.:giggle:

Honkytonkangel, I'm glad that you enjoyed the JR/SE interactions in the last scene so much. Things are starting to warm up between them. :)
I agree that Melissa has learnt way more about John Ross family on a first date than I ever would want to learn on a first date! :lolo:
Good question if you can take back a previously married name or not. But I do know that Alexis Colby on Dynasty kept going back to Colby after her divorces from Dex Dexter and Sean Rowan. So if that's anything to go on I'd say you can do that!

Presea, yeah poor Lucas doesn't have it so easy right now. Things will get better for him. But it will take time as right now he is feeling lost and confused and neglected by his mother and sister. :(

Good point about John Ross and Melissa. They could really use some alone time away from his family and yes Melissa is more mature than John Ross in some aspects.
Funny how you would have dumped John Ross and ran away from his family if you were her. I must say that I can see why! :rlol:

Then as for Katherine, there are plenty of more scenes with her in this story but not in this episode I'm afraid.

Okay so update time:

Miss Ellie was crushing coffee beans with a pestle in a mortar when Clayton found her in the kitchen. He could tell just from watching her that she was upset as she was obviously taking out her frustration on the coffee beans. He called her attention, “Ellie?”

Miss Ellie hurried to dry off the tears on her cheeks as she didn’t want Clayton to see that she had been crying, “Yes Clayton?”

“Are you okay?” Clayton asked.

“I will be,” Miss Ellie replied.

They went quiet for a moment as Clayton walked up to her. “JR mentioned that today’s the anniversary of the day you got engaged to Jock, is that true?”

“Yes,” Miss Ellie nodded.

“Okay, so do you wanna talk about it?” Clayton asked.

“I think it’s better we don’t. As I don’t want to hurt you,” Miss Ellie replied.

“Ellie, I knew about your past when I married you,” Clayton said as she put his hands on her shoulders. “Whatever was between you and Jock is in the past and can’t affect what you and I have.”

“Are you sure about that?” Miss Ellie asked, as she turned around so she faced him.

“Yeah I’m sure,” Clayton nodded. “It’s okay to admit that you miss him Ellie.”

“Well I do,” Miss Ellie finally said. “I sometimes wonder why it had to end that way.”

“I know, I do too…I mean with Amy. Sometimes I wonder why she was the one who died in the fire and not I,” Clayton confided.

Miss Ellie nodded, “I know the feeling, sometimes I blame myself for letting Jock go off to South America without me.”

“It’s not your fault. There’s nothing you could have done to stop that chopper from going down.”

“Maybe not, but a part of me feels like I should have been there.”

“I know. I feel the same way about when the Southern Cross burned down, that if I’d only been there I could have saved Amy.”

“I know but it’s not your fault she died,” Miss Ellie gently touched Clayton’s cheek. “It was Jessica who started that fire, remember?”

“Yeah but that doesn’t make it hurt any less, I mean she’s my sister and there was a time when I loved her very much too.”

“I know it makes your loss double,” Miss Ellie said emotionally.

“It does.”

“If you want maybe we could visit Jessie some day. Is she still at that mental institution?”

“As far as I know,” Clayton replied. “And thanks but I think it’s better we don’t as the woman’s clearly insane and doesn’t like you.”

“Well I don’t want to see her. I’m just saying I could go with you to the psych ward if you want to see her and wait outside.”

“Oh Ellie, you’re amazing. I thank God that you came into my life.”

“I know, I do too,” Miss Ellie smiled. “You’re a good man Clayton and I do love you.”

“I love you too Ellie,” Clayton replied as he leant forward to give Miss Ellie a short kiss before he took her into his arms. They stayed in the hug for a while, taking comfort in each other’s presence…
 

Karin

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Out on the ranch were Ray and Donna still sitting underneath the oak tree as they talked over their now almost finished beer and sandwiches. Donna could see that there was something on Ray's mind and she wondered what it was he was thinking about when he suddenly blurted out, “So how long do you plan to stay in Dallas?”

She hadn't expected that question but after pondering it for a moment she said, “Well school starts in the end of August. I really don’t see any reason to go back earlier than that.”

“Good that means I’ll get to spend the rest of the summer with Margaret,” Ray smiled.

“So you’re not going back to Italy then?”

“I don’t think so,” Ray replied. “I mean Jenna doesn’t seem to be at the house anyway so what’s the point?”

“I don’t know but someone should look after the house.”

“Are you fishing for a free place to stay in Italy?”

“God no,” Donna shook her head. “I could never stay at the home you share with Jenna. It would make me feel uncomfortable.”

“I know what you mean. I felt really weird visiting you and Andrew in Washington too.”

“Is that why you stopped visiting Margaret?” Donna asked.

“Well partly that, but also because of the distance I guess. I mean Italy is on the other side of the world.”

“That it is, so why did you move there?”

“What kind of question is that?”

“I’m just saying that the Ray Krebbs I know doesn’t belong there.”

“Oh so where do I belong then?”

“Here,” Donna replied.

“With you?” Ray asked, as their eyes met.

“You should be with your family,” Donna said in a hoarse voice. Looking deep into Donna’s blue eyes Ray could feel that she really meant that. He leant forward and for a moment Donna wondered if he was going to kiss her, since he had that look in his eyes. But then he looked away and the moment had passed.

“I think we’d better head back,” Ray said regretfully.

“I think you’re right,” Donna licked her lips nervously, before they got up. Still being able to read her like an open book he knew that she felt the same thing he did and knowing that it could get them into trouble if he acted on it Ray hurried to steer the conversation back on neutral ground.

“Don’t forget that I was going to get a rematch raising you back,” Ray reminded her, as he got up on his horse and she tucked in the empty beer bottles in her bag behind the saddle.

“I remember,” Donna said. “So what are you waiting for cowboy?”

“You,” Ray replied and looking up Donna laughed.

“You’re right, I’d better get up or you’re gonna get a head start and then you’ll be impossible to beat.”

“But not if we start at the same time is that it?” Ray asked.

“We shall see,” Donna replied, as she got up on her horse. “Okay so are you ready?”

“Yeah let’s ride,” Ray replied before they rode off in a hurry…
 

Honkytonkangel

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aww sweet updates. Loved how understanding he was about Jock and Miss Ellie's memories and history, which is why he is my favourite (I totally can't see Jock being that way if things were the other way round) and I also love how Ellie understanding Miss Ellie is with Clayton especially after what that nutjob sister did to them. It's cool that they can talk about things and they are so fabulous and cute together.
Ray and Donna were fabulous here too. Still loving seeing them spending time together and having fun.
As much as I don't want to see her (or hear her whining) a part of me wants Jenna to get there now so Ray will see that they are doomed and Donna is the one he belongs with.
 
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