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Dallas in the 90's

Karin

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The guards had finally managed to break up the fight when Charlie and Randy came into the night club. They were dressed in some old clothes from the late 1980s.

“This theme night was a real fun idea. It sure does bring back old memo…” Charlie interrupted herself as she and Randy stared at the mess in front of them. “What’s happen here?”

“Some old folks came in and the man started fighting,” Marnie explained.

“What?” Randy asked surprised. “Is this a wild place tonight?”

“Yeah you bet Diamond,” Dex said.

“Great fix an eighties night and the old geezers think it’s for them,” Randy said sarcastically. “Well never mind. Let us the kids of the 80’s remember it!”

“Yeah let’s party!” Charlie smiled, when the music started playing again.

“Wanna dance honey?” Randy asked.

“I thought you’d never ask,” Charlie smiled, as they entered the dance floor. Charlie gave Randy a kiss and everyone started dancing again. The party went on.
 

Pammy P

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Great writing and updates, wish this was filmed and broadcast;)
 

Ms Southworth

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Thank you so much for the feedback on my story everyone. I do appreciate your comments. :)
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I guess Donna was just trying to set some bounderies for her daughter. Some parents don't want their kids to jump in their beds. Of course kids being kids they still do that! ;)
The interesting thing is that I can see myself in Donna in that scene; i.e. I’ve acted the exact same way with my children! I wanted to just let my children be children and let them play, especially since they meant no harm and also didn’t come close to breaking anything! But I yelled at my children too to sit down and get ready for their bedtime story! Honestly, I think that it was because I was exhausted from a long day and just wanted bedtime story reading to be over amd done with! And therefore, I yelled even though I shouldn’t have!

The quotes from the end is from an actual book that my mom used to read to me and my sister when we were kids.
No kidding!!! :eek: It’s from a real book? :D I was so convinced that you just made up the fairytale! :cooler:
 

Ms Southworth

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Awesome update from the night club downtown Dallas! :fantastic: Bobby and Pam were lucky that it was 80s night, right? :wink@

LOL ... of course, Pam couldn’t hear Bobby due to the loud music, let alone hear what she was thinking herself! :giggle:

It was sad when Pam sprained her ancle! :( Yet it was also funny that Pam caused a commotion in the entire dance chain! :D

Oh, how I laughed when Bobby lost his temper: “What the hell are you doing with my woman?” :r&r:

I noticed that the young man wasn’t sorry that Pam had hurt herself when being dragged into the chain. He was only sorry for grapping a woman whom he thought was old enough to be his mother! :mad:

It was funny when Pam asked Bobby to “go tell them”, and then he declined due to “the angry mob”! :giggle:

I was happy that Bobby did defend Pam’s honor when the young men (or should I say boys) threatened Pam! :gotcha: And I was even more pleased when Bobby took them down ... ... one by one! :jolly:

I had to roll my eyes at Bobby’s reply to the security guard: “Oh nothing, they just made the mistake of messing with us Ewings!” :rolleyes:

How nice of Bobby to finally show some concern for his fiancé’s well-being! :)

Sorry, but I just cannot picture VP swearing like this: “Yeah it’s just my ankle that hurts like hell”. :(

I’m glad that Bobby and Pam went home to tend to her ancle (and each other)! :spinning:

I look forward to the next update! :clap:
 

Karin

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Thank you for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :)

Pammy, I'm glad to see that you've caught up and that you still wish for this story to have been filmed. It's such a compliment. :)

Ms Southworth, that's cool that you can identify with Donna in that scene. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the disco update and Bobby defending Pam. Then as for the cursing, hell is not such a bad curse word they used it on the show.

Okay so here's tonight's update:

Saturday Morning at Southfork were Miss Ellie, Clayton, JR, Sue Ellen, John Ross, Christopher, Rebecca, Lucy, Mitch, Donna, Ray and Margaret having breakfast on the patio outdoors. Miss Ellie said, “I wonder if Bobby and Pam had fun at the disco last night?”

“They must have, as they got in late,” Clayton said.

“Oh that reminds me,” John Ross turned to his cousin. “Lucy can you drive me to town tonight?” Lucy looked questioningly at John Ross who added. “I’ve got a date.”

“Sure,” Lucy smiled.

“What date?” Sue Ellen raised an eyebrow as this was the first she had heard of it.

“John Ross met an older girl at the movies,” Christopher informed the others.

Sue Ellen gave John Ross a disapproving look, “How much older is she?”

John Ross gave Chris a sore eye before saying, “She’s in college!”

JR grinned, “That’s my boy!”

“John Ross, you remember what I told you?” Ray asked.

“How could he forget?” Christopher rolled his eyes.

“Forget what?” Clayton asked.

“Oh it’s nothing. Uncle Ray just gave me some tips!”

Sue Ellen glared at Ray who excused himself, “It’s not like it sounds. I just talked to the boys about being responsible!”

Sue Ellen shook her head and said, “John Ross wasn’t born yesterday!”

JR grinned, patting John Ross on the shoulder saying, “That’s makes me real glad to hear!”

John Ross grinned. “Thanks dad!”

“So where are you going?” Sue Ellen asked.

“Just to the movies, I’m meeting her there,” John Ross replied.

“Okay. When does it end?”

“Eleven.”

“Great I pick you up then.”

“But Mama…”

“You wanna go on this date or not?”

“Fine, I see you 11.15,” John Ross caved in.

“By the way it’s my birthday soon,” Christopher changed the subject.

“We know so do you want your usual pool party?” Miss Ellie asked.

“I think so, but if you don’t mind grandma, I think I want my mom to help me arrange it this year,” Christopher said.

“Of course you do and don’t worry. I don’t mind at all,” Miss Ellie smiled, when Bobby and Pam finally came out the door. “Good morning Bobby, Pam,”

“Good morning mama,” Bobby replied.

“So Pam how was the disco last night?” Sue Ellen asked.

“Don’t ask,” Pam replied as she sat down.

“Was it that bad?” Donna asked.

“Well let’s just say that things didn’t go exactly as planned,” Bobby replied, as he also sat down.

“I can see that,” JR remarked. “That’s quite some shiner you’ve got there little brother!”

“But Bobby that doesn’t look good,” Miss Ellie exclaimed a bit worried.

“What did you do, get into a fight or something?” Ray asked.

Bobby sighed, “Alright, I guess we’d better tell you about our night out. I must say that things sure have changed since the 1980s…”

“Definitely,” Pam agreed. “Apparently people don’t dance disco anymore. Because when we arrived at the club the kids were dancing…no…groping each other during a slow dance and everywhere people were making out!”

“What’s making out?” Rebecca asked.

It went quiet as Margaret started looking in her dictionary, “Here it is, it’s like kissing but more intense!”

Rebecca smiled, “What’s intense?”

“Yeah what exactly is that?” Margaret asked.

“A long kiss,” Donna replied before turning to Pam. “So what happened then?”

“We started dancing and then we had some drinks and later the music changed to some hip hop song,” Pam replied and Lucy, Mitch, Chris and John Ross started laughing.

“You danced to hip hop?” Christopher looked at his parents in disbelief.

“What’s this hip hop?” Miss Ellie asked.

“Does that mean you hop up and down when you dance?” Clayton asked.

“Well we didn’t but the kids did, both in couples and in a row,” Bobby shook his head. “It was really bizarre!”

“Oh,” John Ross realized something.

“Oh?” Sue Ellen looked at John Ross for an explanation.

“It’s a great dance,” John Ross smiled.

“I don’t think so…” Pam disagreed.

“But Aunt Pam it is,” John Ross insisted. “You can grab any chick into the row to dance with you and you don’t even have to know her!”

“Oh so that’s why someone grabbed Pam,” Bobby said.

“What?” Chris laughed. “But you can’t dance like that mama, or can you?”

“No you’re right partner, she sprained her ankle!” Bobby replied.

“Yeah and some guys were threatening me and that’s why Bobby got into a fight, to protect me!” Pam explained.

“Well that’s my little brother, always fighting for the girls!” JR chuckled, as he remembered other times Bobby had gotten into similar situations in the past and the memories amused him.
 

Presea

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OMG, this was so hilarious! I could totally imagine Bobby just beating the heck out of that angry mob all by himself like he did here! It reminded me of all of the old Bobby fights from the show! And then Miss Ellie and Clayton cracked me up so much with their confusion about hip hop! "What's this hip hop?" "Does that mean you hop up and down when you dance?" LMAO! I'm kind of surprised that JR would congratulate John Ross for a date with a college girl. He always tried for younger women in the show. XD But seriously, he and Sue Ellen shouldn't be allowing this at all. I know that a lot of parents just give up on trying to set any limits once their kids get to certain ages, but this just looks like Bad Parenting 101.
 

Ms Southworth

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Great breakfast scene at Southfork! :jolly: I was always a fan of family meal scenes like this one! And in many ways, it was easy to imagine it being played out for real! :gotcha:

Even though I really liked this scene, I have to wonder why Bobby and Pam didn’t sleep in and instead met up with their family for lunch instead of breakfast! If they really did get home as late as Clayton said they did, I would have thought that it would be difficult (if not impossible) for them to have time to “recuperate” from not only getting to bed really late, but also “recuperate” from a fight and a sprained ancle! :think: After all, they’re not 20 anymore! :D But I know that this is pure (television) fiction, and that everything doesn’t have to make perfect sense! ;)

Great dialogue about John Ross’s date! :clap: I laughed quite a few times! :lolo: Oh Christopher, thumbs up to you for putting your cousin in the “hot seat”! :lol: I laughed at JR’s comment (“That’s my boy!”) the first time, but when he more or less repeated himself a bit later (“That makes me really glad to hear!”), I thought that it showed poor judgement on his part (and thus bad parenting skills like @Presea’s already stated)! :mo:

Ray’s comment about “being responsible” was hilarious, as was Christopher’s rolling eyes! :D:rolleyes: However, I was very surprised at and somewhat disappointed in Sue Ellen’s comment: “John Ross wasn’t born yesterday!” IMO, she patrionized Ray, who was only trying to do right by his nephew! :oops: And why would Sue Ellen offer to pick up John Ross straight after the movie (and IMO, early), if she had complete “faith” in her 16 year old son? :think: It would make sense that John Ross and Paula go for coffee or something to talk after the movie and then he could be picked up at say ... midnight! (But I guess that Sue Ellen is more curious about her son's date than she is worried about his safety!)

I was thrilled to hear that Christopher wants his mom’s help in planning his upcoming birthday party! :dance: Mother and son have come a long way in the past two months or so! :kiss:

Funny conversation about Bobby and Pam’s visit to the disco! :giggle: I liked these comments:
  • JR: “That’s quite some shiner you’ve got there little brother!” :box:
  • Bobby: “I must say that things sure have changed since the 1980s…” o_O
  • Pam: “... ... when we arrived at the club the kids were dancing…no…groping each other during a slow dance and everywhere people were making out!” :oops:
  • Clayton: “Does that mean you hop up and down when you dance?” :merry:

My overall favorite parts of this entire scene have to be when the children asked questions or commented:
  • Rebecca: “What’s making out?” :laughs: and a bit later ... ... “What’s intense?” :haha:
  • Christopher: “You danced to hip hop? ... ... But you can’t dance like that mama, or can you?” :lolo:
  • John Ross: “You can grab any chick into the row to dance with you and you don’t even have to know her!” :giggle:

I’ll be looking forward to many more updates! :spinning: You and your sister did an awesome job with this fanfic, Karin! :best: Please update soon! :jolly:

:ss11: HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU AND ALL YOUR FANFIC FANS :ss11:
 
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Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's much appreciated as always. :)

Presea, I'm glad you found the last update hilarious. :)
I agree with you about Bobby, it was totally his style to fight all those guys on his own and kicking their butt. I agree that it's pretty bad parenting to encourage your 16 year old to date someone who is 6 years older and Sue Ellen won't be happy when she realizes just how old Paula is. Right now she thinks Paula is like two years older than John Ross and that she would have been okay with. Then as for JR, he might have dated younger women on the show. But I bet you that when he was a teenager he was probably chasing after older girls too! ;)

Still I think there might be a double standard for boys and girls, because if a 16 year old girl dates a 22 year old boy I don't think people will raise as many eyebrows as if a 22 year old girl dates a 16 year old boy! :rolleyes:

Silvie, I'm glad you liked the disco scene. I wish we'd have snow for Christmas but it's all melted. Anyway I wanna wish you a :07:too.


Ms Southworth, I think we all enjoyed the big dinner and breakfast scenes at Southfork. They were a big part of creating that special family feeling that the show had. Good point about Bobby and Pam getting up early for breakfast. It would have made sense for them to sleep in after going out to party. Unless Rebecca woke them up early of course...:lolo:

I think Sue Ellen trusts John Ross to a point. Still someone has to pick him up after his date as he doesn't have a driver's license yet.

I'm glad that you found so much of the dialogue funny.

Moving on to tonight's update and since this will be the last update before Christmas I would like to wish you all a Happy Holidays. :sc::ss1::12::hanukka:

I won't be updating for two or three days. But I hope you will enjoy tonight's update:

At an ice-cream parlor in downtown Dallas, were Cliff, Afton and Becky sitting eating ice-cream. Cliff said, “I’m really glad that you called.”

“Well Becky wanted to see you and I have something important to tell you,” Afton said.

“What’s that?”

“Um…” Afton bit her lip. “You know my boy-friend Mario?”

“Yeah Mr. High society,” Cliff said in a condescending tone of voice.

“Cliff it’s not Mario’s fault he was born rich,” Afton scolded him. “Anyway he’s proposed and I’ve said yes.”

Cliff dropped a spoonful of ice cream on his lap. “Damn!” Cliff cursed.

Becky smiled amused and Afton shook her head, “Same old Cliff!”

Cliff started whipping his pants with a napkin. “I’m sorry, I just didn’t expect this!”

“Is that all you have to say?”

Cliff cleared his throats. “No of course not, congratulations, I hope you’ll be very happy!”

“Thank you Cliff!” Afton smiled happily.

However Becky did not look as happy. Cliff picked up on it, “So Becky you’re very quiet today. How do you feel about your mom getting married?”

“I…it’s okay…I guess,” Becky shrugged her shoulders before she smiled at Cliff, “Don’t worry Daddy, he won’t take your place. I’m not even calling him father!”

Afton shifted uncomfortably. But Cliff didn’t notice as he smiled broadly at his daughter.

“That makes me real glad to hear!” Cliff hugged Becky.
 

Karin

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Miss Ellie was standing outside of Southfork, doing some gardening work when Donna walked up to her. “Hello Miss Ellie.”

“Oh hello Donna good thing you came.” Miss Ellie held up two different flowers as she asked, “Do you think this flower or this flower would fit best here?”

“That one,” Donna pointed toward one of them.

“Okay,” Miss Ellie nodded before she took out the flower from the pot, sat down on the ground and started digging a hole for the flower. “So what’s on your mind?”

“Well Margaret and I were talking a little bit last night about how school is about to start and… “

Miss Ellie looked up with a sad expression on her face saying, “Oh no you are not leaving already are you?” Miss Ellie put the flower down. “I know you have a life in Washington but it’s been so nice to have you here and…”

“Well that was what I wanted to talk to you about,” Donna said, as she gave Miss Ellie a helping hand pulling her up from the ground. “You see I’m going to work with the preparations for the presidential election this fall and the Democratic Party would like me to be based here in Texas for six months.”

“Really?” Miss Ellie’s facial expression brightened. “So you’ll be in Austin?”

“Yes and no,” Donna replied.

“I think you’ve lost me dear,” Miss Ellie said.

“Well I need to work on state politics and though some of my assignments are in Austin I have arranged to be based here in Dallas so…”

Miss Ellie smiled. “But Donna that’s wonderful. Then you and Margaret are staying here at Southfork or?”

“Well we would like to, if you don’t mind.”

“Mind?” Miss Ellie smiled. “Donna nothing would make me happier.”

“Are you sure?” Donna asked. “I mean I will be taking many business trips and Margaret will need lots of babysitting and…”

“Donna don’t be silly. Clayton and I love watching her. She is such a sweet child and I’m sure Ray will be thrilled to have you two around.”

Donna bit her lip, “Well I hope so. I haven’t talked to him yet.”

“Well then talk to him. I’m sure he’ll be thrilled,” Miss Ellie smiled warmly. “Oh Donna this is the most wonderful news. I’m so happy to have my family back home again,” Miss Ellie said and the women exchanged a hug.
 

Ms Southworth

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Good point about Bobby and Pam getting up early for breakfast. It would have made sense for them to sleep in after going out to party. Unless Rebecca woke them up early of course...:lolo:
Oh yeah, interruptions from their daughter would have been just what they needed after an eventful evening and night! ... ... ... NOT!!! :rolleyes::D

I think Sue Ellen trusts John Ross to a point. Still someone has to pick him up after his date as he doesn't have a driver's license yet.
I agree :) ... ... (but I just sort of wished that she would have cut John Ross some slack and let him go for a soft drink, an ice cream, or something like that with his date prior to picking him up! :p )

Moving on to tonight's update and since this will be the last update before Christmas I would like to wish you all a Happy Holidays. :sc::ss1::12::hanukka:
Happy holidays to you, @Karin Schill! :13:I hope that you're having a very merry Christmas with your family and loved ones! :ss6: :ss3: :ss5::20::ss7:
 

Mrs Bobby James Ewing

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Great updates and Happy Holidays Karin! :)I am looking forward to reading more of your awesome story after the holidays.:)
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Great scene with Cliff, Afton, and Becky at the ice cream parlor! :)

Funny statement yet immature behavior from Cliff (if you consider that he wants to win Afton back): “Yeah Mr. High society,” Cliff said in a condescending tone of voice." :giggle: :rolleyes:

And it was interesting that Afton supposedly thinks that Cliff only referred to the size of Mario's wallet (instead of his behavior)! :oops: Why is it that Afton can't pick up on her fiancé's flaws? :think:

It was hilarious that Afton's news made Cliff drop his ice cream in his lap! :lolo: And Afton's response (“Same old Cliff!”) gave me a flashback to when I watched "Dallas"! :)

I was thrilled to see that Cliff (who really hasn't been a dad for very long) picked up on his daughter seeming somewhat sad and quiet! :yep: Thus, I was happy that Cliff asked about Becky's feelings in regards to her mom getting married! :wink@
 

Ms Southworth

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World class scene between Miss Ellie and Donna! :jolly: I loved the setting, their conversation, the various descriptions, their ability to pick up on each other's feelings, etc.! :clap: It was really easy to imagine Barbara Bel Geddes and Susan Howard playing out this scene! :tv: Definitely 10 out of 10 points from me! :spinning:

Probably my overall favorite line of this scene: “So what’s on your mind?” :loveit: Now, if this line hasn't Miss Ellie written all over it, I don't know what does! :loveit: A close runner up is this line from Miss Ellie: “I think you’ve lost me dear”! :) And this line was third on my list: “Oh Donna this is the most wonderful news. I’m so happy to have my family back home again.” :group:

No wonder Miss Ellie was sad about the prospect of Donna and Margaret going back to Washington! :( Up until a few scenes ago, I was too! :( Thank goodness for the Democratic Party needing Donna working her magic in Texas! :up:

Beautiful writing, Karin:
  • “... ... Then you and Margaret are staying here at Southfork or?”
  • “Well we would like to, if you don’t mind.”
  • “Mind? Donna nothing would make me happier.”
I'm looking forward to Donna's talk with Ray! Hopefully, he'll be just as excited! :fondle:

Please update soon! :best:
 
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Karin

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Thank you everyone for the feedback. It's always appreciated. :)

Ms Southworth, thanks for the holiday wishes. My Christmas was ok thanks. :)
Well I think Cliff can be a bit immature at times. Maybe it's because he's so ego that I interpret him that way.
Anyway it's not the first time he's dropped ice-cream on himself... :lol:

I'm glad you enjoyed the Donna and Miss Ellie scene so much and that you could imagine it being played out by the actresses. :)
I had a feeling you would enjoy that scene as you've requested more one on one scenes with Miss Ellie...

Sanda, thanks for the holiday wishes. Also it's after Christmas so I'm back with more of the story. :)

Okay so here's tonight's update:

It was right before eleven at night when Sue Ellen parked JR’s car outside of the multiplex in town. It was all dark outdoors except for the lights cast from the neon lights from the cinema and the streetlights. Happy couples started walking out from the cinema but John Ross was nowhere to be found. Sue Ellen sighed, “I still don’t understand why you insisted on coming into town with me!”

JR turned to her and replied, “Because it’s late and downtown Dallas is no place for a lady!”

“How sweet you are concerned about me,” Sue Ellen replied in a sarcastic tone of voice showing that she really didn’t mean it. “Now tell me JR darling, if that’s so why were you never worried about me when I was out by myself getting drunk in some bar, while we were married?”

“I was.”

“Right you were!”

“No I’m serious. I was worried sick, why do you think I had you locked up in that Sanitarium?”

JR’s words stung her like a bee, as that time was one of the unhappiest in her life. Yet she couldn’t really avoid the topic now when he had brought it up. So she said sadly, “I thought it was to punish me!”

“No,” JR shook his head. “I was desperate. I really thought it was for your own good.”

“Yeah right, that place was like a prison that I had to break out of.”

“I remember,” JR said emotionally. “It was the day John Ross was born. I was so scared I’d lose you both and I so regretted leaving you at that place.”

“You did?”

“Yeah, I prayed to God that you’d live and I made a vow to myself to be a better husband if you did.” JR confided in her and Sue Ellen couldn’t help but smirk as that explained why JR had suddenly taken an interest in her after John Ross’ birth.

“Well I guess I didn’t make it easy for you.” Sue Ellen replied, as she remembered how she had resisted all of his advances at the time. She’d just been too hurt to want him then.

“No you didn’t, but I deserved it for the way I treated you when you were pregnant.”

“I’m not gonna argue with you there. Those months were some of the unhappiest of my life,” Sue Ellen said wistfully. “Yet it was worth it to have John Ross.”

“Yeah that boy sure is something,” JR smiled.

“He is the best thing that came out of our marriage!”

“Definitely,” he agreed. “I must say that I’m proud over the young man he’s turning into. You’ve raised him well.”

“Thank you JR,” Sue Ellen smiled. “But I didn’t do it alone. You were there for his formative years.”

“I know that but I still feel like I’ve missed a lot in four years. I mean he was only 12 when he moved to England to live with you, so a lot has happened in his life since then.”

“That’s true,” Sue Ellen nodded.

“So why didn’t you tell me about his girlfriends when we talked the other day?” JR asked bluntly.

Sue Ellen shifted uncomfortably before she said, “Because I thought that it was up to him to tell you himself.” Sue Ellen then cracked a smile as she added teasingly, “Because don’t tell me that you’re not looking forward to have that father-son talk with John Ross.”

JR laughed, “Oh I think it’s a little too late for that now. So why don’t you fill me in instead?”

“You really wanna know?” She asked.

“We’re talking about my boy here, so of course I do,” he smiled.

“Alright I’ll tell you, so what do you wanna know?”

“Well how many girlfriends has he had?”

“Three that I know of,” she replied.

JR whistled appreciating, “Three, that’s not bad.”

Sue Ellen gave him an annoyed look, “And this is why we shouldn’t have this conversation.”

“What did I do?”

“Oh please, like you don’t know, the next thing you’re gonna tell me how he’s a chip off the old block.”

“Well what’s wrong with that?”

“You’re such a womanizer,” she sighed.

“Don’t throw stones Sue Ellen. As I recall you weren’t exactly faithful to me either when we were married…”

“That’s not fair. I only had affairs because you pushed me to.”

“I did no such thing!”

“Yes you did, by your constant neglect. If you had given me half the attention you’re giving to me now I would never have cheated and you know it!”

“No I don’t know it, besides you can’t blame me for your actions.”

“Can’t I?”

“Oh Sue Ellen please can you just drop it?”

“Why?”

“Because I didn’t come here to argue with you,” JR sighed.

“So why did you come then?” Sue Ellen asked. “To sweet talk me?”

“No to discuss our boy,” JR steered the conversation back on track. “So why don’t you tell me more about his girlfriends?”

Sue Ellen sighed, as she didn’t want to have this conversation with JR. But since he was John Ross’s father he had a right to know. So she went on. “Alright, the first was named Sandra. He met her at a summer camp Don sent…”

“Whoa wait a minute now, John Ross goes to live with you and you allow that idiot husband of yours to send him off to summer camp?”

“JR criticizing my husband is not gonna help…”

“Well it’s not my fault he doesn’t like kids. So why didn’t you send John Ross to Southfork over the summer instead?” JR asked and Sue Ellen went quiet. “You know that I would have loved to spend more time with our son!”

“I know,” Sue Ellen sighed.

“So why didn’t you?” JR asked. “Was it because you were afraid he’d stay here if you let him leave England...”

“No,” Sue Ellen shook her head before she reluctantly added, “John Ross didn’t want to go visit you at Southfork.”

“He said that?”

“I’m sorry but yes he did.”

“Ouch,” JR looked hurt and not finding the words to comfort him Sue Ellen just changed the subject.

“Anyway like I said, John Ross met his first girlfriend at Isle of Wright where he went to the Scouts Summer camp when he was 13. He asked me if she could come visit us. Since he was just a child in my eyes naturally I said yes. I later wish I hadn’t. You’ll see it turns out Sandra was two years older than him and she seduced him in our house.”

“Are you sure about that?” JR asked. “I mean 13 is pretty young…”

“I know, but yes I am sure. You’ll see I had the misfortune of walking in on him and Sandra sleeping in the same bed one morning. That’s when I knew!”

JR laughed, “Oh My God, that’s embarrassing!”

“Tell me about it,” Sue Ellen said sarcastically.

“I meant for John Ross…”

“Naturally you did,” Sue Ellen said. “Anyway I didn’t handle things too good. I forced him to break up with Sandra, thinking that would solve the problem. But John Ross just moved on to the first available girl at school.”

“Well figures, asking a teenage boy who’s started to have sex to give it up is like asking a kid in a candy shop not to eat the sweets!” JR chuckled.

“True,” Sue Ellen laughed. “Even Don and I could see that so that time we didn’t interfere but let the relationship run its course.”

“Smart choice,” JR agreed. “So how long did it last?”

“The rest of the school year,” Sue Ellen replied. “Poor John Ross was so bummed when it ended that Don and I agreed to send him on a language trip to Ibiza instead of back to summer camp!”

JR laughed, “Well I’m sure he bounced right back after that one!”

“What do you mean by that?”

“Oh like you don’t know.”

“Know what?”

“Those trips are just an excuse for kids to booze and get laid.”

“No they’re not, they happen to be very educational…”

“Oh really so what exactly are John Ross’s grades in Spanish?”

“Um…not all that great but…”

“My point exactly,” JR grinned and Sue Ellen looked pensive, as she wondered for the first time just what her son had done that summer in Spain. However she didn’t have too much time to think it over before JR went on. “So now tell me about his last girlfriend?”

“Well John Ross met Kate at school. They were together until April, so it was about one and a half year!”

“But that’s like a lifetime at that age!” JR reflected. “I guess she must have been something?”

“Yeah she was. I liked her better than the other girls. She wasn’t a bimbo like Mandy…”

“Mandy?”

“Yeah John Ross’ second girlfriend was named Amanda.”

“Well how about that,” JR said appreciating. “Just like…”

“The Winger Tramp I know!” Sue Ellen sneered.

“I was gonna say daddy’s first wife,” JR defended himself.

“Right you were!”

“Besides I don’t get why you’re getting so worked up over one of my ex mistress, don’t tell me you’re still jealous of her?”

“I’m not jealous, if anything I pity her. Since she really thought she had a chance with you. But I of course knew you better.”

“That you do, there was no way I was gonna leave you for her,” JR confirmed.

“I know,” Sue Ellen smiled. “Besides I made a small fortune because of that girl…”

“What do you mean?”

“Have you already forgotten about Valentine’s lingerie?”

“No but I thought you sold the company…”

“I did to a large profit!” Sue Ellen smiled. “All because of her, the Valentine girl…”

“Nah, I think you ought to give yourself more credit. You can be a very smart business woman when you want to…”

“Well I have to be to beat you at your own games, don’t I?”

“I guess, still I don’t like it when you gang up on me. I prefer it when you’re on my side…”

“So do I to be honest,” Sue Ellen admitted.

“Good, so how about if the two of us pick up where we…”

“JR I thought we were talking about our son,” Sue Ellen cut him off, as she didn’t want to hear his propositions.

“We were?”

“Yes, I was telling you about his girl-friends.”

“That’s right,” JR grinned. “I wonder how his date with Paula went?”

“I’m sure it went ok. Even though to be honest I don’t really like that he’s dating college girls already. I think it would be better if he stuck to girls his own age. I mean Melissa seemed like such a sweet girl…”

“Too sweet, I bet John Ross is not interested in waiting around for her to put out.”

“Probably not, but I still think it’s a shame as I bet she’s nicer than the girl he’s dating now.”

“You don’t know that until you’ve met her.”

“Maybe not but my gut feeling tells me this girl is trouble!” Sue Ellen sighed but JR was not worried, since he knew that boys would be boys and that would never change…
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Well I think Cliff can be a bit immature at times. Maybe it's because he's so ego that I interpret him that way.
I'm right on board with you! :gotcha: I see Cliff as being somewhat immature at times too! His ego seemed to get in the way a lot, and he often failed at considering other people's feelings! Just think of the numerous times he hurt Afton or Pam in one way or another!!! :( On an emotional level, of course! :hat:

I'm glad you enjoyed the Donna and Miss Ellie scene so much and that you could imagine it being played out by the actresses. :)
I had a feeling you would enjoy that scene as you've requested more one on one scenes with Miss Ellie...
You definitely made my day with the amazing Miss Ellie scene! :up: It was perfect in so many ways! :dance:
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Outstanding scene with Sue Ellen and JR! :loveit: I loved everything about it! :kiss: You really managed to capture the characters of Sue Ellen and JR in a perfect way! :yep: Especially with all the detailed descriptions! :clap: It was real easy to imagine Linda and Larry acting out this scene for real! :dance:

It just cracked me up that JR insisted on playing a chaperone, when Sue Ellen was going to pick up John Ross from the movies! :giggle: But it did give them a good chance to talk (and JR a chance to get on Sue Ellen's good side)! :wink@

Since it was a real lengthy scene, it makes it a bit overwhelming to give feedback (and it may have put you to sleep before I'd be done). Instead, I want to hightlight some of my favorite lines:

I loved these lines from Sue Ellen:
  • “Now tell me JR darling, if that’s so why were you never worried about me when I was out by myself getting drunk in some bar, while we were married?” :think:
  • “[John Ross] is the best thing that came out of our marriage!” :kiss:
  • “Because I thought that it was up to him to tell you himself. ... ... Because don’t tell me that you’re not looking forward to have that father-son talk with John Ross.” :innocent:
  • “Oh please, like you don’t know, the next thing you’re gonna tell me how he’s a chip off the old block.” :rolleyes:
  • “That’s not fair. I only had affairs because you pushed me to. ... ... Yes you did, by your constant neglect. If you had given me half the attention you’re giving to me now I would never have cheated and you know it!” :r&r:
  • "Anyway I didn’t handle things too good. I forced him to break up with Sandra, thinking that would solve the problem. But John Ross just moved on to the first available girl at school.” :(
  • “I liked her better than the other girls. She wasn’t a bimbo like Mandy…” :) :(
  • “I’m not jealous, if anything I pity [Mandy]. Since she really thought she had a chance with you. But I of course knew you better.” ;)
I loved these lines from JR:
  • “I must say that I’m proud over the young man [John Ross's] turning into. You’ve raised him well.” :yep:
  • “So why didn’t you tell me about his girlfriends when we talked the other day?” :think:
  • “Oh I think it’s a little too late for that now. So why don’t you fill me in instead?” :D
  • “Well how many girlfriends has [John Ross] had?” :think:
  • “Whoa wait a minute now, John Ross goes to live with you and you allow that idiot husband of yours to send him off to summer camp?” :eek:
  • “So why didn’t you? Was it because you were afraid he’d stay here if you let him leave England...” :confused:
  • “Well figures, asking a teenage boy who’s started to have sex to give it up is like asking a kid in a candy shop not to eat the sweets!” :D
  • “Those trips are just an excuse for kids to booze and get laid.” :cool1
  • “I was gonna say daddy’s first wife” :p
  • “Good, so how about if the two of us pick up where we…” :wink@
Great descriptions from this update that just makes a unique difference: :loveit:
  • ... ... a sarcastic tone of voice
  • ... ... words stung her like a bee
  • Sue Ellen couldn’t help but smirk as that explained why JR had suddenly taken an interest in her after John Ross’ birth.
  • ... ... as she remembered how she had resisted all of his advances at the time. She’d just been too hurt to want him then.
  • JR whistled appreciating
  • Sue Ellen gave him an annoyed look
  • Sue Ellen went quiet
  • Sue Ellen sighed
  • JR looked hurt and not finding the words to comfort him Sue Ellen just changed the subject.
  • Sue Ellen looked pensive, as she wondered for the first time just what her son had done that summer in Spain
Keep on going strong, Karin! :best: I'll be hoping for another award winning (and lengthy) update from you soon! :jolly:
 
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Karin

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Thank you for the feedback Ms Southworth. I am glad that you loved the latest update and that you think I had managed to capture the characters. I love JR/SE though so writing for them usually comes easy to me. :)

Okay so here's tonight's update:

Meanwhile inside of the multiplex. John Ross and Paula came walking out from the cinema with their arms wrapped around each other. “Wasn’t it a good movie John Ross?”

“Yeah. But I enjoyed the parts we didn’t see better,” John Ross said, nibbling at her neck.

“Me too,” Paula smiled and they exchanged a kiss. “So where do you wanna go now?”

John Ross looked at his watch which was past eleven, silently cursing to himself as he remembered that his mom was gonna pick him up at 11. “Um…I’m sorry babe, but I have to get going.” Paula looked disappointed and John Ross continued. “But I’d love to see you again.”

Paula smiled. “Me too, so you want to get together tomorrow and…”

“Um… I can’t. I promised Chris I’d do something with him,” John Ross replied, before adding hopefully, “But maybe in the week if you ain’t busy?”

“Well I got a stinking summer job…” Paula sighed, “But how about Friday night, 10 o’clock?”

John Ross sighed a little at the prospect of having to wait another week to see her again. But as he looked at her cleavage and long legs in the mini skirt he realized that she was worth the wait. So he said, “Sure. Where do you wanna meet?”

“On the Rocks sounds ok?”

“A night club?” John Ross asked.

Paula looked at him. “Yeah it’s not a problem, is it?”

“No, not at all,” John Ross lied. “I’ll see you then.”

“Yeah see ya,” Paula said and gave him a kiss before leaving. John Ross smiled as he walked away towards JR’s waiting car.
 

Ms Southworth

Telly Talk Dream Maker
Great update with John Ross and his date! :)

It may just be me, but John Ross comes across as being somewhat immature! But maybe that was your intention, Karin? I mean to "show" the age difference between the two? :think:

I'm surprised that Paula is so understanding! I mean ... if a guy had said to me what John Ross said to Paula (“Um…I’m sorry babe, but I have to get going. ... ... But I’d love to see you again.”), and if the guy on top of that also had cut the night "short" by leaving so soon, I would (even at her age) - without a doubt - question the guy's true intentions. But then again, Paula and I may be looking for something completely different in a relationship! :think: It just seems weird to me to say "see ya" after having spent a couple of hours in the dark at the movies! If they'd have dinner prior to the movies, things would be different, IMO!

If I had been Paula in a similar situation, I'd cut my losses at this point, especially when the guy said that he had other more important engagements than me, not only on this particular night but also in the days to come. John Ross doesn't seem sincere, first of all because he said "um" twice and secondly also questioned meeting at a night club next week). Who would do that (if you're really into someone)? :confused:

Of course, it's possible that I'm reading way too much into this, but anyway ... ... that's the way I've interpreted the scene so far! :)

It's a bit disappointing that Sue Ellen and JR didn't get to meet Paula today, but maybe that's because you've got something else up your sleeve, Karin? I can wait, you know! :dance:

Please update soon! :best:
If you plan to take some days off to celebrate New Year's, then I wish you a HAPPY NEW YEAR in advance! :ny6: :ny11: :ny7: :ny1:
 
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